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Simply love it! Mostly having my favourites in same fiction... Show needs Msk to teach Ragini a lesson of her life...
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Originally posted by: MistiofMistz

Simply love it! Mostly having my favourites in same fiction... Show needs Msk to teach Ragini a lesson of her life...



thank u so much dear...i am very happy that u liked my story...😊
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Plzzz update.
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Plzzz update.
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I love this ff...but if u r not able to give time to this...then please complete in 2 or 3 episode...
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Originally posted by: Kiara.25

I love this ff...but if u r not able to give time to this...then please complete in 2 or 3 episode...



i am so sorry dear...😭 for delaying it...actually i am busy with my another ss KMYK...so forgot to update kab tumse pyaar hogaya...sorry...but i promise u that i will gave the next update on this sunday...😊
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Originally posted by: Kiara.25

Its been sunday...plz show some mercy...

My tender heart is going rolercoaster by eaiting soo much...
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dear...i am updating...😊
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hai friends i am back with a new update...and i am so sorry for the delay in update...and kiara..this is specially for u dear...

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Kab tumse pyaar hogayaaa

Part 11

Swara: "maa...sanskar aarahia hei..." and hugged shomi again everyone smiled by see her so happy...after a long time...

Shomi: " kyaa...shonaa..sanskar..kyaaa...???"

Swara: " haa..maa..sanskar yeha aarahi hei...maan bhai ki engagement keliye...wwooo...i am so happyyy..." she jumped happily


Swara: " maa...mei bahuth khush hum...bahuth khush...sanskar ne kaha ki woh Friday yeha aajavungi...nakul kakaaa..." she shouted and nakul comes there worriedly...

Nakul: " kyaa hua swara baby...aap kyun chillarahi hei...khuch chahiye aapko...???"

Swara: " kaka...woh sanskar aarahi hei...tho saari thayari kardhena...kamre ki saare saman change kardho...aur curtains blue waali rakdho...usse blue color bahuth pasand hei...aur kamre mei red roses bhi rakhlena...aur haa...khana... khane mei veg pulav & chilli gobi banadho...yeh sab time par thayar hona chahiye..."

Nakul: " ji baby..hum sab thayar karungi..." with that he turned to go but swara called him again

Swara: " kaka...ek aur baath bhi hei...usko gheer bahuth pasand hei...woh bhi banadhena...gheer mei bahuth zaara sakar bhi daaldhena...aur..." she went on with her blahberring but maan interrupted her

Maan: " bas shonaa...ab bas karona..sanskar Friday aarahi hei...aaj nahi...ab humko shopping bhi karna hei...chalo chalo...sab logh ghadi mei baito...aur shonaa...apna bak bak bandh karo aur tum bhi aajavo..." everyone smiled by maan's comment and swara pouted cutely..

Maan: " aur maa...issko tho mere favorite color bhi nahi pata..par sanskar ki har chees yaad hei...ohh god ...geet bhi mere khayal ithna nahi raktha..hum..sanskar...bahuth lucky hei...ki usko tum jaisa pyaar jo mila..." he said dramatically and swara blushed cutely and said unknowingly..

Swara: " nahi bhai lucky tho mei hum ...jo mujhe woh mila..."

Maan smiled and signaled everyone...just then swara come out from the trace and realized what she said in that flow...her eyes went wide with the realization...and she stammered...

Geet: " woh..bh..ai..mera..mat...lab..woh..hum...woh..."

Maan: " ohho shonaa...tume kabse stammering hogaya...kal tho tum mujhe bahuth tang kartha thana...RSK..ranjha bhai...hum .. kyaa khuch nahi kaha tumne...tho ab tume kyaa hua..." he smirked and swara pouted but her cheek turned red with blushing...

Dadimaa: " maan bte chalo...hum late horahi hei..." with that she pulled swara and swara runes from there with daadi...

Maneet looked each other and hi-fied..

Geet: yeh baabji...yeh tho woh saddu MSK hei...???? ...yeh kithana badal gaya..ab tho bilkul mera maan bangaya..." she pulled his cheek and said " hum..nice improvement my dear..."

Maan: " geee..eettt... "

Geet: " ohh.. mere cutie..."

Maan: " geettt... mujhe cutie mat bhulavo...aur ..tume..mei kis tharah se cute laga hei...aur agar tume aisa lagtha hei tho..mei tumara opinion badhal saktha hum..." and he comes really close to her ..."aur sirfe bathana nahi...mei tume dhika bhi sakthi hei ki mei kithni hot hei...tume dhekna hei kyaa..." he whispered and slowly kissed her earlobe... " geet ..bolo...tume ..dhekna hei..mere hotness..."


Geet shivered with his closeness

Geet: " maa..an..." she moaned

Maan: " kyaa hua geet bahuth sweating horahi hei kyaa...AC chahiye tume..." he smirked...but they interrupted by daadi's shouting..

Daadimaa: " maan...geet...aap dhono ki romance khatam hogayi tho ...aavo ...ghadi mei baito...aur agar aap dhono ko continue karna hei tho ...aap logh yehe ruko aur...hum chalthe hei..." everyone laughed by hearing this...maneet, who embarrassed with her comment looked every where except daadi...

Daadima: " maan..geet jaldi aavo...hum late horahi hei..." maneet runes to them and sated on the car...maneet and swara sat together in one...daadi, dida and shomi sat in another car...and they went to their destination...

At that time in Kolkata MM monsion

Sanskar completed his packing and comes down to the hall and saw that sujata sitting there with a gloomi face...

Sanskar: " kyaa..hua mom...ab kyaa sochkar aap pareshan hei...ab tho sab teek hua hena..ragini ki sachai bahar aagayi...aur swara bhi chali gayi ..tho ab aapko kyaa problem hei..." he taunted her

Sujata looked him angrily and said

Sujata: " tu rehene dho sanskar...tume bathane se khuch nahi hoga...tume tho tumari maa ki koi phikar bhi nahi hei...tum tho har wakth woh Bengali chori ki bare mei sochkar rahthi hei...tho tum rehene dho...mere haal puchne keliye koi nahi hei yehe..."


Samskar: " ohh mom... please...phirse shuru mat karo...mei ab aapse behaz karna nahi chatha...aur haa...maa se kehna ki mei baahar jaarahi hei...kuch urgent kham hei..."

Sujata: " par ...sanskar..mere baath tho suno..." but snakar went from there without listening her...


Sujata: " yeh baghavan...mei kyaa karu yeh chore ki...yeh tho ...aaj kal mere baath bhi nahi suntha...kyaa jaadu kardhiya woh Bengali chori ne...jijiii..." she cried and went to AP.

Here khurana's and bose's are entered in to the shopping mall...swara and geet walking excitedly by talking about dresses and ornaments...maan on the phone...instructing aadi about some project...dida, daadi & shomi also walking with them and gossiping about something...

Just then swara saw Annie & Arjun standing there...she screamed..


Swara: " annieee...diii..." and rushed to them

Annie: " shonaaa..." she also shouted and arjun closed his ears..

Swara rushed to annie and hugged her tightly...

Swara: " diii..." she hugged annie even more and cried... " mei aapko bahuth miss kiya dii...bahuth miss kiyaa...waha bahuth saare situation thi jaha mujhe ek behen ki zarurat thi...tab mei aapko bahuth yaad kiya...dii..." she cried

Annie pulled swara from her embrace and cupped her face

Annie: " tho mujhe bhulaya kyun nahi shonaa...waha ithna sab khuch hogaya ...aur tume mujhe batahana zaruri bhi nahi smajha...ek call karthi tho..mei dhodthi waha aathi...kyun shonaa...kyun hame khuch nahi bathaya..."

Swara: "sorry dii...uss wakth ragini ki betrayal ki wajhe se mei bilkul toot gayi...mujhe khuch samjhmei nahi aarahi dhi...sorry...pls mujhse gussa mat karo..." teras rolled from her eyes..


Annie wiped swara's tears and said: " ahre pagal...mei kabhi tumse gussa nahi hopavungi..tumtho meri pyaari behan hei...hum...ab rovo mat..." she kissed swara's forehead ... " ab chodo woh sab..aur baabaji ki bahuth kripa hei...ki tumare saath sanskar dhi waha..." she kissed swara again and again...everyone smiled by seeing this and shomi wiped her tears...

Maan: " ohho mere drama queen's ...ab bas karona...dheko sab loghone tum dhono ko ghur rahi hei..woh sab socha hoga ki MSK ki behan's pagal hogayi..." he laughed

Annie/ Swara: " BHAI..." they shouted

Maan: " ok..ok...ab rona dhona...bandh karo aur chalo...hamare pass jyada wakth nahi hei..." he pulled swara and annie and they went to one of the best designer shop...all ladies start their searthing programe...at that time arjun slowly pulled maan to a corner

Arjun: " maan bhai...is it your first time..."

Maan: " WHAT...!!!!!!!!.."

Arjun: " woh mera matlab hei ki...first time ladies ke saath shopping mei aarahi hei..hena..???"

Maan: " haa..par tume kaise pata..."

Arjun: " aapke excitement dheke pata chala...par maan bhai aap bahuth bade galti kiya..."

Maan: " kyaa hua..arjun ..tum aise kyun bolrahi hei..."

Arjun: " maan bhai...girls ke saath shopping..its not an easy job...aapko pata hei woh tho ek towel keliye pura shop ko ulta kardhungi...aur annie ke saath aathi ..tho bhi ghar jaane keliye raath hojavungi..par yeha tho pure family hei...mujhe tho lagtha hei ki...hum ghar jaane keliye kal subhah hojaavungi..." maan looked arjun with shock...he turned to his family and saw that girls are almost jumping on the cloths...his eyes went wide by that view...


Maan: " arjunn...ab hum kyaa kare...????"

Arjun: "khuch nahi bhai...yeha baito...aur sabki drama dhekthi raho..."

Both sat there and looked their pagal family...

Here swara, annie & geet are very busy with selecting lehenga...they selected so many lehenga's and each time geet went to maan with one and asked him that weather it is suited her...but each time he rejected them by some silly matter...at last swara shouted on maan

Swara: " maan bhai...agar aapko woh sab pasand nahi aathi tho..aap yeha aavo aur lehenga select karo...phir bhi nahi mila tho ...khud ek lehenga design karo...agar iss tharah lehenga select kiya tho hum aaj ghar nahi jaavungi.." she giggled and hi-fied with annie

Maan rolled his eyes and said

Maan: "shonaa...MSK ..ko sab khuch best chahiye...samjhi..."

Annie: " tho Mr.MSK...yeha aavo ...aur aapki best choose karo..."

Maan went there and started to select the lehenga...at last almost an hour ki baath...he select a lehenga for his misthi...its a pink & navi blue color lehenga and perfectly complemented our misthi's kubsoorath

Swara: "wow bhai..kyaa selection hei aapka..." in return maan smirked to her...after that they selected dress for annie...its a light blue colour saree with silver work on the border...then shomi, dida & daadi selected their dresses...

Now its swara's turn...she tried so many lehenga's ...but not liked anyone...she get upset with that...so went from there for some time...

Here sanskar driving his car...at that time something got his attention...a beautiful lehenga...

Sanskar: "ohh..its so beautiful..swarapar bahuth acha lagega..." so he parked the car and went to that shop...he brought that lehenga for his shonaa...and hold it...its a golden colour lehenga with hot red border...he caressed it and smiled..

Sanskar: " shonaa...yeh tumpe bahuth acha lagega..." and he called her


Here swara standing at a corner with a gloomy face...suddenly her phone ringed and she looked the called ID...and saw that sanskar is calling...within seconds her all fructuation's went away...she smiled widely and took the call...

Swara: " sanskaarrr..." she almost shouted..


Sanskar: " shonaa...kyaa hua tumare sound mei khuch pareshaani lagrahi hei...khuch problem hei kyaa...kyaa baath hei..????"

Swara: " woh sanskar...bhai ki engagement keliye lehenga..." but she interrupted by sanskar

Sanskar: "mei khareeda hei..."

Swara: " kyaa...khareeda hei...????"

Sanskar: " lehengaa...tumareliye..."

Swara's eyes went wide with that...and she got emotional by hearing him...

Swara: "sanskar...tum mereliye lehenga khareeda hei..." her eyes got moistened

Sanskar: " kyaa hua shonaa...aur ismei kyaa badi baath hei..mei tumareliye nahi tho kiskeliye lehenga khreedungi...aur isskeliye tum rovo mat..."

Swara wiped her tears and smiled: " kuch nahi...aur tume kaise pata ki mei rorahi hei..."

Sanskar: " bas pata hei..shonaa..mujhe tumare bare mei tumse jyaada pata hei..samjhe..."

Swara: " ohho...ithna confidence...hei.."

Sanskar: " haa..par confidence nahi...yakeen hei...mei tume tumse jyaada janthi hum..." she smiled by his words, but tears rolled from her eyes...

Sanskar with fake anger: "shonaa...mene kaha na..."

Swara: " haa baba...teeke...mei nahi rovungi...tum yeh bathavo ki lehenga ki color kyaa hei...??"

Sanskar: "nahi batavungi...tum khud dekhlo..par tab dheko...jab mei yeh tume dhedungi..."

Swara: " this is not fare sanskar..."

Sanskar: " all is fare in love & war...my dear..."

Swara: " SANSKARRR..." she shouted...maneet & others looked her and laughed...

Maan: " shonaa..kis duniya mei khoya hei...???" swara looked around and saw that everyone laughing at her...

Swara: " sanskar...mei tumse baad mei baath karungi..bye..." and she cut the call

Sanskar: " pagal..." and he smiled

Here swara comes to all and said

Swara: " bhai mujhe lehenga nahi chahiye,..."

Maan: " kyaaa...hua shonaa...agar yeha ki pasand nahi aayi tho hum koi aur chale...but tum upset mat hojavo..." he told worriedly

Swara: " ohho..bhai..mujhe lehenga issliye nahi chahiye...kyunki...mereliye lehenga sanskar khareeda hei..." she said to all while smiling widely...

All: " KYAAAA..."

Swara: " haa..."

Geet: " wow kyaa baath hei...shonaa..yeha pareshan hogayi..par sanskar waha se woh sab mitadhiya...ohho baabaji...kyaa pyaar hei..."

Swara: "bhabhi..." she shouted ...but her cheek turned red like a tomato...by hearing about sanskar..

Arjun: " tho girls ki shopping hogaya...tho hamari baari hei..."

Annie : " ok..my boss"

Then all went to men's section and selected shervani's for maan & arjun

Maan: " ab sab hogaya...hena...tho chale..." but swara interrupted him

Swara: "bhai..ek shervani bhi select karni hei..."

Maan: " kisko..???"

Swara: " mere sanskar keliye..."

Maan: " ohho...usko bhi chahiye..."

Swara: " bhai..tang mat karo aur select karne mei mere help karo..." she pulled maan and all started to select shervani for sanskar...

Everyone selected shervani's but swara rejected whole ...

Maan: " shonaa..yeh kyaa hei..tum tho har shervani ko reject kar rahi hei..."

Swara: " Mr.MSK...mujhe bhi best chahiye...tho aap chup chap yeha baito aur meri help karo..."


Maan rolled his eyes and sat there for selection...

After some time maan asked: " shonaa...ek baath bolo ..sanskar ki favorate color kyaa hei...???"

Swara: " blue..."

Maan to sales man: " show all blue shervani's..."

Then...after almost 2 hours...swara finally selected a blue shervani...

Maan: "ohh...finally select kiya...maana padega shonaa...tum tho Maan Singh Khurana se bhi aage bada..." swara giggled at him and hold that shervani very tightly...

Swara: " i hope ..tume yeh pasand aayega sanskar..."


Here in car sanskar also holding the packet...

Sanskar: " pasand aavungi...yeh tume bahuth pasand aavungi shonaa..."


Both smiled and hold their gifts very tightly...

Precap:

Swara: tum nahhi aavungi...

Edited by mridulakrishnan - 9 years ago
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Thank u so much..for a wonderful update...
N plzzz upload next part asap...

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