Swansan OS: Woh Humsafar tha...(part12 page18)updated - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
nice story..plz continue..
luvd how sanskaar is telling ki dil kabhi galat ni hota...
hope swara realises her luv for him...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 5
Ehsaas...


Sanskaar slowly laid Swara down in her bed. Taking his hands away from her as carefully as he could making sure not a single disturbance awakens her but he was unsuccessful. Swara moved and clutched onto his hand as he was about to move it away from her neck. He wanted to take it away but how could he take away her peace? He sat down on the bed and allowed swara to keep her head on his hand and hold it with her hands as If it was a precious piece of treasure maybe to her it wasn't but to him her comfort was priceless. Indeed everything related to swara was beyond price to him. Sanskaar never thought he would fall in love with any other girl other than Kavita but he did and now he had no idea how he would live without her. YES he knew that he will have to leave her someday because she will never accept him or his love. He even knew she will not choose his brother, lakhsya. He knew her he didn't know how but he just knew...her, her dreams, her needs, her desires.

Swara woke up yawning and found the sleeping sanskar beside her leaning against the bed stand. Watching his hand she realized what happened. She wanted to wake him up but she couldn't. She looked away and was about to leave the bed but then she turned again. She doesn't know why...why she wanted to look at him again maybe because it was giving her peace. His calm innocent face was attracting her and she kept staring at it. How did you fell in love with me Sanskaar and why
unknowingly her hand moved towards his face it was inches away when the phone rang waking both of them up..

Swara picked up the phone

'hello''
'Swara bose?''
'Ji bol rahi hoon, aap kaun?''
'ji main Gayatri Rai bol rahi hoon, I am a music teacher, mere saath aaj apka appointment hain''
'mera? Ji likin maine tou nahi fix kiya tha''
'ji nahi apka appointment Sanskaar Maheswari ne fix kiya tha main unke number pe try kaar rahi thi but ja nahi raha tha, ap ek ghante mein meri ghar mein ajayiye'''

And she hang up.
'Kaun?''
'Gayatri Rai. Tumne appointment fix kiya tha?'' Swara was in a fix
'Oh ha sorry bol na bhul giya mujhe pata tha tumhe riaz karne kiliye help lage ga ab main tou iss mamle mein help nahi kar sakta tou isiliye''
'Kab kiya tumne yeh?jabse mera result hua hai tabse tou main tumhare saath hi thi'' giggled Swaraa
'nahi tab nahi kiya Kolkata se hi fix kar rakha tha''
'tumhe kaisei pata ki main audition dungi aur select bhi o jaungi??'' asked swara moving her eyebrows
'mujhe pata hai swara'' said sanskaar calmly
'uumm matlab mujhe pata hain ki tum music se kitna pyaar karti ho so main janta tha...acha abb tum tayaar ho jao main nahake ata hoon''

Sanskaar headed towards the washroom and she continued her war against her heart.
Edited by ramisaaAli - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
loved ur update as always !!
waiting for next part !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Shikha022

loved ur update as always !!
waiting for next part !!



it will be out soon thanks alot <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Caught up on the updated parts, really loving this! 😳
The Swasan moments are treasures! ⭐️ Your dialogues are beautiful btw! 👏
Waiting for the next update, please PM me if you can!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Part 6


Swara and Sanskaar enter the house. It was an old one storey house surrounding with antics and many musical instruments. Gayatri Rai the tall woman enters wearing a red traditional saree and big red bindi.
After a little chit chat Swara starts her practice.

As she begins to sing in her melodious voice, Sanskar slowly takes out the phone and starts recording it without Swara's notice but it surely catches Gayatri's eyes which he was unaware of. After a little while he leaves leaving her to Gayatri.

Swara practiced the whole day and this continued for the next two days.

'yeh lo swara''
'begaan? Mujhe bohut pasand hain'' in the last few days she kind of developed a bond with her it was like she was filling her mother's absence.
'Sanskaar tumhara pati hain swara?''
Swara got abit taken aback, she was close to her but she never talked about Sanskar
'hmm'' she nodded
Gayatri ji smiled brightly
'Aap muskura kyun rahi hain?''
'kyun ki muje tumse jalan hai swara''
'kyun??'' swara was puzzled
'kyun ki itna pyaar karne wala paati bohut kum logo ko hi milta hain aur itna pagal pati bhi''
'pagal?''
'haa'' giggled gayatri 'bohut pyaar karta hai wo tumse swara tabhi tou dekho na haar din tumhe yaha chor jaane ke baad mujhe phone kaar k tumhare gaane suntan tha''
now she realized she used to see gayatri ji talking to someone over the phone and keeping it close to swara but she never thought it was Sanskaar.
'tumhare music ko sunkar pata chalta hain ki tumhe music se kitna pyaar hai aur Sanskaar ki aankhon ko dekhkaar pata chalta hain ki wo tumse kitna pyaar karta hain. Likin tumhare aankon mein maine sirf kashmakash dekkha hai swara''
'swara looks down getting a bit awkward
'mujhe nahi pata swara kit um dono ka rishta kaisa hain likin jo larka apne busy schedule mein bhi tumhara khayal rakh sakhta hain vo saach mein tumhara saath de sakta hai.. hamesha''
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Nice update!
Sanskaar is soo cute! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
i love this music teacher !!
awsm update..
as always loved it !!
waiting for next part !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
From first part to last part loved the update...
Nice one...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: ros_aavir

Nice update!

Sanskaar is soo cute! 😳



more cuteness on the way😉

stay hooked😊

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