Originally posted by: taniks
Viji
Congrats on this ts , I think the greatest compliment to any writer is when da reader say the were so absorbed in the story then just couldnt stop until they finished the whole story. Let me tell u my hubby is getting a very late supper tonite cos off this story, I haven't even started the prep lol.I was so convinced it was ragini NVR in my wildest imaginations would u have put it down to be lakysh although i know he is capable.the suspense of the impending danger lurking around the house and it's members was chilling but the perceptive nature of swasan dey were on their guard to protect the other. U were brilliant at keeping the mystery going even with sanskaar fond recollection of memories off his and luckys childhood u NVR let up on the mystery , u write it not as a clue but just a happy and content man talking to his wife , fantastic.i thought u were excelled at romance and passion but heres a new facet to ur talent, u r multi talented. This ts is a magnificence display of the many genres u can write, the hauntingly suppressed emotions of love , the uncertainity of its future the nervous tension if two ppl very much in love was totally engrossing, the prayers and plans of both mothers , sujata who is wat u see is wot u get type of person but i love how u explored AP hidden face , i tell u in da serial i akso feel that she us a selfish person who has a cunning mind to be able to fool everybody into thinking she's a fair person , loved that u wrote her that way.second part was just bliss for me as swasan fan , swaras feelings , pyn , concern , fear for her husband was fabulous narrated , an acceptance off his meaning to her life was excellent. The romance in second part is as passionated as ever , u didnt deprive the reader of their gorgeous love story in order to unhold the mystery and suspense ,normally when an author is trying to focus on suspense theres a shortfall on the other genres in the storywhich as reader really irks me.i loved how u msintained that trust of swasan in each other , sanskaar always had it but swara not once waver in her trust for sanskaar gave me such a heart warming feeling cos thats by pet peeve with swara in da serial that she doesn't trust sanskaar as much as he trust her. The last part , to say was a shock to me is putting it mildly , I was flabbergasted to know it was Lakysh , my word!! Ur descrption of this monster thru swaras eyes was scary yet so vivid,i could imagine a pyscotic Lakysh whose fired by envy and jealousy , it was like picturing the devils spawn.wwonderful how u allowed sanskaar to grieve for the dead off His innocent lost love , he wouldnt be the person we all love if u NVR allowed that.sanskaar holding onto swara as Hus anchor while knowing his family will be devastated soon us a great indication if his faith and trust that she will be by his to help His family together in the future. Excellent vijji, loved it a totally gripping story that captures and holds onto the reader till the end. What an apt title so fitting with the context of the story
Mannat Har Khushi Paane Ki
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