Koi Fariyaad (New SwaSan ff) *Part: 15* updated Pg: 47 - Page 14

wow just loved ur ud dear...really gud..waiting for next part...👏👏

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Very nice Mili. 😊 Really liked how you have shown their first meeting and how Sanskaar is drawn to Swara almost immediately. He was so concerned for her safety, he never bothered about his own hands while trying to tamp out the fire from her sari pallu. And he is not able to keep his eyes off her either. 😳 It was touching, the way he was so affected while she was applying first aid for his hands.

Eagerly waiting to see how they land up getting married. And what is Ragini's role in all this.

hey viji...
thnk u so much fr commenting..🤗
i m a big fan of ur writing nd if u lyk any for ma stories, it does matter a lot to me...
m really happy dat u lykd it...😊

Originally posted by: abika

Awesome update

tq dear😊

Originally posted by: Shikha022

Awsm update as always..

thnksss...😊

Originally posted by: sarathy321

Nice update

tq dear😊

Originally posted by: princess_tara

awesome update

tq 4 rdng and commenting as always...😊

Originally posted by: ritikaagrawal

read from starting...
amazing storyline...
superbly written😉

thnk u
it means a lot...😊

Originally posted by: sanabmw

wow just loved ur ud dear...really gud..waiting for next part...👏👏

heyaa a big tq fr rdng it...
🤗

Lvd it... Swasan first meet was awesum..

Excellent update👏