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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aabha_rawat

gosh awesome story plzz update next part soon




thank u dear...i will update the next chapter on sunday or monday...😊😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks...dear...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kab Tumse Pyaar hogayaaa





Part 9

Recap:'' Maan: hum..ab kaho..geet kya baath hei..???''

Geet: ''maan..woh...hum...''.

Maan: ''geet irritate mat karo baath kya hei...????''

Geet: ''maan mujhe lagtha hei...''

Maan: ''tume lagthe hei...'' he gave wet kiss on her neck and geet moaned

Geet: ''m..a..a.n...''

Maan inhaled her sent and said

Maan: ''bolo na misthi...''

Geet: ''maan ..i think..i think shona loves Sanskar...''

Maan withdrawn from her and said :''Kkyyaa..!!!''

Geet: ''haa maan..mei sach kehrahahei..mujhe 100% sure hei ki shona sanskar se pyaar karthi.. but woh iss baath ko abhi thak realize nahi kiya..she turned to maan ..maan hame khuch karna hoga ..khuch tho plan karke undhono ko milana hei..waise bhi sanskar tho swara ko pyaar kartha hena... aur mujhe bhi sanskar bahuth pasand hei..''

Maan: ''kyaa..tume sanskar pasand hei..geee..ttt...''

he glared her

Geet: '' ma..aan..'' she slightly hit him ''aap bhi na..woh tho mere bhai jaisi hei...ab aap mere pure bath suno...maan sighed...sanskar bahuth ache ladke hei..aur woh shona keliye perfect bhi hei...aur..haa.. agar shona..sanskar se shaadi ki ,,tho woh dhono yeha delhi shift karungi.. because Karma aur SA fashion ki head office yeha hena aur aapki dhono behan aapinazaron ki samne hoga..socho maan socho..hamare ek plan se dho dho karya hojavungi...No.1 hamare shona ko ek achi jeevansathi mljavunga ..No.2..aapki laadly shona aapse dhoor Kolkata nahi balki yeha hamare saath rahunga..kaisa hei hamara plan..'' she giggled and winked at maan

Maan: ''wow..geet kya baath hei...kyaa planning hei tumara..ek plan se mera pura problems solve kiya tumne...''

Geet: ''woh mei bachpan se aisehi maan..patha hei pure mohalle ki problems mei khud solve...'' but she silenced by maan

Maan put his finger on her lips and geet kept mum..

Maan: ''chup bilkul chup..miss hoshiyarpur express.. ab mere baath suno..mujhe patha hei ki shona ko sanskar se pyaar hogaya ..aur mene sanskar ko yeha lane keliye plan bhi kiya...woh friday yeha aajavungi...phir hum logh milkar shona ko uski pyaar ka ehsaas dhilavungi..teeke.''.he smirked and kissed he nose..

Geet: ''teeke..'' she giggled and hugged maan

At that time in Gadodia House

Shekar,dada & dadi are sitting in the hall,,ragini is hiding behind the door and listening their talk

Dadi: ''shekar..chora.. kab thak aisa baitogi..kal se tumne khuch nahi khaya aur peeya..aisa rahogi tho thumara tabhiyath kharab hojavungi..''

Shekar: ''tho kharab hone dho maa.. waise bhi mere zindgi mei ab khuch bacha nahi''

Dadi: ''aisa na kaho shekar...maana ki laado ne galti kiya..par usse sudharna hamara karthavya hei ..aur laado ko hum nahi tho khon samhalenga..???...meri baath suno...sekhar...''

But she interrupted by shekar

Shekar: ''nahi maa... aaj mei aapki baath nahi sununga...aapki baath sun sunkar ab mera yeh haal hogaya ..aur rahi baath ragini ki..woh galti nahi gunah kiya..apnehi behan ko maarne ki koshish ki ...woh galti nahi balki gunah hei...''

By listening this ragini comes there cryingly and said

Ragini: ''baba..mujhe maaf kardho..''

Shekar got angry by seeing ragini

Shekar: ''bas..ragini mene kaha na mujhe baba mat bhulavo..mereliye tum margayi..he turned to her and said ...''kyun ragini kyun yeh sab kiya...uss dhin tumne swara ko nadhi mei Dhaka diya aur yeha aakar tum hum sab ko yeh viswas dhilaya thaki swara shaadi chodkar baagi...tumne uski nakli video bhi bhanadhiya..chi...apne bahan na sahi...ek aurat ke saath ithna Gandhi harkath kaise kiya tumne...''

''Aur tumara best friend thana sanskar..par woh bhi kaha tum jhut bholrahi hei...aur dida..woh tho hospital bed se yeha aakar batahaya ki tum jhuti hei..par mene viswas nahi kiya...mere anko mei tho tumara pyaar ki patti thana..mene socha..mere ragini aisa nahi karogi...aur gusse mei mene mera pyaar mera misthi usse ristha thod dhiya...ragini..phir bhi tum chup raha...ek baar bhi tumne mere aur tumari maa ki bare mei socha..?? nahi na.. tumne tho sabke saamne bechari banne ka naatak kiya aur laksh ko haazil kiya...''

''Phir mere swara lautaya...aur mujhese baath karne ki koshi ki..par mei usse baath nahi kiya...baath karna tho dhoor ki baath hei..mene tho usse teek se dhekha bhi nahi...'' he smiled sadly...''mujhe kya patha mere beti moth se ladkar yeha aaya hei...mene tho yeha ragini ki shaadi manane mei bussy thana..mene meri shona ka dard nahi pehchanpaya..'' he looked dadi and said ''maa sab baap ne apne betiyoko apna dil ke pas rakungi par mei,, mere beti ko ghar ki bahar kardhiya..par mera swara...uss samay uski dil toota ..shaadi toota ,, phir bhi usne mere aur misthi ki ristha jhodne mei uski khushi dheka...aur uskeliye apne pure zindigi barbaad hone dhiya phir bhi mei swara ko nahi samjhpaya...kyu maa..kyun mei shona ki sachai nahi pehchanpaya...kyun maa..'' he cried loudly..shekar feel dizzy by weakness,,he was about to fall,, but dadi and ragini hold him before falling ,, but sekhar pushed ragini...''dhoor raho ragini..dhoor raho mujhse..koun ho tum..tum mere ragini nahi hai...mere ragini mar gayi hei..uss dhin swara nahi balki meri ragini nadhi mei giri aur mar bhi gayi...tum mera ragini nahi hosaktha...nahi hosaktha...'' with that he rushed to his room while crying...

And ragini breakdown and cried loudly..but usse sambhalne keliye ..koi nahi hei...

But here in khurana manzil

Swara entered to shomi's room and saw shomi is getting ready

Swara: ''maa..aap abhi thak ready nahi hui..??

Shomi:'' bas 10 mts shona ..kab thak tum gadi mei intezar karo..''

Swara: ''ok..maa..''with that she runned to car porch..

After 15mts...swara is walking left to right and cribbing to babaji..

Swara: ''ohh god..yeh logh abhi thak ready nahi hui..hum..jake garden mei wait karthihum...''and she went to garden and sit on the swing,, which kept there...and she looked around ,, saw the red roses..and remembered sanskar..

Swara: ''yeh sansakr khuch weirdhene...uski hobby bhi ... ohh god yeh kis tharah ki hobbi hei..gardening..!!!!..woh mujhe bhi ek gardener banadhiya...but woh gardening karthe huve kithne cute lagthe dhe ..uss wakth mene kithne tension mei thi..par ussne ek pal mei woh sab mitadhiya..''..she smiled and looked her phone..

Swara: ''no miss call..ek message bhi nahi kiya usne...yeh sanskar ek dhin mei mujhe bhulgaya..hum...usse yaad dhilana padega.'' with that she took phone and called sanskar..

Here sanskar is packing for his Delhi trip at that time his mobile bused,, he looked the caller id which bring a sweet smile on his lips...

Sanskar: ''swara ab tume mera yaad aagayi.''.and he took the call

Sanskar: ''swara...''he whispered..but on the other side swara went silent by his voice..she felt chocked ...usse nahi patha uss samay woh kya feel kar rahihei..''Swara''..sanskar again called ,,par swara ki mouth se sabdh nahi nikalpayi...she went mum..Unknowingly tears rolled from her eyes...

Precap:

Swara: ''tum nahhi aavungi...''😭😭😭

Edited by mridulakrishnan - 9 years ago
swethalovely thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Interesting and cool...
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Nice...
Geet and Maan!!!

Hayye Geet you are so intelligent!!

SwaSan Phone talk so emotional!!!

Continue soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank uuu...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Awesome update

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon



thanks uu so much...&&&& dear..i have a request ...pls continue jo tu mera humdard hei..eagerly waiting for swasans romance..pls..pls..pls..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Nice...

Geet and Maan!!!

Hayye Geet you are so intelligent!!

SwaSan Phone talk so emotional!!!

Continue soon!!


haa dear...geet is really intelligent..woh hame patha hena...😆&&&thanks for the comments...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mridulakrishnan



thanks uu so much...&&&& dear..i have a request ...pls continue jo tu mera humdard hei..eagerly waiting for swasans romance..pls..pls..pls..

Hey dear I know you all are waiting for the update but am on a holiday and I can't give updates for here as my mobile data is very slow (for giving likes and comments it takes forever )but I will surely give once I get back home...

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