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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --Anna--

Hi Sush!

Read the SS in one go. Love the concept. Bringing a new girl in for Sanskaar who has a back story with him is so good. Maybe we can start seeing more of Sanskaar Kirti scenes so that Swara can get jealous!

Would love to know what happened in the past - because clearly Sanskaar does not seem to remember anything about Kirti.

Thanks for the PM, Love! 😊

Anna

omo!!!anna u read it finally...thanks for reading it re.i m still not getting time to update it...all stupid things going out here welfare meet etc etc
ya sanskar doesnt recall who is kirti n in coming times all will know y(quite filmy reason😆)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

This is getting very interesting 😆
Sanskar and Kirti have a past 😲
Update soon 😃

will try dear...thoda hectic chal raha hai
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very well written, interesting.👏
What is the unsaid truth?
How come Kirti knows about Sanskaar?
What is that accident?
What happened to Swara?
Why Sanskaar forgot Kirti?
😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
the promo was super. Pls continue soonIs kriti his girlfriend?
Edited by gayu6 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry I don't know abt this part 2 and promo...when u updated?and really very very interesting...swara may be jealous...she has to...I want she shud get jealouse in show also...jealouse wala pyaar mujh bahut pasand hai...continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pressu

Very well written, interesting.👏

What is the unsaid truth?
How come Kirti knows about Sanskaar?
What is that accident?
What happened to Swara?
Why Sanskaar forgot Kirti?
😕

sabar rakhoji
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 3:



sanskar office:

s:pata nahi kyun but I feel I have seen swaras friend somewhere just cant place where ...anyways i hope swara is having a good time ...itna sab honeke baad she atleast deserves this much

uttara on her way to college:iska matlab kirti di wahi ladki hai...bhaiya ya bade papa ko batane se pehle mujhe kirti di see baat karni hogi .

swara-sankars room:

s:hmm sameer se teri baat hui thi
k:haan abhi kuch der pehle
s:toh meri bhi baat karade na
k:koi zarurat nahi hai...uss idiot se toh tu durr hi reh
s:ab kya ho gay ...phir se tum dono ka jhagada...
k:yaar chodna mera aur mere bhai ka yeh roz ka drama hai...woh mujhe irritate karne se kabhi nahi thakta...chod...tu mujhe yeh bata ki scene kya hai
s:matlab
k:matlab yeh ki yeh laksh ...i mean whats he like now...mujhe toh ajeeb si vibe aa rahi hai...y does he keep looking towards u in lovely dovely expression...well i understand he did love u at some point of time but he knows that u r married that to his brother so
s:he wants me back into his life
k:what!!!!n do u too???
s:no kirti kabhi nahi
k:dekh swara u know u can share ur deepest secrets with me...
s:sach mein yaar i dont want to.i m so over him...i have forgiven him but surprisingly i dont love him...i havent told this to anyone but sometimes i feel did i actually loved him truly to begin with.or it was just infatuation
k:yeh toh tuhi keh sakti hai...
s:y the hell i m so confused.pehle bhi maa ne mujhse jab pyaar ke baare mein kaha tha i was still clueless
k:yaar tere dil mein kiske liye kya hai yeh toh mein nahi janti par itna zaroor kahungi ki sacha pyaar agar zindagi mein dastak de toh usse ignore nahi karna swara kyunki jab woh pyaar aapki zindagi se chala jaye toh uska dard kya hota hai yeh mujhse behtar koi nahi jaan sakta.isliye apne feelings ko parakh aur samjh ki tera dil kya chahta...aur jab tu aisa kare na toh yeh sari tensions maa baba,ragini sab kuch bhol jana tabhi tujhe clear pata chalega
s:kaise pata chalega yaar mujhe toh pata bhi nahi ki pyaari wali feeling actually kya hoti hai jo lakshya ne kaha woh meine maan liya ,ragini ka pyaar pyaar kam junoon tha...toh koi aur toh tha nahi jo mujhe kuch bata sake
k:hmm toh mere sache pyaar ki feeling ka defination sunegi
s:haan bol
k:ok suppose ur hungry n in restaurant n after a long wait the waiter brings in u the food
s:hmmm
k:that wala feeling u get when u see the food coming out to ur table...that feeling when u get due to a person thats a true love feeling
s:tu naa
k:sach keh rahi hun try once ...abhi try karne ko nahi keh rahi but fursat mein karna
s:haan meri maa
k:accha yeh bata sanskar jiju kaise hai
s:kaise hain matlab
k:dekh meinetujhse yeh puchna chahti hun ki how he is like with u
s:mere saath ...woh toh mera dost hai
k:haan pata hai meri maa par tujhe woh kaise treat karta hai
s:yaar sanskar toh mera itna khyal rakhta hai...mujhpar trust karta hai.aisa nahi hai ki meri har baat ko blindly maane par meri baat ko samjhata hai aur apni raye bhi soch samjh kar deta hai...aisa mere saath kabhi nahi huaki mein kissi par aankh band karke vishwas karun par pata nahi kyun mujhe aisa lagta hai ki agar waqt aye toh sanskar par aankh band karke vishwaas karsakti hun
pata hai kirti...ragini ke dhoke ke baad jaise meri zindagi hi khatam ho gayi thi...mera hasna muskurana jaise koi history ho...par sanskar ne apni sachi dosti se mere har ghao ko bhar diya
kirti agar aaj woh nahi hota naa toh mein kabhi bhi uss dard ko bhul nahi pati...jab uske saath hoti hun toh aisa lagta hai jaise khudse dubara mil rahi hun...kabhi kabhi aisi baate karta hai ki meri hasi rukti hi nahi...rukti
k snaps her fingers in front of her :swara meine tujhse sanskar ke baare mein pucha aur tune toh kuch aur hi bata diya
s:matlab
k:yahi ki tujhe kya mehsoos hota hai...aur bata naa
s:tu kuch bhi bolti hai ab mein jati hun lunch ki preparation karti hun
k:how blah...abhi abhi toh tu jiju ka topic shuru hua hai aur tu
s:kirti mujhe kitchen mein jana hai
k:mein bhi tere saath chalti hun
sujata:arey kirti beta tum yaha kitchen mein kya kar rahi ho kuch chahiye hota toh mujhe bata deti
k:nahi aunty mujhe kuch nahi chahiye mein bas yaha swara ke saath ayi hun taki uske saath zyada time bita sakoon phir shaam ko baadi bhi jaana hai
sujat:arey baadi kyun mein tera samaan parvati ji se puchkar yahan mangwaliya hai ...tu athe hi rahegi
k:kyaa!!!!par itne kam time mein apne...aur mein yahan kaise reh sakti hun
sujata:arey kyun nahi waise bhi bhaisa ne bhi toh subah permission de di hai na...hai ki naa swara
s:ji mom
sujata:acha chori yeh bata tu lunch mein kya khayegi mein abhi parineeta ko bata ne wali thi toh tu bhi teri pasand bata de
kirti:nahi aunty mera aisa kuch nahi hai ...
sujata:acha thik hai chori...haan parineeta mein kya keh rahi thi...mhare chori ki pasandita sabzi banegi
kirti:aap gatte ki sabzi bana rahi hai

swara:kirti tujhe kaise pata ki sanskar ko gattee ki sabzi pasand hai
sujata:(in mind:arey waha yeh chori ko toh mhare chore ki pasand na pasand bhi pata hai...maare sanskaar ke saath toh yahi chori sahi hai):haan kirti thare ko kaise
kirti:woh...woh magazine mein what i like n dislike ka section tha naa usime sanskar ke fav dish ke baare mein padha tha
sujata:thik hai acha mein chalti hun parineeta bana dena khana
kirti:swara tu bana naa
sujata:swara kaha bana sake hai maare chore ke liye sabzi ek kaam kar tu hi baana dena uske liye
kirti:main????
sujata:haan haan
swara feels bad n kirti notices this...sujata leaves the kitchen
parineeta:swara hum 5 min mein aate hai
kirti:toh chal shuru ho jaa
swara(all sad):mein?par mom ne toh tujhe kaha hai naa toh tu hi bana de aur waise bhi mein kaha ban paungi
kirti:arey tune pehle bhi yeh sabzi banayi hai jab hum hostel mein the...kistarah chupke se waha ke kitchen mein jaa kar dish banya karte the
swar:lekin kirti tu toh janti hai naa mujhe
kirti:haan haan tujhe reciepe yaad nahi...toh mein kaunsa sari reciepes yaad karke rakhti hun...mein bhi toh diary lekar ghumti hun ...ruk mere purse mein hai mein le kar aati hun

kirti came into her room to search her belonging for her small reciepe diary which she always carries with her so that if anyone asks her to cook she can atleast look into her moms reciepes...n today swara needed one of her moms marwadi reciepes ...
kirti:ahh found it
as soon she picked the dairy a photo came out of the book
kirti was shocked to see it
kirti:hey bhagwan how can i be so stupid .agar kisne dekh liya toh




she hid the pic inside her purse





years ago:

three girls in an auto
girl1:bhaiya jaldikijiye naa
girl2:woh nikal naa gaye ho ...aur tu bas kar yaar kitna royegi
girl3(still crying):woh aisa kaise kar sakta hai
girl1:kyun nahi kar sakta ?tu duffer hai,tujhe hi late mein samjh aya par agar pehle aa jata toh yeh sab nahi hota
girl3:par woh mujhe chod kar kaise jaa sakta hai...agar mujhe samjh nahi aya toh usse kyun nahi ,tum logo ko bada saaf saaf dikta tha naa toh usse kyun nahi
girl2;band karo tum dono.acha hua ki tere bhai ne bata diya ki woh usse chodne jaa raha hai warna aaj toh...bhaiya bhaiya gadi ko uss bike wale ke samne le jaa ke roko
the guy had to put sudden brake to avoid colliding with the auto
guy1:abe pagal hai kya
guy2:yaar tu thand rakh
guy1:tu ruk mein abhi isse sabak sikhata hun
guy2:arey sameer ruk toh sahi
as sameer approached the auto to scold the driver he saw the girls coming out
both the guys were shocked to see them
guy2 gets all teared up seeing her n lowers his eyes so to hide his pain from her
sameer:tum log yahan...yaha kya?
girl3 avoids his question n runs toward the boy n hugs him tightly
the guy is speechless to find her in his arms so close to his heart
girl breaks the hug n holds the boys collar:samjhte kya ho tum.yun hi chalejaoge.dost kehte ho naa mujhe...toh dost ko aise chodkar jaate hai kya ...STUPID IDIOT ULLU KE PATHE,tum kaise nahi samjh paye ki mere liye tum kya ho ...manti hun ki meri flight take off hone mein time leti hai par tum toh smart the naa toh phir tum aise bewakoof kyun bane .puri duniya ko samjh aa gaya aur tumne socha ki meri zindagi mein tumhari koi ehmiyat nahi .pagal ho tum.ek baat tum samjh lo mujhe kabhi chod ke jaana mat agar koshish bhi ki naa toh tumhare tange tod dungi...you ...you duffer ...i...I love you...i love you Sanskar...bahut pyaar karti hun tumse
sanskar wipes her tears n happily hugs her tightly;I love u too




Edited by sushups - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very interesting concept..
I love to read your story..
Loving the character "kirti" and sanskar's past with her is also very well written ..
will wait for next update 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Pls continue soon. Eager to knw how they ll react nw n want to knw swasan reaction.
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Posted: 9 years ago
what if anybody find the photo in the house

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