Koi Fariyaad (New SwaSan ff) *Part: 15* updated Pg: 47

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shamina

@Sakkiyah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#231

Nice update. Swasan scenes were awesome. Waiting for your next update

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1025621

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Posted: 9 years ago

#232

Hi mili thanks for the dedication yaar... Its first time that my name is in dedication list in SR forum... (Khushi ke aansu)
😭
and After so many days finally we have an update (again impatient viewer wali feeling)...
Great work...angry Sanskar is more hot ;)
Swasan moment is very nice.
And interesting precap.
Thanks for the pm update more soon... As always eagarly waiting for more.
Love u more ❤️

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#233

nice chptr dear
loved it
cont soon

thnks for pm

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Kashis

@Kashish_shine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#234

precap was shocking .. what that promise of swara will bring for her in future yet to be known

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950660

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Posted: 9 years ago

#235

Lovely update milli.. Waiting for ur next part !

Continue soon :))

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milisaini

@milisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: Nusrat-kabir
Nice ...please continue and update soon.. 😊

yup...thnks dear fr always liking nd commenting on this story...😊🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#237

Hi Mili...🤗 🤗

First of all, thanks so very much for the dedication. I was so touched by that, dear.

Coming to the update, I liked it a lot. Sanskaar seems to have started plotting, influencing Ragini on how she can get closer to Lakshya. He seemed to be indicating that she should go with him, when Swara had gone to take that call on her mobile.

But despite all this scheming, Sanskaar is definitely starting to feel a genuine pull, a genuine concern and affection for Swara. His eyes kept looking at her when she was laughing and chatting on the phone, and he was so massively concerned for her safety, when he saw the speeding car almost on track to hit her. His quick thinking and reflexes saved the day for Swara.

Sanskaar's pure rage against the driver of the car was really intense. One could see the value he has unconsciously started attaching to Swara, by his reaction. And despite his fury, Swara could calm him down with a gentle pout and a smile, and a simple "Sorry". I think the day is not far when Sanskaar would be head over heels in love with her for real.

That dialogue between them, where Swara says he has saved her twice (once when her sari caught fire, and now when the car almost hit her), and therefore she promises to fulfill any favor he asks, was so interesting. The way he asked her, what can he do if she forgets, and she assures him, that she never, ever breaks her promises, and if at all she forgets, he has all the rights to remind her!! I wonder what this promise would lead to? 😉

The precap was so very interesting yaar. You left us on a cliffhanger!! Was that really Lakshya speaking to Swara? Has he fallen for Ragini/ been seduced by Ragini? Or was it just Lakshya talking under the influence of the drug which Ragini/ Sanskaar give him. (A twist from the serial. 😊)

So eager to find out! Please update soon.

Thanks for the PM, and once again, thanks for that lovely dedication.

Cheers.

Viji

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Abyspecial

@Abyspecial

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Posted: 9 years ago

#238

Very nice. Waiting for the next part eagerly. Pls update soin 😳

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milisaini

@milisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: RAONE8
Nice update!!!
cont sooon

hey thnk u dear...😊

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milisaini

@milisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: sarathy321
Hai mili...nice update
Actually today I went through vm u created and I was thinking why u were not updating the ff
But when I opened forums again I was actually surprised. ...
Anyway it was a nice update. ..
Hope u bring the present story soon

hiii...
srry i was busy so it took a long to update d last part...
m happy dat u saw d vm and even i could surprise u with d update...
thnks fr liking and commenting...
nd yup frm nxt update i wud bring the present story...😊