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Posted: 9 years ago
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Humdard

Swara was pacing up and down the room it was the day of her final audition.
Today her dream of singing infront of her idol was going to come true...but what if she messes up? What will happen?
She bumped into Sanskar
'Swaraaa...phir se?''
'Sorry Sanskaar par mujhe chaan nahi mil raha hai''
'its ok swara kuch nahi hoga''
He makes her sit down.
'yeh lo''
'yeh kya hai?''
'kholo''
She unwraps the box and comes out a beautiful white dress. Swara gently runs her finger on it.
'kaisa hain?''
'bohut sundor''
Sanskaar kneels down infront of her
'main tumhe iss dress mein dekhna chahta hoon swara''
Swara looks at him..his eyes...how could she refuse...
like an obedient girl she goes to change.


After a while she comes out, wearing the dress given with love...by love...
Sanskaar was sitting on his bed but seeing her he gets up as if a royalty has stepped in and it was his duty to honor her highness.
His breath was taken away, she looked so mesmerizing.
Sanskaar went near her.
She avoided the look and headed towards the mirror and sat in front of it, but could she stop him? No. he followed her o the mirror and stood behind her.
Slowly he took out a cute pendant.
He bowed down near swara's ear and hung the pendant in front of her face, she looked at it.
it was so bright and shinny just like herself
'kya mujhe haq hai swara?'' he whispered in her ear.
his breath, his voice made chill ran down her spine. Her heart beat increased.
She slowly removed her hair. The old Swara would never had allowed this but this was someone new this was Swara Maheshwari...
With extreme care he put the necklace around her. So smooth her skin was, how was he resisting himself from kissing it? Even he didn't know. Her fragrance spell bounded him and he kept staring at her. Slowly she looked back and met his eyes.
It was so full of love and was earning for love.
His face so perfectly structured
How was she resisting herself from not holding it kissing it? even she didn't know.
Sanskar kneeled down beside her not breaking the eye lock.
In a calm gentle voice he spoke
'kaal hum jaa rahe hain aur shayad wo humara akhri safar hoga kyunki janta hoon ki tum Kolkata jake hi divorce papers sign kar doge...maine tumse bohut bar kaha hain ki main tumse pyaar karta hoon shayad tum nahi samjo ge kitna par tum yeh janlo bhale hi humara safar kaal khatam ho jai likin main hamesha tumhara humsafar rahunga. Zindagi ki har mor har rahein paar main tumare saath hunga...''
he looked down and his voice proved that how badly he was trying to hold back his tears
'Tumhe lakta hain maine tumhara bharosa tora tumse pyar karke likin yeh meri baas mein nahi tha likin jante ho Swara agar hota tabbhi main tumse pyaar karta...''
he looked up with teary eyes
No he was not lying his eyes were his biggest proof
he will never break her trust her heart
he will be her confident her peace...
Swara closed her fist
her heart was in her mouth
His words were so magical...so simple yet so assuring
she sighed.
''Sanskaar''
she spoke looking down
his heart started beating fast
maybe she will say something...something positive...negative...or anything
'Chalo hum mein der ho rahi hain''
she got up and went out of the room
leaving behind a boy who sat there with all hopes, dreams being shattered into pieces. He knew how badly he wanted to shout and cry and hold her, ask her why was she doing this to him??
Bu he won't do that because
Swara do der ho rahi thi...
Swara ko...
her time was more precious to him than his more broken heart...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Excellent story👏
loved all parts😊
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: The-Heart

Excellent story👏

loved all parts😊
continue soon



thanks a lot dear
do stay hooked for the next updates😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
that was amazing..
emotions r beautifully portrayed !!
waiting for next update !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shikha022

that was amazing..
emotions r beautifully portrayed !!
waiting for next update !!



thanks alot shikha
and i am sorry i couldn't pm you as IF wasn't allowing me to send any link

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update! 😊
Loved how Swara is allowing Sanskaar to show his love now 😳
Their hidden desire to kiss each other ☺️

My heart broke for Sanskaar. 🥺 So much hope built up and she just walked away.. 😭
Waiting for the next chapter.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
It's simply awesome... Loved it...!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Swara plz don't do this to Sanskaar. Hw can u be so insensitive?
I felt like crying at the last para.

Nyways continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 8
Judaai


They entered the venue. It was a 20 min drive and a 20 minute of sience. Swara jumped with joy as soon as they entered the venue and why wouldn't she he ma, baba and dida all were there.

'Maa ap log yaha??' she hugged her mom.
'haa shone Sanskaar ne phone kiya tha hum mein''
She looked at him and gave him a gentle smile as a token of appreciation.
'hum mein tujh pe garv hai beta'' said Shekhar

Sabhi contestants ko green room mein ane kiliye anurudh kiya jata ai

Swara went to the greenroom

'Maa''
'ha sanskar beta bolo''
'mujhe apse kuch baath karni hai''

Swara was in the green room when her phone rang.

'Shona tu zara bahar a sakti hai''

Swara went outside to meet her mom.
Sharmishta was standing alone in the garden.

'kya ua maa apne mujhe bulaya?''
'haa shona tujhse kuch puchna tha''
'haa maa boliye?''
'kya tu yaha se vapaas jaane ke baad hi sankaar ko talaq de degi?''
swara was expecting this but she didn't know what to say. She was quite.
'bol baccha de degi na?''
she was again quite.
'mujhe pata tha beta tu use talaq de degi...tu isiliye chup hai na ki agar tu ha bolegi tou main tujhe datungi? Nahi beta nahi datungi main tujhe. Balke main tou khush hoon tu Sanskaar se better husband deserve karti hai''
Swara looked at her mom, her mom never really appreciated this marriage but she never said anything ill about sanskar. She was mystified.
'tu yahi soch rahi hai na ki main yeh kyun bol rahi hoon? Beta tu khud hi soch Sanskaar ka kya bharosa hai pehle vo apne parivaar se itna pyaar karta tha phir usi parivaar ki khilaf saazish rachi ab pir se vo kehta hai ki vo badal giya aisei insaan ka kya bharosa shona...
'nahi maa sanskaar bohut pyaar karta hai apne parivar se...
'aur phir dekh usne tere saath bhi tou yehi kiya na...har waqt girgit ki tarha rang badal ta hai...kisi ka apna nahi ho sakta...
'maa yeh kya keh rahi ho tum?? Tum yeh sab bol rahi haun? Tum tou achi tarha se janti ho ki Sanskaar kaisa hai kaise usne haar waqt har paal mera saath diya...jab koi nahi tha tab wo tha...meri khushi meri mushkile yaha tak ki mere sapne har chiz ka kheyal rakha usne...jab pura parivar mere khilaf khara tha jab uski ki khudki maa ne mere character ko lekar saval khara kiya tab bhi usne mera saath diya mere liye jhootei kasam khai jooti shaadi ki isme uska kiya faida hua maa?? Kuch bhi nahi usne mujhe jitney khushi di maine usei utnei hi gaam mere maa baba ko milane kiliye khud apne ghar se nikaal geya mere vajase apne bhai ki saath laar utha..aur kiya karega wo maa aur kitne sabot dega apne achayika apne begunahi ka ...apne pyaar ka??''

'yehi sawaal tu apne aap se puch na shona''

Swara was knocked for six and now she realized that her mom just wanted to make her understand something. But did her mom know that she understood it a long time ago today she just accepted it.
She was looking down tears rolling down her cheeks. Sharmishtha held her arms.

"Shona main janti hoon beta Sanskaar kitna acha hai aur wo kitna acha paati hai, uska kabhi bhi koi matlab nahi tha phir bhi vo tere saath tha...har waqt har paal...phir tu kyun uska saath nahi de na chahti?? Aj tere greenroom mein jaane ke baad vo mere paas aya tha aur pata hai usne kiya kaa? Usne mujhse aur shehkhar se waada manga ki hum aaj ki baad tere upar koi dawab na dale divorce ko lekar aur agar tu aaj iss competition mein jit jaaye ya agar na bhi jitei tou tujhe hum azaad kar de koi bandish ei na ho tere zindagi mein''

Swara looked up she didn't know what to feel.

'Sanskaar aaj raat hi Kolkata wapas ja raha hain divorce papers sign karne kiliye. Maine tujhe kabhi kisi chiz kiliye dawaab nahi diya aaj bhi dungi likin tujhse yeh zaroor kahungi ki koi humdard agar tumhe itna sukoon de tou ussei acha humsafar koi nahi ho sakta''

Sanskaar was lost in driving heading towards Kolkata when suddenly his phone started ringing.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I read all d parts in 1 go...n i simply luvd it👏 i luved how ur words potrayed sanskar so well
...plz update soonish !!! :)))
and accpt my buddy request plz if possible!! :)
Edited by indrani7495 - 9 years ago

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