RagYa 'The Broken Love' SS

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Folks,

I am new to this forum & my first SS here I hope u all like it. Do tell me how is it!!
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Ragini stood numb her Saree smeared with Lakshya's blood. Family's allegations reverberating in her mind.

"Itni matlabi kaise hosakti ho tum Ragini" Sharmishtha said
"Ladoo, mana mai har waqt bangalan se ladti rehti thi lekin ye sab..." Dadi's voice trailed off
"Maine har waqt tumhara sath diya Ragini, jab jab Swara ne tumhare khilaf kuch bhi kaha, tab tab tumhare liye bola mai, aur tumne..tumne kya kiya huh Ragini.. mere vishwas ka mazak banakar rakhdiya" Lakshya shouted

Ragini's heart pierced into shards when she heard this


Fresh tears rolled down her cheeks.
"Kaise samjhayae aapko Lakshya" she whispered to herself & looked down at her Mangalsutra.

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Lakshya sat in the corner of Sanskaar's room "kyun Ragini kyun kiya aisa tumne" Lakshya asked to himself frustrated. He never actually trusted swara's allegations ever he had immense faith in Ragini but she betrayed him, she played with him.

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Ragini wiped her tears & started walking absent mindedly out of the house. It was raining heavily outside. By the time she reached the cliff top she was heavily drenched in rain.

"Kyun kia tumne aisa?" voice shouted from behind her she slowly turned around. Her eyes went wide "Tum!" Her voice quivered.

"Kaha tha na maine tumse tumhe unki zindagi barbad krni hai par tumne sare kiye karaye par paani pher diya" he said

Ragini didn't know from where she got the strength but now she just couldn't take it anymore "tumne jo kaha woh humne kiya... tumhari wajah se sab ki nazaron mai gir gaye hum...ab aur nahi" she said wiping the tears. It had stopped raining.

"Sahi kaha ab aur nahi.. ab tumharae kiye ki saza milegi tumhae" the guy said.

He took out a photo of Lakshya & burned it with a lighter. Ragini's eye went wide.

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Maheshwari Mansion
Next morning

"Swara Sanskar chalo Devi ma ke mandir ho aate hai" Sujata said

Everybody moved towards the temple.

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Outside temple

"Maa mai puja ke liye prasad le aata hun" saying this Lakshya crossed the road.

Ragini ran as fast as she could she need to save him whatever happened she loved him. He was her husband.

She was just in time to see Lakshya crossing the road carrying a sweet box. She breathed a sigh of relief. But the relief was momentary because she saw a car speeding towards him with no intention of stopping.

"LAKSHYA!!" She shouted and ran towards him
Everybody from the family turn towards Lakshya hearing the shout.

Ragini timely pushed Lakshya off the road but her luck ran out the car hit her, she got threw away alongside the other side of the road drenched in blood.

"RAGINI" Came a chorus shout from different directions.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update
Plz could you pm me wn u update
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really nice update
grt job
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Wow!! Amazing...looking forward to the next part!!
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wow yaar... this is good.. another ragya/raglak ss.. can't wait further do continue... please make this an ff with so many parts.. yayy can't wait for laksh and swara nd whole family getting to know the truth... wish somedthing like this happen in the show...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hmm loved this uodate..😊
update next part soon.
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Hi love the concept of ur story
Can't wait for next part
Would love to read the next part of ur story
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hey this is awsome... I hope u will be updating it regularly ...
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Just too good!!! Please update soon
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plzzz update next prt
waiting...
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