The Ice King SwaSan SS Complete - Page 7

Superb. ..the most gripping ff on swasan ever!!!

Originally posted by: manasie23

The contrast in Sanskaar's character is a treat to read... eagerly waiting to see how the story is going to proceed... update soon..

Originally posted by: harshsriti

I have a lot of confusions. did swara love laksh? why he reject ragini? is swara not in love with laksh why did she accept proposal? and about sanskar.. I have a lot of confusion. . plzz update soon as possible. . I want to clear the confusions.. nice update dear... continue soon..

Originally posted by: princess_tara

awesome update

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

Very nicely written.

and I must say, you captured my whole undivided attention, which happens very less with most writers on the forum.

I loved the descriptions of Ragini's POV...and Swara's spin.

Sanskaar's pain was very tangible.

Very well done...and thank you for the PM. Keep Pming me, when you continue it.

PS:Loved the childhood possessiveness.

love--

Medha.

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Superb. ..the most gripping ff on swasan ever!!!

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Ok!! This is fabulous!! Loving this Grey Sanz!! Plz PM me wen u update!! 😳

There was a before when Sanskar defended his with the ferocity of a lioness.
In this after he is letting that very stamped his, to get trampled and hurt.
Brilliant expression u have got of the dichotomy of Sanskar character.

Ragini...I don't know what to think about her. Truthfully speaking, I have got so attuned to her greyness that if u would have made her positive, I would have found it hard to swallow.
Not that I prefer her as the current psychopath in the show. But a calculating, determined villain works for me. I hope u can maintain her character like you have done Sanskar's.

Lakshya...impulsive enough to reject a girl chosen by his mother and next second propose her sister. Not much difference from the show, but I find him better that way. It is only when he begins to lose his little left brain cells that Ii start avoiding him.

Swara! I pity that girl. She is almost always somehow brought in as hostage into matters she has no connection to. Poor thing. She is going to lose trust on three people who matters most to her. Ragini, Lakshya (sure the plotting duo will do something here) and finally her best friend/present illwisher Sanskar.


God I am so excited. Plz update soon. Thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

There was a before when Sanskar defended his with the ferocity of a lioness.
In this after he is letting that very stamped his, to get trampled and hurt.
Brilliant expression u have got of the dichotomy of Sanskar character.

Ragini...I don't know what to think about her. Truthfully speaking, I have got so attuned to her greyness that if u would have made her positive, I would have found it hard to swallow.
Not that I prefer her as the current psychopath in the show. But a calculating, determined villain works for me. I hope u can maintain her character like you have done Sanskar's.

Lakshya...impulsive enough to reject a girl chosen by his mother and next second propose her sister. Not much difference from the show, but I find him better that way. It is only when he begins to lose his little left brain cells that Ii start avoiding him.

Swara! I pity that girl. She is almost always somehow brought in as hostage into matters she has no connection to. Poor thing. She is going to lose trust on three people who matters most to her. Ragini, Lakshya (sure the plotting duo will do something here) and finally her best friend/present illwisher Sanskar.


God I am so excited. Plz update soon. Thanks for the pm.