Unthinkable- A SwaSan TS- Part 2, The Comprehension Series

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: dhaakshu
Loved this part ❤️
Poor Sankaar, trying to maintain distance
Swara is dreming of kissie with Sanky? 😆
Kaash, she blurts it out to him 😳
The J-bug has bit Swara, chahe thodi der ke liye hii kyu na ho? 😉
She's just upset ki Arpi got him all happy while he's being all formal and polite with her
Arpiii... 😆 You're cute
And your mom 😛 Swara ki aankhon mein Sujata ko behtar bana diya
Mujhe toh laga he'll be very angry
Sanky's, "What the heck?" Made me laugh hard 🤣
Poor guy got so confused with Swara's plans and reaction. Par kya kare, even she's confused
Arpi ne announce bhi kar diya, for SwaSan to dance 😲
Excited for the next update! 😊

Just realised I had new comments on this one! Ah thank you! Haha dreaming of kissie 😆. You think I should make it real in the concluding part?! 😉 Haina- Arpi is such a cutie right? I just didn't want a sterotypical vamp type girl but a positive one who makes our silly goose Swara realise. Haha aunty outdid suju - imagine that! Poor Sanskaar hasn't got a chance - phass gaya! I'll update by the weekend hopefully so thanks for reading x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: JazzyM
Lord Byron's work was part of my literature paper, I remember reading She Walks in Beauty but can't recall much about it. I think I'll refresh my mind, will need to find my poetry collection...
The heighten emotions, Swara's awareness of Sanskaar was beautifully written...quite poetic...the flow of words. You have placed Swara where I would love to see her, in a state where she is so unsure of herself but jealous of anyone who pays attention to Sanskaar...

The dance scene...beautifully depicted.

Lovely update!

Hey Jazz 🤗

Cool- you got Byron? We had Milton instead which literally only I enjoyed 😆. I so wish we could get Swara starting to realise her feelings in the show now- high time and they can't expect me to believe a girl can be immune to that much awesomeness in a man! Thanks so much for your lovely comments x

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Zephyr8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Just wonderful...will read your next now.

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JazzyM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey Jazz 🤗
Cool- you got Byron? We had Milton instead which literally only I enjoyed 😆. I so wish we could get Swara starting to realise her feelings in the show now- high time and they can't expect me to believe a girl can be immune to that much awesomeness in a man! Thanks so much for your lovely comments x

Yup I had Byron and understanding the meanings in-between the lines, blew me up...I guess that's what makes me look for meanings in very nuance of my work life...Just imagine, reading Byron and I ended up with International law...one end to another...

You are absolutely right ...what is Swara made of..how can she be so immune...the way Swara is shown in the series, blows me out... sometimes I wonder if she still carries a torch for Laksh but is denying herself because of sisterly concerns...she behaves as if she is blind to Sanskaar's good points...Friday's episode, I just caught up...I can't make sense of her behaviour...

Sanskaar...that guy is really super good...1st he leaves his room, then, supports Swara/Laksha against Ragini then he gets her the water...can a person's coughing be heard 1 flight below ...he was sleeping in the guest room downstairs, Swara was in his room upstairs...telepathy...???

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Jalebi bai

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Didu this one was Best! Sanky ignoring her, Swara being jealous of Arpi Too much cuteness <3 I so wish swara gets jealous in the show too.

Sanky why don't you ignore her for real. I'm sure she will miss you bacchha..Aisa nah kar chod de usko 2-3 din k liye, Ladki ko ehsaas ho jayega 🥺 😆

I loved this one as usual. Shabd nahi hai mere pass tarif k liye 😳 Now going to last part of this series! 😛

Bye see you there 😆

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Breezy-
Didu this one was Best! Sanky ignoring her, Swara being jealous of Arpi Too much cuteness <3 I so wish swara gets jealous in the show too.

Sanky why don't you ignore her for real. I'm sure she will miss you bacchha..Aisa nah kar chod de usko 2-3 din k liye, Ladki ko ehsaas ho jayega 🥺 😆

I loved this one as usual. Shabd nahi hai mere pass tarif k liye 😳 Now going to last part of this series! 😛

Bye see you there 😆

Meri little sis! 🤗 I like being called Didu - but I will be a young waali cool did huh?! 😉. I sooo want jealousy in the show too!!! And ignoring- all sorts of sadistic torture for Swara till she responds to our Sansku 😈. Thank you so much for doing this Uppu- loving reading your comment xoxo

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CarpediemRose

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Wow yaar,this just super cool,lovely update👏👏,something that is so very unique😊😊

Loved it a lot ,pls do continue😛😛

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: rerose
Wow yaar,this just super cool,lovely update👏👏,something that is so very unique😊😊
Loved it a lot ,pls do continue😛😛

Thanks so much honey, so glad you like it. I am going to read your FF too I promise!

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8
Just wonderful...will read your next now.

Thank you so much!

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-Ros-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Fabulous 😳😳

It seems that like the show wali Swara can't get the confession scene out of her mind, this Swara can't get the kissing dream out of her head. 😆

DP is sucha bae, I love him. 🤗 The way he was keeping an eye on Sanky's and Swara's reaction, as well as shutting Laksh up as usual. 👏

Swara starting to take note of how handsome her hubby is! We thank the Lord . They were both drooling over each other, gotta love it! 😳

JEALOUS SWARA IS THE BEST THING, OMD. ⭐️ Her trying to pretend it wasn't jealousy and then justifying her jealousy. 😆 I really wanna see Swara struggle to keep her calm when Sanky gets a bit of female attention.

Sanky as always concerned for Swara, doesn't let her go to the bar even though he was fuming. Dream man.

Arpi also a Swasan shipper. ❤️

Adored what Swasan was thinking about during the dance and liked the fact that Swara didn't leave and in fact rested her head on him.

Really nicely written, as always. 😊