Koi Fariyaad (New SwaSan ff) *Part: 15* updated Pg: 47

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milisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: foresight
loved how you portrayed her confusion and pain. interesting first meeting 😃 looking forward to next parts

hey thnks...
ill update soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: swa291
Waiting to find what have happened in SwaSan life

I dont like a bit when lakshya calles her shona😛
Its reserved for sanskar 😉

yup...ill unfold the secret soon
heheh...nd dnt wry let yucky call swara whatevr he wnts to call her...it really dsnt matter..😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: sanabmw
hey...lovely ud...and suspens abhi bhi bana hua hai...so i hope next part main clear hoga k sanskar ne kiya kya tha...wonderfull story...waiting for next part..do ud soon👏

yup...nxt two parts me sab clear ho jayega...
tq fr lykng it...
tc😊

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milisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: abika
Awesome update

tq re...😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: The-Heart
Excellent update👏
Just completed reading last 3 parts
Hope mystery will unfold soon

Ramya

hii ramya...
yaa u'il cm to knw abt d secrets soon...
tq😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Shikha022
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waiting...
hahahah...jst kidding...
tk ur tym dear...😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

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Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Very nice Mili. 😊 Really liked how you have shown their first meeting and how Sanskaar is drawn to Swara almost immediately. He was so concerned for her safety, he never bothered about his own hands while trying to tamp out the fire from her sari pallu. And he is not able to keep his eyes off her either. 😳 It was touching, the way he was so affected while she was applying first aid for his hands.

Eagerly waiting to see how they land up getting married. And what is Ragini's role in all this.