HEART WANTS WHAT IT WANTS - Swasan SS *FINAL CHAPTER- PG1* - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 4 was very nice Niki. 😊 Liked the part where Sansku thought he was hallucinating about Swara being there...and hallucination or not, he still could not bear her tears 😊
The ending was quite hot 😳 But tastefully and metaphorically described, I must say 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
A beautiful update as always. The last paragraph made the whole thing look mature without being crass if you know what I mean. I like that they both got closure to their pasts and now are beginning a new journey.
Eagerly waiting to read the epilogue. Update soon, please.
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG! *squeals*
I love this SS so much! Like sosososososo much! 👏
The entire concept is so beautiful, and you write so well too!
I loved how you described the end of part 4. 😆😳😉
Actually, part 3 had left me hooked and I was waiting so impatiently for the update.
And it was totally worth the wait. I loved how you said they were the cause of each other's pain, yet the balms too. I think that's how every relationship is and you just worded it perfectly.
I'm sad now, because it's almost done.
P.S. still waiting for you to update Confessions and What is in a Gift 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update nikk
loved ttheir convo
n end😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb niki
Read all the chapters in one go..
Well written dr..
I loved it ..
Continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
Real all the 4parts in one go. I didnt get pm so i was late reading ur updates. And i love all the chapters especially 3rd one i loved. He has much much pain in his heart. So again he is not ready to give the same pain to his heart. He can live a little peaceful life with her memories rather again trusting her love and make his heart broke into pieces. Pls continue and pls pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Part 4 was very nice Niki. 😊 Liked the part where Sansku thought he was hallucinating about Swara being there...and hallucination or not, he still could not bear her tears 😊

The ending was quite hot 😳 But tastefully and metaphorically described, I must say 😉


Thank u dear. 😃 And about the last part hehe, I guess this is the most A rated I have ever written!😳 I mean I'm a person who just makes only passing mentions of passionate kisses but here I thought the situation demanded it. And I blush a lil too much even while reading such stuff, so there was no way I could actually write anything direct about it.☺️ ☺️ So I'm really glad you found that decent enough. ☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

A beautiful update as always. The last paragraph made the whole thing look mature without being crass if you know what I mean. I like that they both got closure to their pasts and now are beginning a new journey.

Eagerly waiting to read the epilogue. Update soon, please.


Thank u so much! 😃 And yeah I'm really glad it didn't turn out to be crass because this is the first time I'm writing something even remotely close to these kinda scenes. ☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
You have one more chpt to go nah?
This one is not last? bcoz, I'm having too much fun seeing sanky and swara's love story here(show ka toh, has gone south)

Well, wifey ko koi probs nahi tha sanky ke gusse se. Cool wifey.
and see..everything ok.*toothy smile*

PM toh you did not send..now I'm stalking your index and your posts.😈 of course, I still have not ruled out the killing you possibility...chlo koi nahi...after u complete this SS...uske baad huh?😈

Continue Nik.

Love--
medha.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asexualflower

OMG! *squeals*

I love this SS so much! Like sosososososo much! 👏
The entire concept is so beautiful, and you write so well too!
I loved how you described the end of part 4. 😆😳😉
Actually, part 3 had left me hooked and I was waiting so impatiently for the update.
And it was totally worth the wait. I loved how you said they were the cause of each other's pain, yet the balms too. I think that's how every relationship is and you just worded it perfectly.
I'm sad now, because it's almost done.
P.S. still waiting for you to update Confessions and What is in a Gift 😛


Oh hehe! Thank u so much dear!! 🤗 Glad u had a fun read! 😳 And yup after this is over will be going back to my other stuff and hopefully will complete those soon too. 😃

PS: Hey, I read ur SS,n it was fab dear!! Sorry couldn't comment as I had logged out by then. Will do tonight! And do continue soon! 😳

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