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Posted: 9 years ago
Sonal... 🤗
This is amazing yaara... Just read in a go... 😳
I think I have seen a little glimpse of this show Daam on Zindagi... 😕 😆
But I loved your concept much better... loved SwaSan to the core... and their kids... awww they are so cute... 😳Their first meet was amazing...😉
Lolz... me loving the Dadi... she is going to be cupid ..right... 😆😳
Rofl... you have me in fits when I read Laksh is Ragini's brother...awesome...
Will be looking forward for more...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love

Sonal... 🤗
This is amazing yaara... Just read in a go... 😳
I think I have seen a little glimpse of this show Daam on Zindagi... 😕 😆
But I loved your concept much better... loved SwaSan to the core... and their kids... awww they are so cute... 😳Their first meet was amazing...😉
Lolz... me loving the Dadi... she is going to be cupid ..right... 😆😳
Rofl... you have me in fits when I read Laksh is Ragini's brother...awesome...
Will be looking forward for more...

thanks nitz😃
n Ragya r now in a sanskaari relation...Finally😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Dhokha Ya Daam Tha

Part 4

(In SwaSan's room...swara was doing packing when sanskaar enters)

Sanskaar - swara

Swara(absentmindedly)-hmm

Sanskaar(he held her hand n stopped her)-sit here

Swara - sanskaar what r u doing abhi mujhe bacchon ki bhi packing karni hai we will be late

Sanskaar - ssshhh(he put a finger on her lips)now listen to me...I love U n i know u r the best tumne hamesha sabka accha socha hai agar kisi ko tumhari kadar nhi toh problem un logo mein hai

Swara - sanskaar aap galat

Sanskaar - ssshhh lemme complete...I know u r upset but just remember one thing I m with u...ALWAYS

(swara smiled n hugged him tightly)

Swara - sanskaar aap itne acchey kyun hain

Sanskaar - aisey hi(they both smiles n swara again starts packing)main help karoon

Swara - no I'll do it

(In ...Ved enters)

Ved - Ragini Ragini

Ragini - what happend Ved...why r u shouting my name

Ved - Dr Maheshwari said yes...she is coming to India

(AP , DP and Laksh enters)

Laksh - really Ved...I mean does she said yes

Ved - haan haan...ohh god m so happy

AP - bhagwan bhala karey us doctor ka

Ragini - hmm maa may god bless her n her family too

(Next day at Indira Gandhi International Airport)

Aarav - wow di India is so beautiful

Saloni - duffer we r still on the airport...dad he is mad

Aarav - dad see na dii is calling me mad

Sanskaar - saloni bhai chota hai na

Saloni - sorry dad

Aarav - badi daadi mom dad see there...daadu

(they all saw RP n they all went to him)

RP(he touched his mom's feet)-namastey maa

(Sanskaar n Swara to bent for his blessings)

RP- ab chalein

Saloni n Aarav - chaliye daadu

(they all sat in the car n car starts moving on delhi's road)

Swara - my country my India(n she smiled)

(they reached MM n suju welcomed them by doing aarti...swara touched suju's feet)

Sujata - jeete reh...swara beta u r fine na

Swara - ji mom

(everybody went inside)

Sujata - swara sun

Swara - ji mom

Sujata -tujhe yahaan dekhkar achha laga aur haan hum sab tere saath hain...tu kabhi bhi akeli nho hogi samji

(swara felt happy n hugged sujata)

Swara - thanks mom

Sujata - ab ja fresh ho ja main dinner lagwati hoon

(after the dinner)

RP - so sanskaar n swara...beta when r u going to Mumbai

Sanskaar - tomorrow papa n hum sab ja rahe hain

RP - sab kyun u said na you'll handle that construction deal now what

Sanskaar - yeah papa I'll handle it but still u have to come

Sujata - chaliye na bacchon ke saath thoda aur waqt reh lemgey

RP - thik hai

(next day they all reached Mumbai n they were going to a bungalow which they take on rent)

(They all were in car n swara was looking outside the window...her city her MUMBAI...she rested her head on the seat n closed her eyes...she saw some images infront of her eyes)

Kyun kho gayye woh lamhe

(she saw a college's canteen n two girls having their lunch...they both were enjoying)

Kahaan kho gayye woh lamhe

(a guy was giving a bouquet of fresh roses to swara n swara smiling shyly)

Rishton ke woh silsiley

(the two girl's hi fied each other)

Kahaan kho gyye woh lamhe

(then she saw a big wedding hall)

Zara sa sochogey ruk ke agar tum

Ja na paogey mujh se alag tum

(Voice - u know what the problem is...u don't have a character paisey ke liye kisi bhi had tak jaa sakti ho na tum)

Lambi dupaheron mein pedon ki chaun kya bhool paogey tum

(Another Voice -plzz don't do this I really love u...main mar jaongi)

Jhooth hai sabhi saccha kuch nhi

Dhokha ya daam tha

(Voice - toh mar jaao n i said get out...Another Voice - is waqt main kahaan jaungi)

Na jaana tumhe na samjha tumhe

Dhokha ya daam tha

(she remembered her cunning yet victorious smile)

Naata na tha

(we r frds)

Rishta na tha

(frds nope we r soul sisters)

Khwaab tha toot gaya

(voice - get out I said)

Pagal ho tum chodo zidd ye

Khwaab tha toot gaya

(Voice - we were frds...another voice - exactly we were but not any more)

Rastey alag manzil juda

Phir rona kya

(Voice - hamein laga ki tum hamari bahu ban sakti ho but i was so wrong tum toh hamari izzat ko nilaam kar do...swara aaj se tum hamari zindagi ka hissa nhi ho arey tum toh is layak hi nhi ho woh toh hamarey bte ki wajah se tumhe apna rahe the tumhara rishta maanga warna hum tumharey aage haath failayein arey ho hi nhi sakta tumhari aukaat hi kya hai kahaan tum aur kahaan hum log)

Hmm kyun kho gyye woh lamhe

Hmm kahaan kho gyye woh lamhe

(she remembered that she fainted on the road)

(a tear falls from her eyes n it fell on sanskaar's hand...he looked at swara n placed a hand on her shoulder...swara opens her eyes)

Sanskaar (in her ear) - r u okk

Swara - hmm

(they all reached their bungalow...they all had their dinner n went to their respective rooms)

(In swasan's room...sanskaar came out from washroom after changing n saw swara who was watching the moon...sanskaar goes to her n hugged her from back n gave a kiss on her neck)

Sanskaar - moon is so beautiful na

Swara (she placed her hands on his) - hmm...after 12 long years m watching this beautiful sea

Sanskaar - that's why we took this bungalow na i know mywifey loves sea(n he starts planting soft kisses on her bare back)

Swara - sanskaar yeh aap kya kar rahe hain

Sanskaar (with a mischievous smile) - loving my wife (he winked at her n picked her up in bridal style)

Swara - sanskaar aap bohot shaitaan ho

sanskaar - thanks for the compliment sweetheart

(n he starts walking towards the bed)

(At Shekhawat Mansion...In Ragini n Ved's room)

Ved - ragini m so happy finally Dr Maheshwari is coming

Ragini - hmm Ved m feeling so relived...I just hope woh jaldi se treatment start kar de

Ved - hmm...n yeah tomorrow I have a meeting with Karma's MD

Ragini - ved tomorrow we have to go to the hospital...aap kaisey

Ved - ragu my meeting is at 11 am n doctor's appointment is at 3 pm...so u don't worry I'll be there

(ragini nodded in a yes n placed her head on Ved's shoulder)

Ragini - I hope everything will be all right

Ved - yep everything will be all right

Edited by SONAL30 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I sooo want ki Ragini tadpe... But bichari uski beti... Uske mom ke karmo ki saza usko mil rahi hai...
Such an emotional update...
Loved it Sonu
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Posted: 9 years ago
that song part was cruel. very well done.
and i love the swasan scene.
thanks for the pm sonal.
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Posted: 9 years ago
swaSan back to their home city...
spend a quality time..

nice..
continue soon..
thanl you for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manasie23

I sooo want ki Ragini tadpe... But bichari uski beti... Uske mom ke karmo ki saza usko mil rahi hai...
Such an emotional update...
Loved it Sonu

thanks mansie😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: medhasankar

that song part was cruel. very well done.

and i love the swasan scene.
thanks for the pm sonal.

thanks medha😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

swaSan back to their home city...

spend a quality time..

nice..
continue soon..
thanl you for the pm

thanks Jidnyasa😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Is that girl in song ragini

What had happened with swara

Thanks for the update
Keep writing

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