Koi Fariyaad (New SwaSan ff) *Part: 15* updated Pg: 47

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arathy

@sarathy321

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

First of all thanks for the pm dear...
Well written with suspense...
Waiting for more twists

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Swathy

@SwathyS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Waiting to find what have happened in SwaSan life

I dont like a bit when lakshya calles her shona😛
Its reserved for sanskar 😉

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sana

@sanabmw

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

hey...lovely ud...and suspens abhi bhi bana hua hai...so i hope next part main clear hoga k sanskar ne kiya kya tha...wonderfull story...waiting for next part..do ud soon👏

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Ramya

@The-Heart

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Excellent update👏

Just completed reading last 3 parts

Hope mystery will unfold soon

Ramya

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

awsome update...cont soon

add me in buddy list & pm me

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milisaini

@milisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Came across your Fic only today, and read all parts 1--9 at one go. 😊 Very interesting take, differing from the serial track, and I am very intrigued by what happened between Sanskaar & Swara in the past, why they have come to the brink of divorce, why she is so angry with him.

You've also maintained the suspense over Ragini's role in all this. Lakshya seems to be immature and impulsive, wanting more to separate Swara from Sanskaar, rather than really being there for her out of Love.

Looking forward to read more. Do PM me.

Cheers

Viji

Hey frst of all tq 4 sparing tym nd rdng it...

I feel happy dat u found it interesting. ..

Yes u hv captured d crux of each of d characters correctly. ..nd abt ragini I won't say anything fr nw...

I ill snd u pms 4 sure rgrdng further updates. ..

Tq again nd tc...

Edited by milisaini - 9 years ago