Koi Fariyaad (New SwaSan ff) *Part: 15* updated Pg: 47

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milisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: gayu6
Read both parts. Loved it. So by hearing ragini's words he can't tolerate his anger and emotions so he reached home in drunk state and asked swara for one more chance. Wat she'll do nw pls continue soon

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Yup il update soon. ...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written!

Thnks😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

awsum parts..
loved it soo vry much..
this parts & the previous ones were super
srry 4 late reply and thnkss 4 pm

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Anamika sharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

superb story dear... loved all the chptrs... cont soon...

plz pm me...

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milisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: SanaHolic
awsum parts..
loved it soo vry much..
this parts & the previous ones were super
srry 4 late reply and thnkss 4 pm

heyaa thnks...
it's ok abt a late rpl...
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milisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: anu012
superb story dear... loved all the chptrs... cont soon...

plz pm me...

hey...tq...yaa il continue soon..
if u r der in ma buddy list u il get pms or else send me a request to get further notifications...
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milisaini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Amrtina
Superb story

hey thkns dear...😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Came across your Fic only today, and read all parts 1--9 at one go. 😊 Very interesting take, differing from the serial track, and I am very intrigued by what happened between Sanskaar & Swara in the past, why they have come to the brink of divorce, why she is so angry with him.

You've also maintained the suspense over Ragini's role in all this. Lakshya seems to be immature and impulsive, wanting more to separate Swara from Sanskaar, rather than really being there for her out of Love.

Looking forward to read more. Do PM me.

Cheers

Viji