Swansan OS: Woh Humsafar tha...(part12 page18)updated - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Lovely update!
Liked how Swara ended up appreciating Sanskaar while defending him. ⭐️
Shomi gets the biggest jhappi 🤗

Can't wait for Swara's confession. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: indrani7495

I read all d parts in 1 go...n i simply luvd it👏 i luved how ur words potrayed sanskar so well

...plz update soonish !!! :)))
and accpt my buddy request plz if possible!! :)



already did dear
btw is that your name?? indrani??
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
superb update as always..
but cum on suspense m kyun chod diya 😭
waiting for next part curiously !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: ramisaaAli



thanks alot shikha
and i am sorry i couldn't pm you as IF wasn't allowing me to send any link



ohh.. its ohk 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramisaaAli



already did dear
btw is that your name?? indrani??


Yep dats my name!! :))
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: indrani7495


Yep dats my name!! :))



i am ramisa😊

finally got a friend here😛😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Nice story.
Plzzz pm me about update.
Plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: avihothi

Nice story.

Plzzz pm me about update.
Plzzz



sure dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Part 9


Swara was standing in the middle of the stage facing the audience. The mike was in her hand but she was not able to sing. Everyone was there her maa, baba , dida and her idol...Shankar Mahadevan the man infront of whom she always wanted to sing. But now more than anyone else she wanted to see one man just one man but he was nowhere to be seen.

'Swara Bose ap apka gana shuru kaar sakte hain''

But swara didn't move an inch

kya sanskaar sach mein chala jayega ...

kya humara rishta tooth jayega...


Swara Bose please start singing

All the memories start surrounding her

Main hoon na Swara

I love you Swara

Main aapne pyaar ka haq kabhi nahi jataunga


Swara Bose...

I love you swara...

Swara couldn't bear it anymore nothing seemed more important to her than her beloved husband and now the most important thing for her was to stop Sanskaar.
She throws away the mike and rushes outside...she climbs down the big stairs of the auditorium holding her long white dress. As soon as she reaches the bottom she comes to an abrupt halt.
The most unexpected person was standing infront of her.
Swara was frowning and looking at the person from bottom to top.
A vicious smile appeared upon her face...eyes glittering with the happiness of victory.


'Ragini''

The lady in green attire started to move towards swara walking like a nagin.

'Ghari ki sui ko ghuma kaar aaj humne tumhe humari jaga laake khara kaar diya hai Swara
Kabhi tumne china tha humari khushiya...tou aaj humne chinliya tumhara''

Ragini slowly raises her hand covered in red.
Slowly she opens her palm revealing the sacred mouli ...covered in blood.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks😊

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