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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

What is this sanskar??

U liked both Swara and ragini...

tough his target is Swara he is also with ragini...

Wah Wah!!

So Swara has heard about SAnkar for lucky!!!

Great..

I really wanna see SwaSan friendship next...

imagining how Swara will handle this Sanskar..

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Lol dragon Dadi 🤣 This was too funny 😆
He recognised Swara's voice aww 😳 They have a connection ❤️
Lovely update Nimmi (right?) 👏
Btw i'm Preet 😆

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

My dear ... you are portraying wonderful emotions, circumstances in your update...I'm really really astounded.

For once, Laksya has been brought into character in a wise manner...his pain and happiness seeing Saksnkaar...very very brotherly...siblings in arms.

In a way, even though Sanskaar was behaving like a child or mad person...his thoughts of the dragon grannny, about this duppata wali friend...it all sounds very youngish...it gives a kind of feeling that the guy who has been portrayed as 'the legendary Sanskaar' is actually a young man...this I really appreciate...Laksya and Sanskaar are of same age but somehow it has been made to feel as if Sanskaar is more mature, saintly ...come on give the guy some space...you gave him that...👏

For me, reading the below mentioned line, made me gruff, I walked into a meeting with a smile on my face... I wonder what my leadership team thought of me... 😲

And he really should let Laksh be part of this mad hatter family of saintly young sisters and Satan's mommy for granny.

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Lifez_Beautiful

@Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

WoW dear!!! U hv gotta winner here! A very very interesting read! Especially the subtle humor laced dialogues are the cherry on top! And those dragon daadi lines just cracked me up! 😆

Grt work! Do continue soon and plz do PM me! 😳

- luv Niki

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

ohh ..I love it..All 3 parts in a go ..👏

Your title pulled me here ..anything to do with sanskaar u know😳 😆

but this is awesome..It's like giving a entire new perspective to the whole drama ..from POV of sanskaar which makes it even more intriguing..The 3rd part its like I can imagine the scene I watched in serial but it feels like different version

I will stop here I think I am going round round .😆.but reminds me of midnight Sun ( Twilight From edwards POV) ..Could nt help mentioining it ..

Ok In short cant wait for coming parts..to peep more in sanky's mind ofcourse when heart comes into picture ..I am sure it gonna be like ..WOW

Grt Job👏 ..Keep the chronicles coming👍🏼

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Thank you sooo much you wonderful people for the appreciation and your beautiful comments
you made my day, night, entire well.
🤗

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will reply in detail soon.
and apologies for not sending pms. issues here.😳...

Thanx a ton lovely ladies..
*big hugs all over again!*

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
""What a grouch!
May be the best revenge against Laksh would be letting him become son-in-law of that dragon.""

This made me go 🤣🤣 Very true, very true!!

I liked how you have given a hint of the "cosmic connect" between Sanskaar and Swara again in this chapter--via Swara's feelings of concern and protectiveness for the poor "not-so-little, tall and lanky" Sansku. 😉

Very entertaining update, and Man, is Sanskaar Machiavellian in his plotting, or what? He must have learned by rote, Chanakya Niti & The Art of War. 😉Fascinating character, I like exploring the grayness, the layers, edges and shades inherent in personas like Sanskaar's. (Or AP's or even Ragini's for that matter). Sometimes, serials tend to reduce complex personas into black or white, reductive portrayals. Am so glad you are not doing that.

Looking forward to the next update! 😊

Pole postion again..
🤗..

that's my girl..

alka ji is a fab actor but man! dadi does gives me dragon vibes. Sanskaar can call out the love of his love for her mahanta (Swara mata ki jai ho) why would he spare dadi for her grouchiness.

i just lub the cosmic connection between sanskaar and swara..❤️.

chanakya niti!.. yup Sanskaar probably would use it as a bed time right from his childhood. i could clearly see him doing that. for some reason i visualize him as excellent chess players and deadly fencer. his lanky frame and that sharp mind is made for a deadly sport like fencing.

and same pinch. i love grey!
black in too in your face.
too much of white hurts my eyes.
gimme grey any day.

thank you so much for your comment Viji..
🤗

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: harshsriti
I'm reading third update today itself. feels happy. .. this part slightly connected with the serial scene na? you captured sanskar's mind very well. . there may be somany complicated feelings dragged his mind.. you written it beautifully. .. this update also excellent one... continue soon. . and one more thing.. l'm Jwala. . plz tell me your name...

thank you so much jwala..
🤗..

Must say you have a terrific name. sounds powerful.

i am nimmi😳..
so good to see ya.

and yes this part is connected to the serial. in fact lot many future parts would be connected. with my imagination thrown in between. it is Sanskaar's journey after all.

thank you so much for you kind words jwala.
so happy
love..

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: sadhana.np
Wow awesome..
I just read all the 3 parts
Liked it 😊

thank you so much sadhana for reading, liking and the compliment😳..
🤗

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Sakura24
Well swara should be careful now, a tall and lanky problem is coming her way, I liked the way she felt about him, there is indeed a connection between them. I loved sanskar's input about the gadodia and maheshwari families, too fun a treat!!
This is going really great! I love it to pieces!!!

😆
yeah she should be really careful.
come to think of it. he should be too. she is coming in his way too. literally.

aww.. thank you so much for liking it Sakura.
🤗

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