swasan ss-tumhi mera pyaar part 3 pg 16

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hi everyone
this is my second write up on swasan...well this one is kind of a result of my dream
this a short one just like my previous one
i m very lazy when it comes to writing n it took me two days to write it even though i knew exactly what to write
i will try to finish it in 2-4 sections
let me know what u think guys
will wait for ur comments😊




its after the puja and ragini memory loss drama n dance too

sharmishtha:shona...beta mein toh tujhe batana hi bhul gayi ki kirti ane wali thi aaj
swara: kya!!!ma apne kyun nahi bataya ab puja bhi khatam hone ko hai kirti ko bahut bura lagega mein abhi airport jaa kar use le ati hun
sharmishta :usne already taxi book kar li hai bas pahunchti hi hogi aur beta itna sab ho gaya meri dhyan se hi nikal gaya
dp asks takes leave with the family and asks swara to join as well
swar:mafi chahungi bade papa ...mujhe bas humare ek guest ko recieve karna hai uske baad mein aa jaongi
sanskar:thik hai mein yahin ruk jata hun.phir saath mein chal lenge
shekhar :nahi beta tum chinta mat karo mein khud swara ko mm mein chod kar aa jaunga...
sanskar :thik hai baba
dp:chale

everyone started to leave for mm
ragini was in happy mood as her plan had worked lakshya was irritated n murmured to sanskarr..meri baat mano bhai yeh memory loss wagera kuch nahi hota usse humari shadi yaad hai aur baki bhul gayi
sanskar:aisa hota hai lucky ek insaan kuch baatein chod kar baki baatien ybhul jata hai...doctor ne kaha na
lucky:muje toh doctor bhi
sanskar rolled his eyes its impossible to explain his brother
lux was cursing his luck ...when he finally wanted to annonunce that he wants to marry swara in entire baadi this had to happen

swara:maa pata nahi mein kya karun meine toh kirti ko bataya bhi ki meri shadi ho chuki hai pata nahi woh kaise react karegi
sharmishta:beta woh teri baat ko samjhegi akhir teri bachpan ki dost hein naa...teri zindagi mein jo bhi musibatein aa chuki hai usme usine tujhe sabse zyaada sambhala hai
swar:yahi toh problem hai maa woh meri best friend hai aur meine usse yeh baat nahi batayi...yaha tak ki jab lux aur meri shadi hone wali thi tab bhi yeh baat nahi batatayi
sharmishtha;par shona tune toh phone kiya tha naa usse
swara:haan maa meine uske office mein phone karke bataya tha,uska phone unreachable aa raha tha par mujhe pata nahi tha ki usne waha ki job chod di hai aur unhone use mera message paas hi nahi kiya...aur jab pata chala tab meri aur lux ki shadi toot chuki thi
ab durga maa hi bachaye mujhe
kirti:ab kya kardiya tune jo maa se bachne ki pray kar rahi hai
swara turns to see kirti standing in front of her

kirti:

KIRTI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SWARA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

she just forgot everything and ran to hug her friend
swara:haye tu toh paris jaa kar aur khoobsurat ho gayi hai...
kirti:par tere chehre par kuch alag hi glow hai
swar:kuch bhi
kirti :shit yaar mein ab bhi late pahunchi durga puja ke liye ayi thi aur woh hi kahtam ho gaya...meri kismat kharab...stupid flight 12 hr late
swara:koi baat nahi kamse kam maa ke darshan toh karhi sakti hai naa
kirti:haan chal

they both take blessings in front of maa durga

swara was praying to maa to give her strenth to help her sister n take care of her ...and sanskaar...her friend who is stuck in her mess who had taken care of her...given her strength when she was weak.she wants all happiness for him but still cant get over the fact that he loves her n its difficult to explain him that she cant love anyone anymore...she no longer knows the meaning of love ...love was what she feels destroyed her.broke her heart into pieces
she does know that sanskar will never force her but she doesnt want to break his heart...whatever it may be she cant see him pained .cant see his tears.maybe she feels this way because he is her friend??

kirti was praying to maa for swara ...she had enough from their group of friends telling her its not good to tell swara the truth...she has been quiet for swaras well being for too long its been 7 years but no more she had to speak to her ...

kirti smiled looking her at friend still with her eyes closed praying to maa when suddenly she froze seeing a little change in swara which she hadnt noticed before.

swara opened her eyes to see a shocked kirti in front of her
swara:kya hua kirti tu mujhe aise kyun dekha rahi hai
kirti:swara yeh tere gale mein kya hai
swara understood she was talking about her mangalsutra: kirti yeh woh...main tujhe batana chahti thi par woh
kirti(her heart sank):u...u. g..got married?????
swara:haan yaar par tu sunn main puri baat batati hun .main janti hun tu mujhse upset hai par ek baar meri puri baat sunle
kirti in her mind:hey bagwaan ab mein kya karun .isse kaise samjhaon main isse kuch kehne ayi thi par yaha yeh sab ...
kirti kept quiet when swara narrated the whole story in front of her how ragini betrayed her how lakshya got married with ragini how she married lakshyas cousin evrything


kirti:itna sab ho gaya aur tune ek baar bhi mujhe bhanak nahi lagne di ki tu yeh sab jhel rahi hai .jab bhi mein tujhe phone karti thi tu yehi kehti thi mein mast hun...mujhe kayi baar shaq hua par tune kabhi nahi mana
swara:yaar maaf karde .ab tu ayi hai toh kya mujhse naraz hi rahegi
kirti :tu nahi samjhegi swara...mein tujhse naraz nahi hun bas dukhi hun.ab yeh sab chod tu mujhe yeh bata tu mujhe apne pati se kab milwa rahi hai
swara:woh sirf mera accha dost hai
kirti:jisse tune shaadi ki hai.toh tera pati hi hua naa...accha milana chod kamse kam uska naam toh bata
shekhar:swara...dekho beta mein tum dono ko disturb nahi karna chata par ab der hone lagi hai aur tujhe tere sasural bhi toh chodna hai naa
kirti:haan uncle aap isse le jayiye isski toh mein kal achi tarah se class lungi
swar:pakka mein jaon...
kirti:haan baba jaa ..aur haan jiju ko mera hi zaroor bol dena
swara:tu naa


as swara left ,kirti called sameer
sameer:pahunch gayi tu
kirti(sadly):haan
sameer:oye jhansi ki rani kya ho gaya ,itni udaas kyun hai
kirti :kuch nahi yaar mujhe shayad tum logoki baat manleni chaiye thi
sameer: bahut jaldi realize ho gaya tujhe.aisa kya hogaya jo tujme itni budhhi aa gayi
kirti:swara ki shaadi ho gayi hai yaar
sameer:kya!!!!yeh kab hua
kirti:mat puch yaar...ab kya karun
sameer:bas durga puja enjoy kar
kirti:woh bhi mere ane se pehle khatam ho gaya
sameer:abe kiska muh dekhkar gayi thi ...
kirti:tera!!!!
sameer:oh teri
kirti:kya kya socha tha
sameer:arey kyun socha tha?...itne saal ho gaye jab ,baat aj tak nahi uthi to ab kya zaroorat thi
kirti:yaar woh meri dost hai ...usse andhere mein rakhna thik hai kyaa
sameer:jaise woh humari dost nahi hai.yaar samjh ,uski shadi ho chuki hai ab toh yeh topic chod de aur waise bhi uss waqt hume jo thik laga swara ke liye humne woh kiya
kirti :aur agar yeh baat kal ko uske samne ayi
sameer:toh kal ko dekhenge ab tu jaa kar so jaa
kirti:chal bye


dadi :are beta tune ab tak kapde naa badle tune khana bhi khana hai naa
kirti:sorry dadi, woh call aa gaya tha naa iss liye
dadi:ek kaam kar tu .mu haath dho kar kapde badal le mein mishty se kehkar tere kamre mein khana bhej deti hun...itna lamba safar kiya hai. toh thak gayi hogi naa
kirti with smile:thank u dadi
as dadi walked away kirti opened her luggage to take out her night suit when her hand brushed with something under her clothes
she took the book out and sat on her bed placing it in her lap...for few minutes her eyes were stuck on the scrapbook
she opened the page and on the first page was

This book belongs to
Swara Bose
with swaras old picture with a cute smile


kirti turned the next page and saw her photo with swara,vidya,meera,anushka,, sharmishta aunty and dida ...her hands brushed the photgraph .she still remembers this photo was taken when aunty n dida had come to darjeeling to meet swara n how they had come to the restaurant to have dinner
it had cute cute notes about the trip n how dida had made the simple trip to restaurant a funny joy ride
she had kept swara scrapbook for years now n had thought to finally return it to her.it contained some beautiful memories , emotions and an unsaid truth
kirti was turning the next page but couldnt do it .she closed it and placed it back in her luggage n went to freshen up



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maheshwari mansion

swara was dropped by shekhar
swar:baba aap andar aao naa
shekhar:beta zaroor ata par itna waqt ho gaya hai. mujhe chalna chayiye
swara :thik hai baba
as swara entered the gate she saw someone standing near the main door
as she moved closer she saw sanskar standing there
swara:sanskar tum yaha kya kar rahe ho...
sanskar:woh
swara:tumhe mera intezaar karne ki kya zaroorat thi
sanskaar:actually mujhe tumhare bina ghar mein entry nahi mili
swara:par kyun
dp:hum batate hai swara
swara:bade papa aap...aap itni raat gaye?
other members excluding lakshya and ragini came near the entrance
dp:swara tum iss ghar ki bahu hone ke haq se tumhara griha pravesh hona baki hai
swara:par... bade papa... mera griha pravesh toh already ho chaka hai
dp:jante hain swara ,par us waqt tum sanskar ki bhyata nahi thi...woh ek natak tha...par ab jab tumhari shadi ho chuki hai toh tumhara griha pravesh hoga
lakshya was watching all this from balcony in anger
sujata:jiji iss sab ki ke jarurat hai pehle hi chori ki arti aur pravesh karwa chuke hai
ap:sujata agar tumhe is sab se koi apati hai toh swara ka grih pravesh hum khud karenge
once again swara and sanskar griha pravesh was done with all the rituals
dp:hum umeed karte haitum dono iss rishte ek mauka aur doge aur isse ek naye sire se shuru karoge
everyone blessed the couple n left for their respected rooms
swara and sanskaar started to climb up the stairs and then noticed lakshya standing nearby
swara suddenly holded sanskaar arm coming under sanskar protection
sanskaar understood and let her hold his arms till they passed lucky
lucky was about to say something when sanskar signaled him not to do anything stupid with his stern look
lux banged his hand on the wall and left for his room

sanskar swara room:

swara:thanks
sanskar:kisliye ?
swara:woh tumhne lakshya ke samne
sanskaar:ab tum itne choti cheez ke liye bhi thank u kahogi...aur waise bhi tumne promise kiya tha ki tum muje thank u nahi kaho gi
swara smiled then suddenly remembered:ragini kaisi hai ab
sanskar:haan woh theek hai .maa bata rahi thi ane ke baad use apne kamre mein aram karne bhej diya gaya.
swar:kitna kuch ho gaya naa sanskaar
sanskaar:hmm kabhi socha nahi tha.lucky ab bhi zid pakde hue hai ki ragini natak kar rahi hai
swara:usse kisi ke sach pe yakeen kaise nahi hota .pehle mein jhooti thi aur ab ragini..tumne dekha tha naa ki ragini ko hum sab ke samne shock laga tha
sanskaar:haan swara par lucky us waqt waha nahi tha...aur pichle dino mein jo kuch bhi hua hai ragini ki baaton par yakeen karna asan nahi hai
swara:matlab sanskar tum bhi sochte ho ki ragini natak kar rahi hai
sanskaar:nahi swara mein aisa kuch bhi nahi sochta.main toh bas yeh kehna chahta hun ki ragini ne sabka bharosa itni buri tarah se toda hai ki uski baaton par vishwas karne se pehle bhi sab 100 baar soch rahe hai
aur rahi baat meri toh mein nahi janta sach kya hai jhot kya hai bas itna janta hun ki ragini ko shock laga tha aur ab hum sab ko uska khayal rakhna zaroori hai...aise mamlo mein family ka support hona zaroori hota hai
swara was happy that sanskar was able to feel her pain for her sisters situation
sanskaar :swara toh tumhare guest aa gaye
swara;haan woh meri best friend kirti aayi hai.bahut saalo ke baad mili usse
sanskar:toh tum wapis kyun ayi tumhe uske saath time spend karna chahiye tha
swara:haan par bade papa ne aane ko kaha tha naa
sanskaar:main kal subah bade papa se baat karlunga ki tum kuch din badi mein raho taki apni dost ke saath reh sako
swaras smile widen:sacchi
sanskaar sadly:haan baba,ab tum fresh ho jao
past few days sanskar had sleepless nights feeling the emptiness in his room due to absence of swara but tonight he just didnt want sleep to come even though there was no emptiness any more
he just wanted to watch swara all night long
carving this memory in his mind and soul so that he can remember this all the time
how he wished that swara would love him back but he never had such luck in love
he never gets his love .even though its heart breaking but this time he think he is prepared to deal with it
atleast he can be in her life as her friend .he is thankful to the stars that swara though not in love with him didnt choose lakshya
it would have been a torture for him to see them together n pray for their happiness as he loves them
but one day will come when she will belong to someone else ..what will happen then .thinking of such possibility burns his heart.but deep down he knows that all he ever wants is swara to b happy even though it will give him a lifetime of sorrow


next morning:
lux was highly irritated with raginis sweet talks
it was putting a stiop in his plans to get back with swara n he now hated ragini to core...it was difficult fo him to share the same room n behav as if everything is alright...it was papas orders to behave polietly n normally with ragini but it is so not fare
he saw swara coming out of the room n pulled her towarda a pillar
swara:kya kar rahe ho chodo mujhe
lux :kaise chod doon swara...main tumse pyaar karta hoon
swara feeling disgusted :aur main tumse pehle bhi keh chuki hun ki main tumse pyaar nahi karti.aur tumhe abhi ragini ke paas hona chahiye
lux:nahi rehna mujhe uske paas.mujhe samjh nahi aa raha sabko uska natak dikhayi kyun nahi de raha
swara:kyunki woh natak nahi kar rahi hai lux
lux:aise hi kissi ki yaadash nahi chali jati swara aur yeh sab bakwass hai
swara:tum doctor ho?
lux:lekin swara manleta hun agar aisa bhi hai toh hum uske karnamo ki sachai usse kyun nahi bata sakte
swara:kyunki iss se uski halat aur kharab ho sakti hai.jab insaan ki yaadein usse chinti hai naa lakshya toh woh sirf apne aap se ladta hai...woh duniya ko normal nazar ata hai par uspar kyya betti hai wahi janta hai...ragini ki halat main achi tarah se samjh sakti hun...par tumse mein kuch expect karti hi nahi hun
kamse kam insaniyat ki umeed rakhi sakti hun naa
lux:swarta tum mujhe galat samjh rahi ho
parineeta bhabi:swaraaa
swara gets an oppertunity to get away from lux


in dinning area;

sanskaar:bade papa main apse kuch baat karna chahta tha
dp:haan bolo sanskar
sanskaar:bade papa kal raat ko swara ki friend paris se baadi aayi hui hai.main soch rha tha ki swara uski friend ke saath kuch waqt bitana chahegi toh agar woh kuch din badi mein jaa kar reh le toh
dp:swara
swara:ji
dp:dekho beta yeh ghar hum sab ka jitna hai utna tumhara bhi hai.tum chaho toh apni dost ko yaha rehne ke liye bhi amantrit kar sakti ho.woh yaha aye tumse mile ...isse hume koi apati nahi hai.dono hi ghar tumhare hai tum jaisa chaho kar sakti ho.aur hum tumhare atithi se milkar khushi hogi
saying this dp finished his breaksfast and left the table
swara called kirti and told her everything
kirti:main ek kaam karti hun tere ghar pe aakar pehle sab se mil leti hun rehna na rehna baad mein soch lenge...nayi?
swara:tujhe koi problem nahi hogi naa
kirti:ofcourse not sweetheart.tu shayad bhul rahi hai ki main bhi marwadi hun aram se handle karlungi.tu mujhe bas address de de mein pahunch jaongi
swara:tu rehne de main driver bhijwa deti hun woh tujhe pick kar lega
kirti :cool

kirti bought some sweets before leaving for swaras house
as she entered her house she was welcomed by the family
kirti took everyone blessings
ap:beta tumne apna naam nahi bataya
kirti:ji main kirti...kirti aggarwal
sujata searched if any signs of married in kirti n when she didnt found any in her mind:hey bhagwaan itni sundar chori upar se humare jati ki ...mhare chore ke saath iski jodi kitni sundar lagegi...maa apne shayad meri prarthana sunn li.
sujata:beta aaona baitho...tu mujhe bata tu kya peygi main thare liye lekar aati hun
all the ladies including swara were surprised with the extra sweetness sujata was showering on kirti
kirti:nahi aunty mujhe kuch nahi chahiye aap sab se mil liya yahi bahut hai
sujata :arey naa naa ab toh tu yahi rahegi teri saheli ke saath
kirti:waise jiju nazar nahi aa rahe
lux:hi mein lux
kirti:hi...haan ragini ke pati ..uss hisab se tum bhi mere jiju hi hue.nice meeting u. par swara ke??
sujata:woh agaya mhara chora
kirti turned towards the stairs with a wide smile n saw sanskaar coming down the stair ready to leave for office like everyone else.kirti smile vanishes a n confused surprised look takes its place.
as sanskar comes near she has blank expression on her face
swara to sanskar:isse milo yeh meri dost kirti
swara to kirti introducing sanskar:aur yeh hai...
kirti interupts and slowly says: San...SANSKAR MAHESHWARI



part 1--pg 1
part 2--pg 8
promo --pg 12
part 3--pg 16

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Massoudl

exactly what to write

sorry but i didnt understand ur reply😕
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nice story yaar :) Please Continue Soon :) Eager to read it :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The plot is very interesting. Can't wait to see what connection Kirti has with Sanskar. Good job. Update soon
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I'm in love with the concept, pleeease update sooon!
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Mindblowing loved the concept. But how kirti know sanskaar... eagerly waiting for updates
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Nice start. Bt y her smile went off at last😕?
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that was superb
continue soon
n do pm me
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Kirti knows Sanky??😲
and what was that Kiti and other friends hid from Swara???
Intriguing story... Do update soon

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