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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Sakura24

OMG Viji😃 (Is it alright if I call you that?')
I'm sort of a fan of yours, it was your writing that dragged me to this forum😳
I'm so over the moon about you finding my story interesting, thank you very much😳 I'll surely PM you😃

Of course call me Viji dear...😊 Also please tell me how you would like me to address you.

Thanks so much for your kind words about my writing. 😊 Glad you liked them.

Look forward to your PM for your next update.

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

@ Viji, Thank you very much!!! You deserve all that appreciation truly, you can call me Sakura :D Thanks again.

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Pihu.k11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hey, you've captured the idea perfectly😊I'm sure Sanskar will be hurt too, and yep Swara isn't in love with Lux😉I'm glad you're excited😃I'll PM you for sure😛

Waiting 😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: abika
Intrestingg

Thanks dear😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

You have brought out the contrast between the old, friendly Sanskaar; and the present chilly, steely man bent on vendetta, really well. Its really intense, the way he wants to have Swara more involved with Lakshya, so his cousin can fall more for her; and thereby his revenge plan will shatter Lucky and DP all the more! That's a heavy dose of bitterness there. Will you be exploring further, how and why he cut off ties with Swara, in the next chapters? Despite her being his best friend, I mean?

And Ragini is the same layered character here. 😊 I liked the contrast you portrayed between her ethereal loveliness and the sharp edges of her broken dreams that were eating away at her insides!

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
You have brought out the contrast between the old, friendly Sanskaar; and the present chilly, steely man bent on vendetta, really well. Its really intense, the way he wants to have Swara more involved with Lakshya, so his cousin can fall more for her; and thereby his revenge plan will shatter Lucky and DP all the more! That's a heavy dose of bitterness there. Will you be exploring further, how and why he cut off ties with Swara, in the next chapters? Despite her being his best friend, I mean?

And Ragini is the same layered character here. 😊 I liked the contrast you portrayed between her ethereal loveliness and the sharp edges of her broken dreams that were eating away at her insides!

Thanks😳

That was the main concern of this chapter, to highlight the difference between Sanskar now and then. The next few chapters will eventually recall their friendship's ups and downs.

I like the way Ragini is in the original, so I thought to keep her what she exactly is.

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Pihu.k11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

As mentioned above,the contrast between once friendly and caring sanskar and d sanskar now whose every action/thought goes towards seeking his revenge has been maintained very well.. Eehhh.. Sanskar wont b able to hurt Swara much here,I believe.. Ehhh.. d poor girl still misses him so much and surprisingly sensed him around.. Unspoken feelings may b! She is going to get so hurt after knowing Sanskar's intentions..

Ragini Ragini Ragini.. Double faced woman here as well.. I m looking forward to see how much she is going to b the part of this "Vendetta" but I dun wish to see her go insane as shown in this soap!

But Y did Sanskar broke his ties wid swara?? Lots of un answered questions and the reason why M i hooked to this one 😆

Update soon 😳

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11
As mentioned above,the contrast between once friendly and caring sanskar and d sanskar now whose every action/thought goes towards seeking his revenge has been maintained very well.. Eehhh.. Sanskar wont b able to hurt Swara much here,I believe.. Ehhh.. d poor girl still misses him so much and surprisingly sensed him around.. Unspoken feelings may b! She is going to get so hurt after knowing Sanskar's intentions..

Ragini Ragini Ragini.. Double faced woman here as well.. I m looking forward to see how much she is going to b the part of this "Vendetta" but I dun wish to see her go insane as shown in this soap!

But Y did Sanskar broke his ties wid swara?? Lots of un answered questions and the reason why M i hooked to this one 😆

Update soon 😳

I'm glad it keeps your interest😃 True, Sanskar's true face will hurt her extremely. I can't tell you anything about Ragini, she had her part to play, after all its her love in the equation. The next part might answer some of your questions😛 Thanks for the appreciation.😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: sadhana.np
Nice

thanks😃

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