Sanskaar Chronicles! Updated part 6,7,8,9,10; page 24 to 25 :) - Page 8

Originally posted by: Cintila

Hey ! Just read both the parts. This is freaking amazing..!

Soo different and intriguing. Do update soon.😃

Originally posted by: ros_aavir

Fab update!

Loved the chess analogy 😃

Cont soon!

Originally posted by: harininaidu

superb

Originally posted by: swa291

Its good to read things from sanskars pov.

Originally posted by: ExpectoPatronum

Loved the story!!!

Originally posted by: Sakura24

This exactly is Sanskar as I pictured him at the start of his character, an inner battle of god and devil inside his hell of a mind. His attraction to Swara is quite interesting too. Your plot is shaping up perfectly, can't wait for the next part.

PS: thanks for the PM!!!

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Fantastic update dear 👏
You captured his emotions so well. He is trying to not get attracted towards Swara and treat her only like a pawn.
This is something brilliant.
Can't wait to read more 😳

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Hey read both the part...

They are awesome...

Loved it...

Continue soon

Originally posted by: .Sarcasmazing.

Wow! This keeps getting better & better :O

I absolutely LOVE how you keep adding the bits of cosmic connection between them. The tiny bit of God laughing when you tell him your future plan, damn did that ring true 😲 As always it is, Man proposes, god disposes AND plans something even better ;)

I love it that Sanskaar still has that semblance of humanity & sympathy in his heart even in his darkest phase. God does revenge blind you or what :( I am glad Sanskaar is never going that dark path again & will use his grey twisted ways for the greater good. But seriously, it's amazing to see him lurking behind & manipulating Lakshya, Swara & Ragini's life ever since the beginning & using them as pawns. Love that chess analogy & that bit about his biggest pawn turning into his queen in this game of chess he's laid, mind again blown away! Easily my favorite part in the whole update <3 Dammit I can't wait to read more, can you please update the next part already? This time longer please, my shipper heart is selfish 😆

Glad to know you like reading my incoherent bokwaas KDR's 😳😆 That soul connection scene is absolute effin brilliance ❤️ Nobody can be endgame except SwaSan after that & I am really a sucker for divine cosmic connection stuff :P Yep Kavya here :D & may I know your name too Banjaaran ji? Quirky UN, love it ⭐️

Update soonish please! <3 Thank you for the PM :)