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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
That just awesome...
LOVED IT TO CORE...

WHO IS THIS NEW ENTRY...

THE TRACK IS REALLY INTERESTING..

PLZ CONTINUE SOONšŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Namaskaaram!
Nalla start :)
Please cont soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.. Superb.
Loved it..
Plz do pm whenever u update next..
Can't afford to miss..
Tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kab Tumse Pyaar hogayaaa



Part6

Precap: Sanskar looked at his family...and saw their moist eyes...unknown to him tears slipped from his eyes...he excused from them and runed to his room.

DP looked sanskar's retreating figure and said

DP: ''Iske yeh halath hamare wajhe se hua, hamre ek galath faisle se.. agar uss din woh sab nahi hua tho...par sach mei Annapurna mei kavitha ko marna nahi chatha...'' not able to control his emotions he weeped ...everyone shocked to saw a vulnerable DP.

AP: ''aap saanth hojayiye, ab sab teek hoga.. Swara hena sanskar ke zindgi mein (laksh looked AP in anger) aur sanskar ne swara se pyaar bhi kartha hena.''

DP: ''Par swara ne sanskar ko pyaar nahi kartha ...tho kaise iss rishthe success hoga..''????

AP: ''Nahi ji...aisa nahi hei...mujhe tho lagha swara kho bhi sanskar pasand hei..aap sab ko yaad hena ki..Kaise swara ne sanskar ko hug kiya...aur jab ragini ne sanskar pe ganthi insam lagaya,, uss din hum sab ne sanskar par shak kiya...sirf swara jho he uss din uske saath kada..aur uske innocents prove bhi kiya...tho mujhe laga..hamare sankar ko swara se acha jeevan saathi nahi milega..aur agar humne swara ko sanskar ki zindgi mei laya...tho humne sanskar ke saath jho bhi paap kiya tha woh bhi kam hojavungi...''

Laksh irritated by these and leave from there...

DP: ''Tum shaayad sahi ho Annapurna...hame ek bhaar sharmistaji se baath karna chahiye.''..

Everyone smiled, but sujata murmur

Sujata: ''Yeh bhagavan, jiji ko kya zaroorat hei,, woh bangali chori ko hamari bahu banne ki...''

On the other side laksh comes to his room in an angry mode..

Laksh angrily: ''Inn sab ko yeh kya hogaya..yeha mei aur swara ek dusare se pyaar kartha ...aur sabko lagtha hei ki,, sanskar aur swara ache life partners banunga...yeh mei hone nahi doonga..swara mujhe pyaar kartha hei aur woh sirf mera hei...sirf mera...aur sanskar tum kithne bhi koshish karo...swara tume pyaar nahi karunga...'' with that he get ready for office.

At that time in khurana manzil

Sharmista is helping nakul for breakfast and geet comes there.

Geet: ''Aunty...mei aapki koi help karu...''

Sharmista turned by that voice and saw geet

Shomi: ''Aunty nahi geet... maa bhulavo...tum bhi meri beti hei..so aajh se tum mujhe maa kahunga..ok.''.

Geet get teary and hugged shomi..

Shomi: ''geet...javo,, jake yeh maan aur swara ko dedho...''she gave a cup black coffee for maan and tea for swara

Geet goes to swara's room and saw her sleeping ,, she looks so cute while sleeping.. geet tried to wake up her.

Geet: ''swara...swara...''

Swara murmured: ''sanskar..'' and turned other side

Geet angain called swara,, and swara in sleeping mode: ''Sanskar sone dho na...kyun ithne subah subhah chillarahe ho...''

Geet: ''swaraaa... mei sanskar nahi geet hei..wake up swara ...SWARAaa...'' she srceamed in swara's ear..and swara wakeup immediately

Swara: ''ohh wohh...bhabhi aap hei... mujhe laga...''

Geet: ''sanskar hei...''

Swara: ''haa..par aaapko kaise patha...''

Geet: ''isliye patha yeh ki, tum neendh mei,, mujhe bar bar sanskar bhulaya...geet smiled ..aur waise bhi pyaar mei kabhi kabhi aisa hota hei...''

Swara: ''nahi bhabhi ...aisa nahi hei,, mei sanskar ko pyaar nahi kartha ... woh tho mera best friend hei...aur khuch nahi...''

Geet: ''ohh...'' she smiled..

Geet: ''swara..tumara tea..'' she handed tea to swara,, but swara saw the black coffee..

Swara: ''bhabhi...maan bhai abhi bhi balck coffee peethi hei''

Geet: ''haa..swara..aur mujhe yeh nahi pata tha ki maan ithne kadva coffee kaise peethe'' .. geet make a puppy face and said ...''mujhe kabhi kabhi lagtha hei..yeh maan ko na...mujhe bhi zyaada iss black coffee par pyaar hei...har wakth yeh kehethe hei..Nakul...ek black coffee lavo...geeettt ek black coffee lake mere cabin mei aavo...'' geet went on by mimicking maan..and swara enjoyed it very much,, she realy liked it ...after some time geet come out from her blah blah world.. and saw a smiling swara..

Geet:''swara...tum kyun hass rahi ho..''?????

Swara still smiling and said: ''bhabhi aap maan bhai ko ache se mimick kar rahi hei..'' and she winked at geet.

Geet pouted cutely..

Swara: ''ohh..wohh..babhi aap sach mei bahuth cute hei...''and she hugged geet..''aur aapkeliye mei shone hum swara nahi ...samje aap...'' she make an angry face ...

Geet : ''ohh..samajh gaya meri maa...ab mei jaavu..mujhe maan ko uske black coffee dhena hei...nahi tho woh chillakke hamare ears thodungi...''

And she goes to maan's room,, but maan is not there.

Geet: ''yeh maan subhah subhah kaha chali gayi...kahi gym mei hoga...'' with that she turned to go,, but at that time maan comes from bathroom after freshening...he is only in his tracks..and his masculine fragrance spread all over the room ,, geet feel dizzy by that ,, she stood there still and drooled maan's upper bare body... maan naughtly comes to geet and pinned her to the wall,, geet caged between maan's hands and wall.

Maan: ''geet...'' he said huskily

Geet: ...

Maan: ''geet...''

Geet: ''hum..''still in dream land

Maan slowly kissed her rosy lips...and geet come out from her dream world

Geet: ''maan...aap yeh kya kar rahi hei..chodo mujhe...agar kissi ne dhekliya tho..'' she tried to come out from his hold ,, but maan hold her by waist and said..

Maan huskily: ''geet..tum ithne subhah subhah yeha kya kar rahi ho..''???

Geet: ''woh...woh mei..mei ..aapko ..coffee dhene aaya..''

Maan: ''coffee..'' he naughtly looked coffee then geet..and said.. ''par geet..coffee tho kithna kaduva hothi hei...aajh mujhe black coffee nahi chahiye..mujhe na..aajh khuch sweet peene ki mann hei...'' he learned close to her and told while looking her rosy lips

Maan: ''aur tum shona se kya kehraha tha ...mujhe black coffee se pyaar hei..ab mei tujhe dikatha hum mujhe kissi se pyaar hei...'' with that he learned to kiss her,, but geet pushed maan,, and maan landed on bed.

Geet giggled and quickly runed from there.. and maan smiled to her retreating figure and leave to get ready..

After sometime they all settled in the dining table ...maan on the center and his either side swara and geet settled...and dida, dadi, sharmista..on the opposite side

Everyone starts eating... and maan slowly take geet hand under table ..geet glared maan

Maan naughtly smirked and said

Maan: ''geet..ek cup black coffee dhedho..''

Geet looked maan angrily and gave coffe by other hand

Geet murmur: ''maan mujhe breakfast khana hei...''

Maan innocently: ''tho khavo geet ...mene kab tume khane se rokliya...''

Geet tried to pull her hand from his grip,, but maan hold it tightly...she became helpless and tried to ate with other hand..with a pout...

Dadimaa saw geet struggling with food and asked..

Dadimaa: ''geet bte...''

everyone looked her and maan drink his coffee with an innocent face..

Dadimaa: ''aap phir se,, yeh haath se khana khane shuru kardhiya...''???

Geet making a puppy face: ''Kya karu..daadimaa..ab mujhe iss hath se khana, khane ki aadath dhalna padega...''

Dadimaa: ''kyun..''????

Geet: ''Kyunki...dusare haath tho maan pakadkar rakha hena...'' and she lifted their hand to show them...everyone laughed loudly...and maan immediately leave geet's hand and glared her.

Swara: ''wow..dadimaa,, maan bhai tho kithna badal gaya,, rakshash bhai se bilkul ranjhaa.. bhai bangaya..''

Maan: ''mujhe khuch important kham hei... excuse me...'' and he runned from their teasings..

Dadimaa: ''maan bte...yeh kheer tho khaker jayiyena...''

Swara: ''daadi...maan bhai ko tho kheer pasand nahi na..''

Dadimaa: ''ab maan ko meeta bahuth pasand hei...hene geet..'' and she gave a teasing smile to geet ,, geet blushed.

Swara: ''daadi mujhe kheer chahiye...mujhe khana hei..woh kya hena..sanskar ko tho kheer ithna pasand hei ki, usne mere bhi kheer khathi hei...'' with that she started to eat kheer...others also enjoyed their breakfast...

In MM ,, sanskar's room

Sanskar sitting in his bed with a sad face ...

Sanskar: ''shona...i miss you very much,, aajh tum yeha hothi tho...kavitha ke baadh jho ek tum dhi mere pass,, mere dard share karne keliye...,, tum dhono ko tho pata hena..mere pass aur koi nahi hei..mere family bhi nahi..tho kyun chali gayi mujhe chodkar..Kavi..pehele tum gayi..aur ab shona bhi...'' he come to his wardrobe and take a photo from it, woh kavitha ki tasvir hei and said to kavitha..

Sanskar: ''Kavi..tum yeh math sochna ..thaki swara ke aane ki baad mei tume bhoolgaya...mei tume kabhi nahi bhoolunga..kavi..kabhi nahi...tum mere pehela pyaar hei ...aur tum hamesha mere dill mei hoga ...and tumare jaga aur koinahi lesaktha ..par swara ne apne liye ek alag jaga bangaya...aur ab mere dhil sirf uskeliye dadktha hei...kavi mei tumse pyaar kartha tha...aur abhi bhi kartha hei tumare marne ki baad bhi ..hamare pyaar tho alag hei...but mei ab swara keliye jho feel kartha hena woh alagh hei...

he settled in coach

''kavi...pehele mujhe usse pasand nahi tha kyunki woh laksh ki pyaar tha, aur mere nazar mei woh ek aise ladki hei jho uski behen ki pyaar ko cheenliya...tab mei ragini ki saath thi aur mei ragini ki drad and mere revenge mei blind thi..mujhe aur khuch nahi dikha dhetha tha...aur revenge ke chakar mei ,, mene swara ke saath kya khuch nahi kiya ...phir kabhi kabhi mujhe usme sympathy aagaya hei...issliye mene usse mohini se bachaya..aur mere truth swara ke samne aaya...tume pata hei kavi ..usne mujhe family ke saamne expose nahi kiya,, bhalki usne mujhe samjaya...uski woh responce se mei bilkul shoked hua...aur mene revege se peeche hatgaya...ragini ko bhi samjane ki pure khoshish ki...par woh phycho nahi samjha..and swara ko marne ki koshish ki...par meine usse dhundliya...tume pata hei kavi,, swara ko uss halath mei hospital mei dekhar mujhmei kya bheethi...nafrat thi mujhe apne aapse ...kyunki mere wajhe se usse woh sab hua...woh bhikul toot gaya..kavi..par mene usse motivate kiya..phirse mandap jaane keliye ...par hum late hogay..tooo late...laksh tho gusse mei ragini se shaadi ki...swara ki maa-baaba ki ristha bhi tooth gaya..sabne mere aur swara ki baathon ko galat samjhaa...funny hena kavi...jab mei galath ki saath hei,,tab sab mujhe sahi samjha..aur jab mei sach ke ssath gada..mei sabke nazar mei galath bangaya ...par swara ne haar nahi maana ,, woh ragini ki sach ko bahar lane ki pure koshish ki..par har baar ragini bach gaya..aur sabke samne hume jootha sabhith khardiya...sabne swra ko kithni insult ki,, par woh tho ek muskurath se sab sehan kiya...waise bhi woh muskurathe hi bahuth ache lagtha hei..aur mei khuch bhi karke uske muh mei woh smile aana chatha tha...mujhe lagtha ..uss time se mujhe woh pasand hei..aur mei usse bahuth respect bhi kartha hei,, kyunki uske soch sabse alag hei..woh pehele uski nahi,, baki sabki bare mei sochtha hei..kahi uski yeh swabhavh ki karan mujhe usse pyaar hogaya...mujhe pata tha woh laksh ki pyaar thi,, phir bhi mujhe usse pyaar hogaya...tab mujhe samajh mei aaya ki ,, swara ko kaise lucky se pyaar hogaya ...pyaar tho kisi karan se nahi hoga...woh bas hogavunga...tho mujhe bhi hogaya..pyaar ...swara se...

Kavi...bahuth pyaar kartha hum mei usse ...bahuth pyaaar...he smiled and said i love you shonaaa...

Precap: Swara smiled widely by seeing the caller ID...

Edited by mridulakrishnan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Awesome update.
Lakshya has totally crossed over to the dark side, hasn't he?
Loved Sanskaar's conversation with Kavitha's picture. Geet and Maan were as adorable as always. Will the next part contain Durga Prasad and Annapurna talking to Sharmishta?
Precap is adorable. Swara's reaction to I am guessing Sanskaar's call is so cute.
Continue soon, please.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Fantastic
Swara missing sanskar
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
amazing
sanskar prologue was awesome he is really sorry for wht he did
lovely waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Nice 😊
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Nice update..
This story is different and I like the concept..
Thanks for PM 😊

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