Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Hi Mili...🤗 🤗
First of all, thanks so very much for the dedication. I was so touched by that, dear.
Coming to the update, I liked it a lot. Sanskaar seems to have started plotting, influencing Ragini on how she can get closer to Lakshya. He seemed to be indicating that she should go with him, when Swara had gone to take that call on her mobile.
But despite all this scheming, Sanskaar is definitely starting to feel a genuine pull, a genuine concern and affection for Swara. His eyes kept looking at her when she was laughing and chatting on the phone, and he was so massively concerned for her safety, when he saw the speeding car almost on track to hit her. His quick thinking and reflexes saved the day for Swara.
Sanskaar's pure rage against the driver of the car was really intense. One could see the value he has unconsciously started attaching to Swara, by his reaction. And despite his fury, Swara could calm him down with a gentle pout and a smile, and a simple "Sorry". I think the day is not far when Sanskaar would be head over heels in love with her for real.
That dialogue between them, where Swara says he has saved her twice (once when her sari caught fire, and now when the car almost hit her), and therefore she promises to fulfill any favor he asks, was so interesting. The way he asked her, what can he do if she forgets, and she assures him, that she never, ever breaks her promises, and if at all she forgets, he has all the rights to remind her!! I wonder what this promise would lead to? 😉
The precap was so very interesting yaar. You left us on a cliffhanger!! Was that really Lakshya speaking to Swara? Has he fallen for Ragini/ been seduced by Ragini? Or was it just Lakshya talking under the influence of the drug which Ragini/ Sanskaar give him. (A twist from the serial. 😊)
So eager to find out! Please update soon.
Thanks for the PM, and once again, thanks for that lovely dedication.
Cheers.
Viji
viji aja...jappi pale behen...🤗
nw let me start...
first of all...dnt say tq fr this dedication...u r one of the regular readers and commenters of dis story (actually my both d stories) ...
I have said dis to so many tyms repeatedly bt yet m nt bored saying dis again dat i m a huge fan of ur write-ups. to add more to it, u r one of the writers of the forum who inspired me to write something...
dis was my frst story ever...
neither i had ever thought of wrtng smthng nor i was ever interested...but to my own surprise i did it...
and if m gtng even a sentence of appreciation frm a writer like u , whom i consider as one of ma inspirations dn it's a courage booster...
so thnk YOU...
and d last thing,,,,u alwys review my updates d BEST..
lots of love
tc
nd yaaa
cheeers too...😊
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