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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Yaar want more
Update next part asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: -Ros-

Hey😳

Really liked how you described Swara as wounded, wingless bird..⭐️ Her angst and panic was wonderfully shown, especially when she goes hysterical, threatening the firemen to taker her with them.

Aww she ran like a superwoman to her man... When Sanskaar finds out he won't be too happy though.. "Are you a superwoman?" wala dialogue will defo me marred, just like in the recent epis!😉
Looking forward to the next update.

PS: Listening to Judai definitely helped me to connect with Swara's emotions more. Nice touch!😊



Bold: this is why this part is called Toofani dariya se bagavaat kar jaye voh ishq😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Yaar want more

Update next part asap



haha sure yaar it is already on its way 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amrtina

Awesome update

Plz continue soon



sure
and thanks😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOH HUMSAFAR THA...


swara was sitting outside the operation theatre the doctors said sanskar was critical and lost lot of blood. Why did it all happen? Because of ragini? No. It was her, it was her for whom all this happened. Sanskar had no relation with ragini she came to his life because of swara. Swara was the reason for all the troubles in his life. And now he was fighting for life because of her. She started walking in the corridor, lost in her own thoughts


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She couldn't take it anymore.. the guilt, the pain, she ran out of the hospital. It was a windy night. She ran and ran until she reached the lawn. Suddenly she tripped but someone caught her. She looked up slowly. It was sanskaar. Giving his vibrant smile, wearing a white t-shirt with white blazer, he looked more handsome than ever.
's-s-sanskaar' swara was all in tears
'aise dor k kaha ja rahi thi meri superwoman'
''tumhare paas, tumhe dhundne'' swara tilted her head abit
'mujhe??'' sanskaar crossed his arms 'maine tou socha tum mujhe apne zindagi mein nahi chati mujhse alag hone cha...''
Swara put her fingers on his lips and shook her head 'main maar jaungi sanskaar, mujhe yeh bardash nahi ho raha hain, tumse doori tumhara dard''
Sansker held her hand 'kuch maat bolo swara chalo mere saath''
They walked in the dark night the only light present was the moonlight. She kept staring at him for once she didn't want him to be away from her for a single second now. Finally he looked at her.
'Humari rishte ki shuruwaat bari ajeeb thi swara shuru hua shakh aur badle se likin dekho kaha ageya yeh rishta, tumse badla lene ki iraada tha likin tumhe ab badle se bachana maksaad ban geya...mushkilei aye,ilzam laage, vishwaas tuta, likin phir bhi kuch na kuch vaje se yeh rishta nahi tuta. Tou jab itne saare toofan iss rishte ko nahi tor paye tou yeh toofan kaise tore gi? Tor paayegi swara??''
'nahi'' whispered swara
Sanskarr holds her hand and brings her close to him
'hum ek hain''
'aur hamesha rahenge'' completed swara

'shona?''
Swara slowly opened her eyes to find herself sitting in the lawn. She looked around and saw no one was there except for her mom.
'tu yaha kya kar rahi hai??''
'maa voh sanskaar''
her mom smiled 'tere sanskaar ko osh ageya beta''
swara didn't even stand there to let her mother know about her happiness but her mom could guess it from the way she ran towards the hospital, for her love, her life.
finally she reached his room
slowly she turned the knob and the door opened revealing sanskaar surrounded by tubes and machines.
she slowly walked towards him with every step guilt forfeited her and joy conquered her, the joy of him being safe and sound.
She sat on a tool beside his bed.
the only sound in that room was the beeping of the machines.
She held his cheek with one hand and brought herself close to his other cheek.
With immense care she kissed it, symbolizing her approval to be his.
She kept staring at him for how long she doesn't know
Sanskaar slowly opened his eyes.
''swara'' he whispered
Swara smiled.
'Ek faisla kiya tha maine'' began swara 'kabhi pyaar na karne ka faisla, likin kya paata tha mujhe ki yeh dimaag iss dil ki samne haar jayega'
'tumhari achayi,tumhare bharosa, tumhari mohabbat ki samne jhuk jayega, mere ankhan pe pare uss parde ko kaise haata diye tumne? Dil ke darwaaze kis chabi se khola tumne? Zindagi main aye humdard banke dekhte hi dekhte sukoon ban geye..'' she rubbed his cheek. 'tumhari judaai mere liye tanhai ban geyi, tumhari dard mere liye saaza, har haq hei tumhe mujhse alag hone ka mere diye huye ghao ka badla lene ka par mujhe apna ap se dur karne ki saaza maat do please'' and she broke in tears.
Sanskaar was very weak his hands were injected with saline but gathering all his strength he held her hand which was on his cheek.
Swara kept looking at him with teary eyes and he kept looking at her with longing eyes
she got a bit closer and touched his cheek with her forehead
'I love you sanskaar''
All the pain, suffering, longing ended for him. His whole body seemed to get fill with a holy cure which removed all his agony and the whole joy came out as one single drop of tear enough to let her know of his thoughts.
Swara lifted her head. She moved sanskar abit, carefully, making room for herself, and laid down beside him.. No it didn't hamper him or his body, because it was love, it only cures. She laid beside him and put her hand around his waist and her head on his chest.
'dard ho raha hain?'' she looked up at him.
'nahi sukoon mil raha hain'' and he kissed her forehead.

~~The End~~


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey 😳
Wonderful ending to a wonderful story.

'tumhari achayi,tumhare bharosa, tumhari mohabbat ki samne jhuk jayega, mere ankhan pe pare uss parde ko kaise haata diye tumne? Dil ke darwaaze kis chabi se khola tumne? Zindagi main aye humdard banke dekhte hi dekhte sukoon ban geye..'' she rubbed his cheek. 'tumhari judaai mere liye tanhai ban geyi, tumhari dard mere liye saaza, har haq hei tumhe mujhse alag hone ka mere diye huye ghao ka badla lene ka par mujhe apna ap se dur karne ki saaza maat do please''
👏👏👏

I have said, this before, but your dialogues are amazing!
Thank you soo much for the PM, hope you write more!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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the ending was hearttouching especially dreaming of him totally awesome dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98


thank you so much😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Ros-

Hey 😳

Wonderful ending to a wonderful story.

'tumhari achayi,tumhare bharosa, tumhari mohabbat ki samne jhuk jayega, mere ankhan pe pare uss parde ko kaise haata diye tumne? Dil ke darwaaze kis chabi se khola tumne? Zindagi main aye humdard banke dekhte hi dekhte sukoon ban geye..'' she rubbed his cheek. 'tumhari judaai mere liye tanhai ban geyi, tumhari dard mere liye saaza, har haq hei tumhe mujhse alag hone ka mere diye huye ghao ka badla lene ka par mujhe apna ap se dur karne ki saaza maat do please''
👏👏👏

I have said, this before, but your dialogues are amazing!
Thank you soo much for the PM, hope you write more!



thaanks alot Ros 😃

and if i write any thing new i will definitely PM you 😊

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