Koi Fariyaad (New SwaSan ff) *Part: 15* updated Pg: 47

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arathy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Nice update dear
Would love to see present again soon

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Ramya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Excellent update dear👏

Looking forward to read the next part😃

Pls continue soon

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milisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: ritikaagrawal
nice update😳

Tq ritika...😊

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milisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: The-Heart
Excellent update dear👏
Looking forward to read the next part😃
Pls continue soon

Thnks dear😊

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gayu6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

So he s gng to stop swalak marriage . He came back for revenge

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Gangaaaaaaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

awsum update...
looking forward..
cont really soon

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milisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: gayu6
So he s gng to stop swalak marriage . He came back for revenge

Yes...he is bk fr d sake of his revenge. ...

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milisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: SanaHolic
awsum update...
looking forward..
cont really soon

Hey ganga...

Tq so much dea...

I'll update soon

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1025621

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Nice work... Update more soon

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Hi Mili...

I really enjoyed this update. You have described Sanskaar's pain, his anger, and desire for revenge so well. He is confident that Durga Prasad was the cause of Kavita's death, so he wants to inflict the same pain on Lakshya, of losing his love, that he himself went through.

You summarized the history of Swara & Ragini interaction with Lakshya very well, in that dialogue of Sujata with Sanskaar. So now the stage is set, for Sanskaar to stop SwaLak wedding. Wonder what role Ragini would play in this? 😊

Looking forward to the next update. You'd mentioned being caught up in a lot of work, hope it goes well.