HEART WANTS WHAT IT WANTS - Swasan SS *FINAL CHAPTER- PG1*

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medha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

I like the 2nd part even better Nik.

that band aid unceremoniously being ripped off part? brilliant.

its all or nothing huh?

update soon.

love--

Medha.

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Well Written!

Thnk u ! 😃

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Shikha022
loved ur update..
waiting for the next part !!

Thnk u dear! 😳

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Smilelicious
Niki you didn't send me a pm for this marvellous story?
Aww jealous Sanskar 😆😳
Btw you have portrayed Swara & Sanskar's feelings so well 👏
Update jaldi and pm send karna 😳🤗

Oops sorry dear! 🤗 Will send u when I update this time! 😳 And thank u dear, glad u r liking this. 😳

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: medhasankar
I like the 2nd part even better Nik.
that band aid unceremoniously being ripped off part? brilliant.

its all or nothing huh?

update soon.

love--

Medha.

Medha !🤗 Thnk u! glad u liked the 2nd part evn better huny! 😳

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: sadhana.np
Awesome

Thnk u ! 😃

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Sanskar's POV. Updated. 25/10/2015

PM will be sent in the afternoon. Sorry.😳

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Niki- I read all the parts at once and am hooked. We have a jealous Sanskaar and him being obtuse and so "pricey"! I do like the thought of a tortured Swara (what a sadist I am!! 😈) as she needs to be put through some of what Sanky has had to endure but here, of course the tables are turned! Poor Sanky- am feeling sorry for him but am sure it will all pay off soon for him! Waiting for the next update 🤗

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DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Awesome update and I loved reading Sanskaar's POV. You are right, he is complicated but may I just say that a jealous Sanskaar is so adorable? Is he going to follw them to the restaurant in the next update? Is there a SwaSan confession in the works soon? Loved the update and I can't wait for the next one

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Absolutely marvelous update Niki. 😊 Sanskaar is falling prey to the green eyed monster...and for Rahul, his frenemy, who has a "Bong bonding" with Swara, and her Ma & Dida. 😆 Poor Sanskaar...

Liked your description of how Sanskaar felt jealous when he heard Swara being so carefree and happy around Rahul, when things between them were so tense. I feel this is exactly was Sansku could feel jealous about, the fact that their earlier easy camaraderie was now absent; whereas Swara was able to derive that laughter from someone else. Sanskaar would want to be the reason that brings the smile to her face! 😊

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 10 years ago