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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: manasie23
OMG Shruti! Your OneShot was fabulous!
I loved how you mentioned the way Swara declared her love for hubbyji
And I also loved the seducing attempts of wifey and Sanky is just a buddhu does not want to recognise Swara's feelings even after her confession *facepalm*
And pura consummation scene padhte waqt I was like 'My Dil goes hmmm' ☺️
And Thanks for sending me a pm 😳
Love you for this Oneshot *GM activated*

Manasi 🤗

Thank you! Arrey what thanks for PM! Just glad you liked it, and yes I tried to imagine it another way but felt that Swara would have to give Sanskaar more than a clear signal after all he has been through with her.

Re GM- I apologise but I blame you all for activating mine! 😆

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: RoshiniManeet
Res...I know i will like it...so liked...
Will comment sooonnn...

My hands wont type...what should i do😳

Shruthi...its morning here, loads of my work awaiting me on my lappy, but i am struck at your OS, blushing a bright red and tons thanks that there is no one around me😆

Ecstasy is what I felt reading this. SwaSan onscreen will find it very difficult to measure up to what they are in our minds. Right choice of words, a details description on the aspects of their place of stay, description of Swara and her attire...all this literally took my breath away. It was as if I was in Shimla for a moment.

I had been to Shimla a couple of years ago with hubby. Loved the place like hell...roses and apples are something I will never forget there. I remember standing in the balcony of our hotel that stood overlooking a huge apple Orchard. I have never an apple tree before and it took me few minutes to drink the sight in front of me. Rotang pass is another place I had enjoyed a lot.

The OS was marvelous. Loveliest of words describing SwaSan's love, lust, shy and union. I will book mark this page. With luxji more around our Swara, I will need this to tide over the upcoming episodes.

Shruthi: A 16+ tag was much required yaar😉😆

Roshni 🤗

You are amazing yaar- you had liked it even before reading it 😆; you make me feel very good. Well as long as you liked it. I love Shimla too and OMG- I have the best memories of Rohtang. We went with my Mamu a couple of years ago and my mum, Mama and I climbed up quite a way- it was the most amazing place. I just saw SwaSan somewhere in the Himalayas, secluded and romantic. Hope it lasts you in dire episodes which may come up and thank you for such a nice response!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer
Oh My Shruti ur OS was so damn hawt!!☺️☺️
Loved it seriously!
I was literally blushing at Swara's antics and Sanskaari Sanskaar.
An awesome one yaar!

Thanks so much! I can't actually believe I wrote this but oh well- you have to write when the inspiration hits right?!

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Errrmmm...😉 😉 ☺️ ☺️

A nice "hormonal" blast to start the day! 😳 Tastefully done, Shru...

Viji 🤗

😆😆 Gosh yes, its morning for you all! Well it was very late when I finished it and I have insomnia at the moment so am surviving on 3-4 hours sleep, which will make today interesting. I am glad you put the tasteful bit in or I was going to worry it was awful! Am slightly in shock at myself 😳

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: The.Lannister
Usually I read all your work early in the morning before leaving for work. Now as luck would have it I had to read THIS one in a crowded local train☺️ I did think of waiting till I go back home but then 8 hours is a little too long. So read it, angling my cell in such a way so no one can read what I am reading😆 and trying to hide my blushes at the same time😆😆

To write such a scene without making it vulgar in itself deserves the highest of praises. It felt so natural & so right between them with just the right amount of awkwardness. Sanskaar is such a sanskaari baccha...clothes inappropriate for the weather?? really sanskaar?? 🤣

"Muze time nahi, mera pati chahiye"☺️

"It was as if they floated in the heavens above, with the stars, inseperable & blissful, joined through eternity as only soul mates can be" SIGH! What a description👏⭐️

Shruti 🤗

Reading this on a train 😲🤣 Poor you but at least others are getting as embarrassed as I am!! You know, seriously, reading the comments is now making me blush too as I was whilst writing it but now I am slightly more mortified! Oh dear, too late now though.

I am so relieved you said you didn't find it vulgar, I was so anxious to do that but the way I think about SwaSan is so beautiful, there isn't any vulgarity ever and I hoped that would come out. Saskaari Sanskaar's lines- 😆.

Thanks for making me feel better Shruti 🤗

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Shivangi

@Annei123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Wow ... Such romantic OS 😳

Loved it !!!!!

Keep writing more 😉

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Thanks so much! I can't actually believe I wrote this but oh well- you have to write when the inspiration hits right?!

Yeah right!
And the biggest fact is, that when u write it doesn't appear vulgar. It looks as if it's sumthing normal and not sumthing to feel disgusted about, which many people do think. This itself is a big achievement and praise as writing such a sequence with beauty is a really tough task and u skillfully did it!
So gr8 work and I'm proud of u Shruti👏( Main abhi bhi blush kar rahi hun☺️)

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Annei123
Wow ... Such romantic OS😳
Loved it !!!!!
Keep writing more😉

Thank you! More writing will come but perhaps not as bold as this:), this was an unusual trial 😳

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deep_

@deep_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Shru what have u done 😲 ⭐️ me blushing 😆 its awesome 😳

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: Luv_Ishveer

Yeah right!
And the biggest fact is, that when u write it doesn't appear vulgar. It looks as if it's sumthing normal and not sumthing to feel disgusted about, which many people do think. This itself is a big achievement and praise as writing such a sequence with beauty is a really tough task and u skillfully did it!
So gr8 work and I'm proud of u Shruti👏( Main abhi bhi blush kar rahi hun☺️)

You've summed it up perfectly! See people reading this will find it unbelievable but I am actually really prudish in real life, even my mum jokes about it. But the point is that when 2 people love each other so much their passion isn't vulgar or disgusting, and I genuinely didn't think like that at all whilst writing. If there was no passion, they wouldn't be this epic couple?! This was actually a big step for me to try to express something so personal but why not with a couple I love as much as SwaSan. I'm glad people seem to be getting the deeper connection beyond the physical here. What's your name btw? Really grateful to you for having this dialogue with me:)

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