swasan ss- Kab tumse pyaar hogayaaa - part 4

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Hai guys...
here am giving the character sketche

Swara



Sanskar

Shomi & dida




Maan


Ragini


Laksh


Shekar

Dadima



DP


AP


RP


Sujata


Adharsh

Parineeta







Kab Tumse Pyaar hogayaaa


Part 4

Recap: maan protectively hold Swara and walked away from them...

After they left laksh fell on his knees and cried badly (ek naya drama)

Laksh: "Swaraaa...Swaraaa.. tum mujhe chodkar nahi jaa sakhta ...swara mujhe tum chahiye...swara ...swara..." laksh screamed

AP: ''laksh chup hojaavo...Kya pakhalpan hei yeh''...?????

LAksh: ''maa mujhe swara chahiye...pls maa...''

DP: ''laksh.., batameez se baath karo...swara koi cheez nahi hei tha ki, tum jab chaho tho haazil karne keliye...ek aur baath hei laksh...swara ab tumara bhai ki biwi hei...matlab tumara bhabi...samjhi tum...''

Laksh: ''exactly papa,, swara ab sanskar ki biwi hei,, but woh sab iss sansakr & ragini ke wajhe se hua hei..inn dhono ne mujhse mera swara cheenliya..''

Sansakar was enough of laksh's nonsence told:"shut up laksh ,, hei sab hamare wajhe se nahi balki tumara bevakhoofi ke wajhe se hua hei...mei kitni bhaar tum logh se chilla chillake bola ki iss ragini joot bolraha hei,, iske baatho mei nahi aavo ,, but tum tho gusse mei aakhar ragini se shaadi ki ...&& swara ko ithni insult ki...lucky tum ek baar bhi nahi socha ki swara aisa karungi,, nahi na...aur ab tume sach ko pata chalgaya aur tume swara chahiye...laksh..swara koi toy or trophy nahi hei,, tum jab chahe hazil karne aur jab man kare bahar bekhne keliye...aur tum tho sirf swara ke saath nahi balkhi ragini ke saath bhi galat kiya ...laksh tume pehele se pata tha ki tum ragini se pyaar nahi kartha phir bhi tum uske saath ristha juda...ragini looked sanskar with moist eyes..usse pasand karne ka naatak ki,, phir ek din tum yeh bola ki tum usse nahi balkhi uski behan se pyaar karthahum ,,chii...tum khabhi socha he ki uss din ragini mein kya beethi hogi...''sanskar smiled sadly... ''tume kaise patha hoga lucky... tume tho jab chahe , kya chahe woh sab mila hena ,, par mujhe samajh aaya , because mujhe pyaar ko khone ka dard pata tha,, isliye mei uske saath dhiya mera uddhesh bhi tume aur swara ko alag karna tha ,, but swara ne sahi time par mujhe samjhaya aur Galati karne se rokliya ,, but ragini woh tho tumare pyaar par ithne andhi hogayi ki , mere har khoshish ke baad bhi woh uski mathsath mei khamiyaabh hogaya...mujhe aur swara ko galat saabhith kiya aur aap logh usspar viswash kiya .. Everyone hanged their head with shame...tum tho gusse mei aakar sabse bade galti ki ,...tum ragini se shaadi ki ...laksh ,,yeh sab tumare wajhe se hua ...tumne yeh sab start kiya aur ragini ne yeh sab end bhi kiya...ab bas karo..lucky bas karo...''

With that he turned from laksh,, and walked to his room ,, but stopped by laksh's next words..

Laksh: ''Tumara iss lecture mere upper koi azhar karne wali nahi hei sanskar ...aur iss tharah lecture dhene se tum khabhi mahaan nahi banjaavunga ...tum kal bhi galat tha aur aajh bhi ...mei tumare baath ko nahi maane wali hei...aur tum logh yeh khan kholkar sunlo ki mei swara se bahuth pyaar kartha hei ...mei usse paake rahungi,, aur iss bhaar mujhe koi nahi rok saktha ...'' he screamed to sanskar...

Sanskar,, who smiled with laksh's words said: ''woh tumara galatfami hei lacky ,,tum usse hazil karna tho kya...dhekh bhi nahi karpaavungi,,because ...woh MSK ki behen hei ,, tume MSK ki bare mei nahi pata ...woh tume zinda kaat dhungi ...yaadh rakhna...''saying these he go to his room ...every on shocked by these...

Laksh scremed from hall: ''Sanskaaarr...tum kuch bhi bolo...but mei swara ko apna bhankar hi rahunga...mei tumse usse cheenunga sanskar...''and he walked to his room,, but ragini hold his hand

Ragini: ''lux ji hame maaf kardheejiye ...mei aapkeliye yeh sab kiya hei...mei aapse bahuth pyaar karthahum...lux ji..''

But laksh pushed her & she felled on the ground

Laksh: ''ragini mei tume pyaar nahi kartha , sach yeh hei ki tum kissi ke pyaar ki layakh bhi nahi hei..You bitch tumari wajhe se mei meri swara se alag hei,, sirf tumari wajhe ...'' he angrily goes to his room ...ragini cried badly

DP: ''shekarji,, ab aap logh ghar chaliye...he folded his hand and said hume maaf keejiye shekarji par ab ragini yeha nahi rah saktha..''

Shekar: ''nahi durga Prasadji maafi tho mujhe maangne chahiye,, hamare wajhe se yeh sab hua ,, hum ragini ko sach aur joot ki farak nahi samjhapaya..aur uskeliye mujhe sabse badi saza bhi milgayi...''

Shekar turned to ragini

Shekar: ''ragini, hum tume ghar lekar tho jaavungai par tume pehele jaisa apnapan nahi milunga...''

Ragini: ''baba,, hum...''

But shekar interrupted her

Shekar: ''nahi ragini aajh se mei tumari baba nahi hei,, mujhe sirf ek beti hei..swara...'' with that he hold daadimaa ki haath and walked from there ,, ragini bhi uske peeche peeche chali gayi

DP: ''ram, adharsh ..aap sab logh apne apne room mei jaavo...''

Ram & adharsh: ''Ji...''

Sujata: ''yeh bhagavan ab sab teek hua...ragini ki sach bhi bahar aagaya aur woh bangali chori swara bhi hamara sanskar ki zindgi se chali gayi...apko bahuth bahuth dhanyavaad...aur woh bhi apne khamre mei chali gayi..''

In sanskar ki room, he is sitting on the coach and thinking about the day

Sanskar tought: aajh kya kya hua,, ragini ki sach bahar aaya ,, hum logh jeeth gaya...aur..MSK...swara ki bhai... "swara..tum kyun chali gayi...'' he touched his cheek where swara kissed,, and smiled...''shayad woh bhi mujhe pasand karne laga..''

Dimag: ''nahi sanskar,, swara ne saaf saaf bola thana ki woh tume pyaar nahi krtha..''

Dil: ''par woh tho tab na,, kahi ab woh tumse pyaar karthi tho...????

Dimag: ''sanskar isske baath par mat aavo,, agar woh thujse pyaar karthi tho yeha ruk jaathi,,par nahi na.. balki woh tho chali gayi..''

Dil: ''Phir woh kyun isse kiss kiya..mujhe pakka lagradha ki woh isse pasand karthi...''

Dimag: ''nahi kartha...''

Dil: ''pasand karthi..''

Dimag: ''nahi karthaa...''

Dil: ''karthi hei...''

Dimag: ''nahi... nahi..nahiii...''

Dil: ''Karthiii...''

Sanskar: ''BASss...bas karo...mujhe tum dhono ki gaidence nahi chahiye...mei khudh dhundungi...'' with that he slept on the coach and stared the bed where once swara sleeped...and imagined her there ...and tought. ''swara...kya sach mei tumko mei pasand aane lagi..isliye tumne mujhe kiss kiya ...aur swara mujhe sach mei nahi pata hei ki mei kaise lucky ko samhalunga...woh abhi bahuth dard mei hei swara,,usse kaise..'' by thinking these he slowly slipped into a deep slumber...

Here in car swara bhi uthni confused hei yeh soch kar ki woh kyun sanskar ko kiss kiya...sawra thinking: "mei kyun sanskar ko kiss kiya,, usse alag hone se mujhe ithni dhuk kyun horaha hei...mei tho usse pyaar bhi nahi kartha ...phir kyun...swara ...woh tho tumari best friend hei...usse jyaada kuch nahi...'' and she looked to maan and shomi..and saw they are sleeping peacefully..she smiled by that view and hugged maan once again..and slept in his protective embrace...

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Ragini: ''swaraaa...swara..yeh sab thumari wajhe se hua hei...pehele tum hamare lux ji ko humse cheenliya...aur ab tho tum hamare baba & daadimaa ko bhi...hum tume nahi chodunga swaraaa...tume marna hoga ...tumari marne se hi meri balayi hei...uss din tho tum bachpaayi...par aaj tho woh mei pura karunga...swara tume marnaa hogaaa ...marna hogaaa...with that she stabbed swara...''

''SWARAAA...swaraaa...'' sanakar scremed in sleep and slipped from the coach...

Here in car swara: ''sanskar...'' she too wake up from the sleep

Maan: ''kya hua shona ...tume itni gabraayi kyun lagra ho..???''

Swara:'' maan bhai woh..woh sanskar...''

Maan: ''sanskar...sankar ko kya hua...???''

Swara: ''woh...kuch nahi..'' she loked outside and said..''maan bhai airport aagaya..''

Maan: '' haa..'' he wake up shomi and walked to the airport.

Swara: ''maan bhai..woh ithini raath hogayi...iss time par humko tickets milungi kya...''??????

She questioned innocently to which maan smirked

Maan: ''Shona ...hume uski koi aavasaktha nahi hei,,..''with that he escort them to his privet jet ..

Swara: ''Wow..bhai...yeh kitna bada hei..bahuth beautiful bhi hei...yeh aapki hei..????''

Maan: ''mera nahi...hamara hei...''

Swara: ''haa ..woh tho teek hei...par hum log issme akele jaavongi..kyaa''??

Maan: ''nahi ...iss Kolkata ko bhi saath lekar jaarahi hei...kya tume koi problem hei ...'' with that he settled them inside...

Swara: ''maaa...maa dhekona yeh bhai mujhe tang karraha hei...'' she cribbed to shomi

Sharmista: ''shona.. mei tumari aur tumari bhai ki beech mei nahi aavungi...''

Maan murmured: ''ohh babaji..kya mere saath ek pagal kaafi nahi tha ki aap ek aur bhi dhediya...''

Swara: ''bhai tumne mujhe pagal kaha...''

Maan: ''nahi..nahi.. mujhe ithni himmat nahi hei ki mei tume pagal bolungi...mei tho koi aur ko kaha...'' he smiled

Swara: ''koi aur...hum.. kya baath bhai bolo..bolo..'' she teased him..

Maan: ''kuch nahi..aur tum sojaavo...kithni takh gayi hei..'' saying this he slept on the coach to escape from the teasing...after some time swara too...flight take off from there...

But away from them sanskar sreamed swaraa.. and waked up...

Sanskar: ''Swaraaa..swaraaa...'' he looked around and samajh gaya ki he in the room..

Sanskar: ''woh sapna tha...'' he sighed ''..sapna..tha..aur woh ragini,, mujhe abhi bhi uspe trust nahi hei..woh shona ko kuch kiya tho...nahi..nahi..mere hothe hue mei tume ko kuch nahi hone dhunga swara...mei aarahahum shona... tumareliye...delhi aarahahum...tume sab muzeebath se bachne keliye ..aur ek baar phir mere dil ki baath tumse kahunga...mujhe apnana aur nahi apnana..yeh tumari merzhi..par mei zindgi bar tumari parichai bankar rahunga...tume pyaar karunga..''

He smiled.. ''shonaa pyaar tho humse kya kya karvaatha hei...pehele kavita ke pyaar mein ,mei mera aur baki sab ki zindgi barbaad karne ki khoshish ki..phatak gaya mei...mujhe kuch samajh mei nahi aaya ki mei kya kar rha tha ...phir tum meri zindgi mei aaya..tumne mujhe pyaar ki asli matalab sikhaya..dhosti, risthe, visvash..woh sab mene tumse sikhaa..aur mujhe tumse pyaar hogaya..mei ab bhi yeha kahunga ki tumse pyaar karne keliye mei sorry nahi hei...woh meri zindgi ki sabse bada sach hei...shonaa mei tumse itna pyaar kartha hum...ithna ki..shayad iss dhuniyaa mei koi kissi se nahi kiya hoga...sach mei shonaa..mujhe nahi pata tha ki mei tumse kithnaa pyaar karthi hum...aur mujhe yeh bhi nahi pata thaki ... mujhe...Kab tumse pyaaar hogayaaa...I LOVE YOU ...shonaaa'' and he kissed her photo ( photo tho uski mobile mei hei)...and smiled

Here...swara bhi smiled in sleep...

Precap: dhooriyaan..

Swara: ''yeh khon hei...''???????????



Note: sorry guys for the delay...woh kya hene pooja holidays hei, so mei family ke saath outing pe gaya...

part 1-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4491760

part2-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4492383

Part 3- http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4493137
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