The Ice King SwaSan SS Complete - Page 41

Hi sakura 😊 first all you gave me a shock when I saw the title' finale' . I thought why so early? But as I traveled through your super duper awesome and fantastic chapter I found myself asking abb kya hoga aage 😕
And slowly as I approached the last of the chapter I was mesmerized the way our ice king ultimately bowed down and I was literally cursing 😡 ragini for her acts. Girl you really are an excellent writer!
Well I should thank you for mentioning the fact of writing snow queen. I'm now eagerly waiting for that to happen soon.
jaldi shuru kar do behna 😆
😉 really appreciable girl!

OKay, so here's the thing.
Ive been a silent reader of your story.
And now when ur done with the first part, I had no choice but to comment, because ur writing practically forced me to praise you. I have no words to describe the story. It is beyond me to comment on something so brilliant it seems almost ethereal. Each and every part and each and every dialogue, the way you have made the stroy progress and just how amazingly everything fell into place at the end, its splendid.
And my favourite character is Ragini. I am a Swasan fan, and mainly read ur story for Sanskar, but at the end I couldnt help but fall for the cold calculative mind of the ever impassive but innocent faced Ragini. The way she's played her game, 👏
And like I said before, ur Metaphoric dialogues blow me away. All the references you make, specially the ones to the Mahabharata are pitch perfect. And my best part was the reference you made to Snow White. Sanskar being the huntsman and Ragini the evil queen. And my Swara? The baby snow white. And of course, the queen will never win against her.
This is one of the best pieces of writing Ive come across, not just on IF but in all of all that I read. And trust me, I read alot. 😳
Take a bow, writer.
And i am thoroughly excited about the next part, because i may admire Ragini, but at the end its all about Swasan. And its their game now. Its the game of truth now. And now Swara's not a queen or a pawn, she's an equal to Sanskar.
Please write soon and more and more and more.
Forever fan 😛

superb update👏👏⭐️⭐️ u write so well😊

So Rags is the snow Queen?

I absolutely loved it. Your are an excellent writer.

Originally posted by: chemgirl

I am great fan of urs now...plz update snow queen

Originally posted by: dimaag

Hi sakura 😊 first all you gave me a shock when I saw the title' finale' . I thought why so early? But as I traveled through your super duper awesome and fantastic chapter I found myself asking abb kya hoga aage 😕
And slowly as I approached the last of the chapter I was mesmerized the way our ice king ultimately bowed down and I was literally cursing 😡 ragini for her acts. Girl you really are an excellent writer!
Well I should thank you for mentioning the fact of writing snow queen. I'm now eagerly waiting for that to happen soon.
jaldi shuru kar do behna 😆
😉 really appreciable girl!

I loved it. It is so refreshing to come across a work of this calibre as mere fan fiction. You have added such depth and dimension to each of your characters. Can't wait for the sequel. How will the tide turn and which direction will it take? I am waiting eagerly.

Originally posted by: Ardhikian

OKay, so here's the thing.
Ive been a silent reader of your story.
And now when ur done with the first part, I had no choice but to comment, because ur writing practically forced me to praise you. I have no words to describe the story. It is beyond me to comment on something so brilliant it seems almost ethereal. Each and every part and each and every dialogue, the way you have made the stroy progress and just how amazingly everything fell into place at the end, its splendid.
And my favourite character is Ragini. I am a Swasan fan, and mainly read ur story for Sanskar, but at the end I couldnt help but fall for the cold calculative mind of the ever impassive but innocent faced Ragini. The way she's played her game, 👏
And like I said before, ur Metaphoric dialogues blow me away. All the references you make, specially the ones to the Mahabharata are pitch perfect. And my best part was the reference you made to Snow White. Sanskar being the huntsman and Ragini the evil queen. And my Swara? The baby snow white. And of course, the queen will never win against her.
This is one of the best pieces of writing Ive come across, not just on IF but in all of all that I read. And trust me, I read alot. 😳
Take a bow, writer.
And i am thoroughly excited about the next part, because i may admire Ragini, but at the end its all about Swasan. And its their game now. Its the game of truth now. And now Swara's not a queen or a pawn, she's an equal to Sanskar.
Please write soon and more and more and more.
Forever fan 😛