HEART WANTS WHAT IT WANTS - Swasan SS *FINAL CHAPTER- PG1* - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
Nice part nik
Loved the way u portrayed sanskaar's inner turmoil
That insecurity which is overshadowed by his ego
Loved his POVs
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Niki- I read all the parts at once and am hooked. We have a jealous Sanskaar and him being obtuse and so "pricey"! I do like the thought of a tortured Swara (what a sadist I am!! 😈) as she needs to be put through some of what Sanky has had to endure but here, of course the tables are turned! Poor Sanky- am feeling sorry for him but am sure it will all pay off soon for him! Waiting for the next update 🤗


Shruthi 🤗 Hehe glad u r liking this story where I think everything is kinda opposite of what is happening in the show!😆😆 Thank u for ur comments huny! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Awesome update and I loved reading Sanskaar's POV. You are right, he is complicated but may I just say that a jealous Sanskaar is so adorable? Is he going to follw them to the restaurant in the next update? Is there a SwaSan confession in the works soon? Loved the update and I can't wait for the next one


Thank u so much! I'm glad u got the complicated POV... It was like Sanskar was having too many thoughts at the same time that I was afraid whether it would be conveyed the way it was intended or not... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Absolutely marvelous update Niki. 😊 Sanskaar is falling prey to the green eyed monster...and for Rahul, his frenemy, who has a "Bong bonding" with Swara, and her Ma & Dida. 😆 Poor Sanskaar...

Liked your description of how Sanskaar felt jealous when he heard Swara being so carefree and happy around Rahul, when things between them were so tense. I feel this is exactly was Sansku could feel jealous about, the fact that their earlier easy camaraderie was now absent; whereas Swara was able to derive that laughter from someone else. Sanskaar would want to be the reason that brings the smile to her face! 😊


Viji! Thnk u hun! 🤗 Glad u caught the essence of Sanskar's jealousy... It might be petty but still it is truthful and had risen due to his crazy love for her! He is just possessive of things what others might not be possessive of, like the simple pleasure of her company and the copyrights of her laughter... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Nice part nik

Loved the way u portrayed sanskaar's inner turmoil
That insecurity which is overshadowed by his ego
Loved his POVs
Continue soon


Sonu!🤗 I'm really glad u got Sanky's inner turmoil here... poor fellow is just too confused!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Plz update soon...desperately waitingwaiting 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: swasanluv

Plz update soon...desperately waitingwaiting 😳


Thank u dear for liking this SS dear. 😃 But I have already updated CHAPTER- 3 today morning.😳
Please check that... It is below CHAPTER- 2 on Page 1. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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woww awesome updates dear
loved it
😊 😛 😛 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anju10

woww awesome updates dear
loved it
😊


Thnk u! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
eep.
This guy is gonna boil over. 100"C already.

Whats the deal with rahul BTW? u described how he felt towards him perfectly.

and I so hate rahul right now. : X

Continue soon Nik...and well done...now you are PM ing. :D

love--
medha.

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