Koi Fariyaad (New SwaSan ff) *Part: 15* updated Pg: 47 - Page 18

Originally posted by: abika

Nice update

Con soon

heyaaa...ta dear😊

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hi Mili...

I really enjoyed this update. You have described Sanskaar's pain, his anger, and desire for revenge so well. He is confident that Durga Prasad was the cause of Kavita's death, so he wants to inflict the same pain on Lakshya, of losing his love, that he himself went through.

You summarized the history of Swara & Ragini interaction with Lakshya very well, in that dialogue of Sujata with Sanskaar. So now the stage is set, for Sanskaar to stop SwaLak wedding. Wonder what role Ragini would play in this? 😊

Looking forward to the next update. You'd mentioned being caught up in a lot of work, hope it goes well.

hey...viji
thnk u fr d lovely comment
i feel happy dat u lykd this part
yes...i've really stuck in my work these days...
hope this all wud end soon...😊

Hey Im sending you a buddy request kindly accept that and pm me for the next part... Its really difficult to Wait for more update soon plz... 😉 😳

awesome... next update soon.. plzz...😊

Wow..awsum..loved it..read all the Parts in one Go..plzz update soon n do pm me wen u update the nxt parts in Future

Originally posted by: rayab_rajpoot

Hey Im sending you a buddy request kindly accept that and pm me for the next part... Its really difficult to Wait for more update soon plz... 😉 😳

yup dear...i hv alrdy accepted it...😊
dnt wry...ill surely send u pm fr ma further updates...nd
ill update soon..

Originally posted by: srilalitha

awesome... next update soon.. plzz...😊

yup...tq😊

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Good..

thnks dear...😊

Originally posted by: Nusrat-kabir

Nice one

tq😊

Originally posted by: Goldie93

Wow..awsum..loved it..read all the Parts in one Go..plzz update soon n do pm me wen u update the nxt parts in Future

yup..sure
nd thnks...😊