Hai guys my name is mridu...till now i am a silent reader of this forums, but after reading so many crazy os & ff , i also want to write something about swasan...if there is any mistake pls ignore that because it's my first creation ...( frndz am from kerala so my hindi language mein thodi problem hogi...pls maaf kardho)
Another reason for this ss is that i am disappointed with current track of swaragini , so this is my version of swaragini , hope u guys enjoy
My ss is start from ragini's truth revelation track
Kab Tumse Pyaar hogayaaa
Whole maheswari khandhan is stunned with the revelation of ragini's truth kisse woh logh naive & innocent samjh gaya woh ithne chalak & selfish tha ki woh apne hi behan ko maarene ki koshish ki, Gadodia's condition also not better or say even worse than maheswari's shekar ko lag ki earth slipped from his feet...
Shekar: (with hand folded) "swara hum maaf maangne ke bhi layakh nahi hei, par phir bhi tumse maafi maag rahahum , mei bahuth bura hum swra mei apni hi betiyo mein farakh kiya, mei har wakth ragini ki baatho mein andha visvash kiya aur hamesha se tume aur misthi ko galath sabith kiya ..."
Uss samay Sharmishta ko ek phone aagaya, she excuse from there
Shekar: "tumne bina galti se mujhse har bar maafi maanga par mei khabi tumara kissi baath nahi maana angd tumari character angd parvarish par ungly udaya..yeh thak bola kit um meri khoon nahi hei...mei pitha kehene bhi layakh nahi hei...but ek baar mujhe maaf karo swara..."
Saying this he came to touch her feet, but swara interrupted shekar..
Swara: "Baba...baba mujhe aapse koi shikayath nahi hei yeh tho meri kismet hei she wiped her tears shekar get a stab in heart...ek beti ke roop mein apko mujhe two mahine ki pehchan hei but ragini ko tho apne hi ithne varsho thak palan ki, isliye apko uspar ithna visvash tha ...it's ok baba mei apke situation samaj saktha hum..."shekar want to die at that moment
At that time bhahar sharmishta on the phone
Sharmishta: "Sab thayar hena beta.."
Voice: "sab thayar hei mami.."
Sharmishta: "ok.. aur tumab airport mein hena ...then tum ek kam karo , tum subko leke yeha maheswari manzil aavo,, ok mei rekthahum.."
Voice: "ok mami, bye.."
At hall
Swara: "waise baba mera uddhesh sirf aap aur maa ko ek karna tha, mei yeh khabi nahi chaha ki ragini aur laksh ki ristha toott javo..."
Laksh: "swara yeh tum kya bolraha hei .mei ragini ko khabi nahi pyaar kiya, abs ach jane ki baathusse pyaar khabi nahi karpavunga..swara mei sirf tume pyaar kiya tha...sirf thume ..."
Swara: "laksh mei apni baba se baath kar rahahum, tumse nahi..."
Laksh: "lekin swara..."
Laksh interrupted by an angry swara
Swara: "lekin ky he laksh, tum yeh kehena chatha hei ki tume ab mujhe visvash hei and tum mujhe bahuth pyaar kartha hei.."
Laksh: "ha swara mei tume bahuth pyaar kartha hum, yeh sab iss ragini ke vajese hua hei shone...mei iske bolapan and pyaari si baath par fass gaya..mujhe maaf karona shona and mujhe ek chance dho.pls..."
Annapurna cried for her son...others shocked to see this,, ragini cried even more and said " luxji mei apse bauth paayr kartha hei ..." swara turned to sanskar and saw uske lifeless eyes...she feel like she get stabbed on her stomach
Swara: "bas laksh ab hamara rishta ko koi matlab nahi hei, aur tum kya kaha kit um ragini ki chal mei fass gayi , kya ragini ne tume dhaki dhi ki tum use shadi karo aur baba and daadi ne tume force kiya, nahi na woh tho tumara faisla tha , tho ab kya hua tume mujhpar ithna pyaar aagaya... laksh mei pehele bhi kaha tha ki mei yeh sab sirf mere maa aur baba ko ek karne keliye kiya tha ... thumareliye nahi ..." laksh cried "shona pls"
Swara: " laksh don't...ek aur baath laksh ..tum mujhe shone mat bulavo mujhe shone bulane ki hak sirf mera apno ka hei tumareliye mei swara hum sirf swara nahi swara turned to sanskar and said looking into his eyes balki SWARA SANSKAR MAHESHWARI hei, samjhi tum..."
Laksh feel like he get slapped write there everyone shocked to see swara like that sanskar loocked deeply in to swara's eyes to read them but she turned to opposite by sharmishta's voice
Sharmishta: "ek minute shona mujhe kuch kehena hei , shona aajh mei bahuth khush hum tha ki thumara innocence sabke samne aaya..issi din ka indhsaar trha mujhe ...shona aajh thak mei tumara sab wishes pura kiya ...but aajh mei tumari ek wish pura nahi karpavungi..." swara looked shomi in confusion ...
Sharmishta: "shona...mei..mei ab shekar ke saath nahi reh saktha...am sorry she cried and hugged swara..."
Everyone look like ab iski kami thi...
Shekar with shocked expression
Shekar: "yeh tum kya bolraha hei misthi...???????????
Voice: "mami sach bol raha hei Mr.SHEKAR GADODIA..."
Whole maheswari khandan & gadodias shocked to see a tall handsome man (with an angry look) standing at the entrance with a group...but swara, shomi smiled to him && sanskar confused that what is he doing here...
Sharmista: "beta..."
Swara: "DD"
Sanskar: "MK"
Precap: Man: mami aap aur swara abhi issi wakth mere saath Delhi chalraha hei...no more excuse ...
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