'Saudade'-- A SwaSan O.S

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PenguinBaby

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Is there a Portuguese word for speechless? Bcoz I certainly need it

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piccola1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Oh Viji..you cant do this to me on an office day! Will HAVE to revert with a full response, coz you have my heart running full with this lovely OS..

You have the marvellous talent to make me woefully angsty throughout your OSs and then wonderfully happy, euphoric even, at the end !😃

Loooved it ! You've made my day with this one!🤗

PS: I'd heard the word before (I cant remember in what context !!) .. and it IS a beautiful one👏 !

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gayu6

@gayu6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Really loved this os. While started reading i too checked the meaning for saudade. Really loved her efforts to make him feel her love😳👏👏👏. Pls do write more

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ...sandy...
Viji 🤗 an awesome OS again.. Title is so awesome... 👏 I loved swara's feeling for sanskaar.. how she became a sanskaari wife for her sanskaar.. 😳 I loved her hiding of sanskaar's bag.. 😆
Red Sari I want her to see her in the show that way... 😳

Hanky of sanky not for wiping tears but for smudged lipstick... 😆 Awaah... 😳

Lovely dear.. Do write more... 😳

Hi Sandy...Glad you liked it 😊 Waise I thought it was high time Sansku's hanky started being put to some "extra Sanskaari" use also! 😉

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Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Wowww
Man amazing
Loved it to bits
The elegance and the lovely aura around it was so engrossing.
One of the bests until now.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: someonelikeyou-
wow great os..

Thanks Falaq. 😊 Glad you liked it.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: -Lachu-
Aww...i love ur writing... Absolutely love it...i am not much of a shipper but ur works made me fall in love with swasan...and this one, this one is awesome...ur writing has a certain elegance to it...

PS- carlos ruis zafon is one of my all time favourite authors...and i love the book 'shadow of the wind'

Hey Lachu...😊 Thanks for that absolutely lovely compliment. As I've said before, I'm a major SwaSan fan, so if someone tells me that my writing made them love this dream couple, that's like the best thing someone could tell about my work! 😉

Nice to know you like "The Shadow of the Wind". Its just an amazing novel, right? I must have read it like 3 or 4 times, I love it so much.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Hi Viji!! I don't really have the right words up my sleeve to describe this wonderful piece of writing but I will try however with what I have.
Firstly I was thrilled in the first part at how Swara although lately came to realize her feelings for sanskar and the intensity of his love for her.
Then I was understanding where you described how he did not trust her anymore. The girl had that coming didn't she? she had pushed him a little too far that he was too afraid of the pain she might grant him, totally natural reaction from sanskar.
Then I was giddy, with fangirl kind of happiness at Swara's attempts to woo him. She's cute or what? That part was soo cute and beautiful. Then when she finally confessed again I almost cried. She's so repenting what she had done to him and so yearning for his love...
Of cause he saw her honesty then. The last paras were a treat, beautiful in a fiery way. It seemed all the emotions of a couple compressed in to one lengthy writing. Glad I could read something like this.
As usual you've done a marvelous job!!

Hi Sakura. Thanks a ton for this lovely message 😊 Very glad you liked it.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
awesome 👏

Thanks Javeria 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: rerose
Wow what an amazing OS👏👏👏
I loved it a lot dr😳😳
And Carlos Luis Zafon is one of my favorite author,I have read the novel "the Shadow of the Wind " such an awesome novel,I am glad u have used instances from the Novel,awesome job dr👏

Hi 😊 Thanks for reading and commenting yaar. Glad to know you liked it.

"The Shadow of the Wind" is amazing, na? I just love it, must have read it 3--4 times.

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