SwaSan FF : Dhokha Ya Daam Tha (Part 4 updated on Page 25)

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Hii frds...its me Sonal again...I know i still have 2 stories to complete but my SS...(My Only Wish) it has only two chapters left which I'll update before Sunday

So here I m back with another concept n this time its about Swara n her journey...of course the story is about SwaSan but it mostly about Swara n her journey

The story has SwaSan Swaragini a little bit SwaLak but mostly its about Swara

Her journey from Swara Bose to Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari

Her journey from a orphan to a world's famous cardiologist

N for the first actually not first second time in my life I'll try to update it on daily basis

So the title of my FF is

" Dhokha Ya Daam Tha"

N no prize for guessing it's inspired from one of the best pakistani drama😆

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Prologue

Place : Dubai

Venue: Dubai's No 1 Hospital

A 33 year old girl was standing near the window of her cabin...she was watching the beautiful rain n thinking something

Girls's monologue - Rain...the most beautiful creation of god or should I say a way to shower his love on his childrens.I still remember those beautiful rainy days which I had spent in Mumbai (she took a deep breath) MUMBAI my birth place , a place which is still close to my heart , a place which taught me how to live , how to survive n how to break (a lone tear escaped from her eye) Kehte hain zindagi sabko dusra mauka deti hai mujhe bhi mila but m still confused what was my fault...wasn"t the first chance enough...par main hi kyun...I know life is all about struggles but why always me n m not even complaining because Past is Past n my present is the most beautiful part of my life (suddenly her phone starts ringing n after seeing the caller ID a small smile starts playing on her lips...she picked up the phone)

Girl-hii sanskaar

Sanskaar-where r u wait r u still in the hospital

Girl-I was busy...a critical surgery...but still m sorry

Sanskaar-u better be...now plzz come back Aarav and Saloni waiting for u

(suddenly aarav snatched the phone)

Aarav-mumma where r u today is my 5th b'day na

Girl-I know baby n mumma is coming n don't trouble dad n dii...mumma loves u

Aarav-I love u too (n he gave the phone to his dad)

Sanskaar-now come soon

Girl-yeah m coming n sanskaar I love u

Sanskaar I love u too shona

(they disconnected the call n that girl took her hand bag n goes to the window)

Girl-i think i should close this window otherwise paani andar a jayega (n she again watched the rain n said)I m Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari , world's one of the best cardiologist who has everything ... I m successfull , I have a loving husband two adorable kids world's sweetest in-laws inshort a perfect family n m damn happy but still jab bhi peechey mudkar dekhti hoon toh ek naam yaad ata hai RAGINI aur sirf ek sawaal

"DHOKHA YA DAAM THA"

So , here is the prologue...shall I continue😃


NOTE : hey guys daam is a urdu word n it means trap😃

Edited by SONAL30 - 9 years ago
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INDEX

Prologue - above
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sonu what about jealousy SS?
I hv no idea abt dat pak novel
so I'm excited fr ur story 😃
Prologue se it sounds interesting ⭐️
aww SwaSan hv kids 😳
errr Ragini? look like Swara vs Ragini milega 😛
me waiting fr next part 😳
Edited by MusicMyLife. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sonal this sounds interesting! And haan u better update your other stories or else mera tujhe haunt karna pakka hai... please update jaldi kariyo and pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: MusicMyLife.

res
unres
Sonu what about jealousy SS?
I hv no idea abt dat pak novel
so I'm excited fr ur story 😃
Prologue se it sounds interesting ⭐️
aww SwaSan hv kids 😳
errr Ragini? look like Swara vs Ragini milega 😛
me waiting fr next part 😳

i have completed it in afternoon na😆
Chk 2nd or 3rd page
N thanks for liking it😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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M looking forward for ur ff..
Firstly I seriously gt confuse with the title n was abt to ask what's this daam ?? But then I guess u knew that already...
that ur readers gonna ask this question !! ;)

Coming to the prologue..
Loved it..
Swara is on peak !!
N sawasan cute kids..
Now what ragini did :/
Waiting for next chap curiously..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg... sonal... yeh kya hei? kya kia tumne? tumne acha nahi kiya sonal.. this is not fair... tumne ek 20 saal ki swara ko 33 year wali women bana diya tumhare story mein? sonal I was kidding yaar. . is this swaragini ff? tum sawsan fandom chodkar swaragini fan bangayi? jo bhi ho Mr. Laksh Maheshwari ko nahi boolna.. uske alawa meri zindagi complete nahi hogi.. I will kill you if you forgot him.. The main suspense is that where is Ragini.. can I guess? she is behind the bars.. am I right? .. chodo mere bakwass... sorry dear.. after reading a new story my analysis is weird. . your concept is superb dear.. I love your ff daastan. I was a silent reader and admirer of that ff.. I love your stories.. but I have a request please update earlier. you are very lazy to update the ff.. and I think you have to update Ts also na? Please update fastly.. meim tumhara kahaniyom ka deewani hoom... this concept also fantastic as others.. so continue soon.. sorry dear if I said anything wrong or affect you.. you are an excellent writer. . continue soon. . continue the pm also.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Awesome Sonu,loved it a lot dear👏👏
SwaSan having kids that's so sweet yaar,awesome work😊😊
Pls do update soon and notify me through a PM whenever u update😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks dear😃

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