Swaragini FF- 'WHEN WE LOOKED BACK pt 7p 13 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Smilelicious

This is interesting 😆
I have some doubts though which i think will get cleared with your updates 😊
Update soon 😳


Yaaa ... Sure ... Thanksss a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 1
Ragini took palak from laksh , and told him to go n get ready .

Ragini:"beta palak we will go to papa na, thn he will drop her princess." And kissed palak's cheek . very moment a smile took palak's face.

She took her to sanskaar's room to find sanskar still sleeping .
Ragini: "get up sanskar ," she removed his blanket "time dekhie ap" n sanskar rubbed his eyes to see ragini standing with palak.
Sanskar took palak his his arms " my princess u woke up soo early mom dint allow you to sleep na"and made fake sad faces to ragini.
Ragini:"if u both r done with ur melodrama so plzz hurry up and join us all for breakfast. "Palak come I'll make u bath.
Palak:" mumma I m grown up now, I'll get ready on my own" n she ran to her room . ragini n sanskar simply huffed.
Ragini was abt to go wen sanskar stopped her.
Sanskar:"ragini it is only because of you that palak." Ragini holded his hand
Ragini"no sanskar she is my daughter and you don't need to thank me" sanskar smiled n she left.

Palak's room

The little girl somehow managed to close the door. N ran to her bed n saw here n there to make sure no one is watching her n crawled down her bed. And took something out. Tears filled her eyes.
Palak hugged a photo of swara
Palak" maa where r u y u left me alone I m missing u alot, mumma also misses u on top of that papa..

N with her little hands she wiped her tears.

Laksh's room
Lakshmi:"if u would hv listened to me day day u won't hv faced all that." She said with guilt of something seeing swara n sanskar's wedding pic in hall.
Mumbai

Swara in airport
She was waiting for her flight. Her heart was scared to face that city who took everything frm her.
She was crying thinking of all wat she faced and wat had happened with her.

5 years before frm now

Laksh:" u promised me that ull be mine swara now u have to" swara widened her eyes and was in shock.
Swara:"laksh tum pagl ho gae ho ab sb kuch to theek h ,u only said ull accept ragini" she said with tears.
Laksh;"ya bt remember I asked to to make me a promise of giving me wat I'll ask for."
Swara:"but this is all nonsense laksh I m sanskar's wife. I love him and we have moved forward in our relation" she wants to make him understand. But laksh was all obessesd with her and can't see her going away frm him
Laksh:"no swara I know u r lieing for ragini n I know u love n only me" n he hugged swara tight. She struggled a lot to get her free frm him bt he embraced her so hard.

N suddenly she threw him away. Cz of that she fall and fainted.
Laksh got scared . he took her MAHESHWARI house and called everyone.

Seeing swara in this condition sanskar rushed to her.
He took her frm laksh and took her to their room .they called the doctor.

All questioned laksh bt he smhw managed to manipulate things.

Doctor came after examining swara.
"Mr. Sanskar y r u so irresponsible take her proper care, she is carrying ur baby." That very moment lighted sanskar n whole family except laksh.
Sanskar:"kya really I m gng to be father" he went to everyone asking tht and finally hugged laksh expressing his happiness.
Just then ragini came.
"Wats gng on here everyone luking quite happy." She entered with her bags .
Sanskar went upto him" u know I m gng to father , swara mom n u .. " he holded her shoulder "u gng to be massi" ragini's eyes filled with joy of tears
"Kya hamari swara maa bnne vali h" her joy was eternal.
Laksh was dieing within him he cnt see all this happening.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh shit niyati
what an interesting update
and its clear that palak is swasan daughter raised by ragini..

so its raglak only
shukar hai jaan mai jaan aai...

but that was quite awesome

few things are clear and few are not..
so raglak have no kid?

plz tell me are they even married????
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Niyati great prologue and liking it so far! I'm intrigued - Ragini lives with both Sanskaar and Lakshya? Very interesting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This story seems so intresting! Keep it going! 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: yusu1993

oh shit niyati

what an interesting update
and its clear that palak is swasan daughter raised by ragini..

so its raglak only
shukar hai jaan mai jaan aai...

but that was quite awesome

few things are clear and few are not..
so raglak have no kid?

plz tell me are they even married????


Ohhh thanksss yusu 😳
I m glad u liked it
Hmmm u like the twists I guarantee it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gewels

Hi Niyati great prologue and liking it so far! I'm intrigued - Ragini lives with both Sanskaar and Lakshya? Very interesting...


Ohhh thanksss alot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: XxDevineDivaxX

This story seems so intresting! Keep it going! 👍🏼

Thanksss dude
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 2
Swara came back to reality as she heard the announcement for the flight to Kolkata is abt to board. She picked her laguage a
N went to flight. She took her seat and saw her phn, that hd wallpaper of her n sanskar's wedding photo. She only know how much she was missing him.

MAHESHWARI HOUSE

"laksh I think u r not supposed to go to office today" ragini commented on seeing laksh standing lifeless without reacting. That made laksh come to senses and he simply nodded and sat for breakfast

"Ragini plzzz hurry up , bring palak soon I m getting late for office" sanskar said getting up frm the table.
"Ya wait I'll get her now" n she went upstairs . she saw her sitting in room with swara's photo n crying.

"Palak dnt love ragu mumma" she said n said making sad face beside her. Palak turned to her n hugged her.

"No mumma I love u very much" then she broke the hug n saw the photo " but mumma I love a bit more maa" to which ragini's eyes filled with tears. Seeing her innocense n she hugged her.

"Mumma y maa don't come to meet me" ragini was now finding it hard to handle palak "beta lets go n hv bath papa is waiting for uu" she wiped palak's tears n made her to get ready

They both came down n saw the Gadodia's coming in . laksh n sanskar greeted them n ragini ran to sharmishta n hugged her.
"Maa how r u" sharmishta smiled to her " I m okk ragu"
Ragini then turned to shekar " baba n u" shekar embraced her daughter it was almost an year they left Kolkata n shifted to hoogli after wat swara did.
Palak took sharmishta's hand " nani where is maa" as she was told by everyone that her maa lived with her nani n she then went behind her " maa, maa ... Maa" her voice finally sounded crackling n she turned to sanskar. "Papa maa dint came" sanskar hugged her little princess , he cnt see her crying . but he always cursed Him fr marrying swara ,trusting her and her love tht turned to b fake. He might hv forgiven her for wat she did with him. Bt cn neva forgive her fr doing this with palak.

"Palak no beta u r my Supergirl na, come I'll drop u school" n she took her out.

"Maa y swara did tht" ragini cried. Sharmishta hugged her " ragu u r strong beta , swara was stupid fr doing tht. God won't ever forgive her. But u be strong fr everyone . " sharmishta consoled her.

But ragini was still unable to believe tht swara could do tht it was 5 years but she accepted only fr all bt her heart never accepted.

Laksh ran to his room . locked him inside. He cried " I m sorry swara , I ruined ur life god won't ever spare me. I deserve worst . I was so immature that day. How could I do tht bt I did . may be I was possible of making amends bt I cnt. N sanskar he will hate me after knowing n so all I cnt do tht." He regretted his acts.

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Swara came off the airport n saw Kolkata , the city she left 5 years ago, the things tht it gave her, n the things it took. She cried of remembering her little princess whom she handed to ragini.
Her thoughts were distracted by a call frm her attendant. ." yes mr. Malik , m here, where I m supposed to go now" she asked " mam, u go to hotel radison organizers will meet u there.
She hunged up the call n took the taxi to hotel.

IN HOTEL

"Malik I hope u hvnt disappointed me" sanskar looked at malik " I told u I wanted the best star of country for this important deal" malik nodded.
"Yes sir she is the best moreover she holds a no. Of titles." Malik said.
"I trust u malik thts y I dint intrigued abt anything" sanskar said. They went too the room. But it was empty. Sanskar glared malik as he is gone now.

"Is this the star , " malik held his head down " that's peak of unprofessionalism." Sanskar added.
"Sir she might be around we will go n see u wait there" malik said n left with others to find swara.

MAHESHWARI HOUSE

Ragini went to her room to find laksh sitting on bed.
"Laksh y u dint went to office today" she held his hand he jerked his hand n turned away.
."I was not in mood" he said.
"I know laksh u neva wanted to marry bt u did n u know I neva forced u to give me the rights tht every wife deserves. Bt I cnt hold this bitterness anymore" she turned to left . but laksh held her hand n hugged her tight n cried in her arms " I m very bad ragini I deserve curses I m sorry to wat I did to u " ragini hugged him bck.

HOTEL

sanskar was waiting wen he heard sm sound.
He made urgg noise tht alerted swara who was trying to open the washroom gate after bath.

"Who is outside , it may be a stocker, I should search fr smthng to teach him a lesson " she started looking around fr smthng n her eyes spotted viper. She took it as her sword.

Sanskar being equally frightened took the vase near by as he was not sure frm where the sound came he faced the main door backing washroom gate. Swara slightly opened the door n was abt to hit him wen sanskar holded her hand making them loose their balance n viper n vase felk on ground n so we're they. She was dug in her chest.
Swara saw Him. Sanskar saw her. Their eyes locked they were not able to believe they were seeing each other.
."yes it was him her love , her life" she debated in her mind.
Sanskar's eyes filled with teaes. He holded her n stood to sit on floor on hugged her tight as it was her last hug. His embraced her so hard tht she could feel his beats n so him. Both cried like anytjinf. It was 5 years n now finally they were in front of each other.

But smthng tickled sanskar n he threw swara n got up.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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aisa kia kardia laksh nai?????????
i am scared...
jab sanky ko pata chalay ga tab kia hoga ?
and jab ragini ko pata chalay ga tab kia hoga is a bigger question she will hate laksh ..
she has raised palak like a mother ..

this is very interesting behna..
keep up the good work...
you are doing awesome

i am so scared for ragya...

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