Swasan and RagLak FF Betrayal:Do you Still Love Me?? part 19 pg 34 - Page 12

Created

Last reply

Replies

210

Views

67.9k

Users

55

Likes

719

Frequent Posters

Porkalai22 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
raglak confession was awsm
waitng fr nxt one
Senoritaamor thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
I am still in Raglak dreamland
Wonderful shiri
rbb1 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Elite Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update loved the Raglak moment can't wait for the next part
wohradhahai thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
First of all sorry for late reply.. I read the previous part ages ago but couldn't comment... it was feeling if I was wathing a hindi SRK movie with RagLak...(DDLJ)..my RagLak

N I got it..Swara is pregnant, right? That's why shshe is iignoring Sanskar...

M loving both the cpl here...update really soonn
-Claptrap- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Shirisha... I don't know how I missed this ff...
It was mindblowing...loved it...
Both RagLak and SwaSan are cute and hot ☺️
I'm getting a sense that something is going to happen in RagLak marriage...
Swara is pregnant I think...😳
I read all the chapters in one go...
And loved your way of writing... Espesially those poetic lines in the end of chapters... 😳
Do write more... 😃
sneharay thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update..
Last part is shocking
Update soon
ll_megha_ll thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
Wow dear...
Awesome update...
Just loved it..
Do continue soon
Thanks for the pm
ExoticDisaster thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago

PART 13


Sanskaar followed Swara to the storeroom. She was putting some flowers in the basket when Sanskaar tugged her arm and pinned her against the cupboard.

"Let go of me, Sanskaar!" Swara yelled.

He tugged her more tight.

"What the hell do you think of yourself?" He said in anger. "How can you just blame me like that? You yourself said you had remember everything that night, then how the hell can you call me a... A Rapist?"

"Sanskaar, you are hurting me!" Swara said in pain.

Just then Sanskaar realised that his hold was damn strong and her arm was almost red. He let go of her and put his hand on his forehead. Swara had tears in her eyes which were yet to be come.

"Listen, Swara. I don't know what's wrong with you, but would just say, don't do this to me. I can't take it, you know how much I love you..."

He cupped her face.

"Love, if you had loved me, you mustn't had USED me!" She said in a calm, plain tone.

He pulled his hands back in shock.

"And i hate you for that. You will never understand me, because no one has ever broke your heart, perhaps you do not have a heart!"

"That's because you stole it!" He said in teary eyes.

"Your sweet talks will no more affect me, Sanskaar. I am a human, not a puppet!" She yelled.

"I am also a human, not a solid rock!" He shouted back. "If you remember, you yourself clarified, it wasn't a mistake. You meant it!"

"Sans.."

"Enough Swara. Now you listen to me. Everyone knows, I never looked upon any girl rather than you. I never had affair with anyone else. I have only loved you. I have no idea why are you pretending to hate me, but you know what? Hurt me how much you want, but remember, I will hurt you more, loving you more!"

She turned her back to him.

"And one more thing Miss Garodia, I haven't used you. I love you. And will always love you." He said wiping his tears.

********************
Ragini entered Lakshya's room and gazed around. The room was empty. Suddenly she heard some sounds from washroom. She smiled to herself and picked a book from the closet. She sat by the window holding the book close to her chest. She was waiting for him to come out. She gazed at the sky and thought about all the changes that had happened in her life over the last three months. She got her love back, her life back. Her Lakshya back. Lakshya was the reason of her existence and Swara of her survival. Swara was there for her every time, now its her turn. She will ask Swara to marry Sanskaar, the same day of her marriage. Lost in his thoughts she dozed off.

Lakshya came out of the bathroom after a shower with just a towel around his waist. His hair and shoulder were still wet. He came out looking for his bathrobe when he noticed that Ragini was fast asleep against the window. The book in her hand was slipping and so was she. He quickly leapt to catch hold of her. He held the book that fell from her hand and flung it over the table. She opened her eyes to see Lakshya holding her to keep her from falling. She held him for support and realised that he was wearing nothing but a towel. The realisation sent sudden shivers through her. Despite her regaining her composure they continued holding each other. He moved closer to her till their faces were a few inches apart. He gently tucked her hair behind her ear. He then took her in his arms and placed her on the bed. He pulled the blanket over her and kissed her on her forehead.

"Lakshya..." She began.

"Let me wear my clothes.." He smiled.

Ragini smiled back admired him while he took out his night wear.

Marriage Day

Lakshya was sitting in the mandap waiting for his love. He was dreaming their life after marriage. The priest asked for the bride.

"Lakshya" He heard. Looked up. He was shocked.

He removed his turban and went to her. Ragini was in a unbelievable position. She was in half bridal dress and having wounds all over her body and her lips still bleeding. She was crying to hell. Lakshya rushed to her.

" Ragini..!! Ragini what's all this??" he asked worried and confused.

She hugged him crying.

"Ragini, say something, what happened? Who did all this?" he asked consoling her.

She was crying only.

" Ragini, Ragini, look at me. Tell me, who did this? Ragini tumhe meri kasam hai, Batao!!"

She points her finger. Lakshya gets shocked.

She points her finger. Lakshya gets shocked.

"Swara!!!??!!"


Phew!!! Finally I updated! Missed me? I know you did. Thanks for all your likes and lovely comments!! Ok.. as you demand me updates, I am going to demand for like and comments. My target is 25 likes and 15 comments for this update. Once I get 25 votes for this part, I will update the next part that weekend only. More than 25 votes and 15 comments are most welcomed!


#HOW WAS THE SURPRISE?

#WHY DID SWARA DO THIS?

#DO SHE REALLY HAVE PROBLEM WITH LAKSHYA AND RAGINI GETTING UNITED?

#HOW WILL LAKSHYA REACT?

#HOW WILL SANSKAAR REACT?

#KEEP GUESSING!


Love,
Shirisha😊


-Claptrap- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...😃
You're questions in the last makes me think more...
Swara did all this... But why??
I have to wait for the next update... 😕
wohradhahai thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing. .
I don't want Sanskar to ask sorry from Swara...both r at fault.. .

Oh my poor Ragini...what happened to her...
What did Swara do to her...I want lucky to be the very hero now...
Update soon... .

N don't demand... ur story is capable enough to grab 150 Comments 😃

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".