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.IPKKND.

@.IPKKND.

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Sooo cuteee

I laughed soo much at sanskar's reaction!!!!!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Hey Medha...

Lovely, lovely piece. I'm not sure why someone would tell you you write "too forcefully"--I love your intense, brooding pieces as much as your humorous ones--but if that made you write this, then the feedback was worth it. 😉

The setting touched a chord with me because I love to swing. After I gently push my daughter on the kid's swings in the park near our home, I go across to the larger ones, helpfully marked "For teens and adults" 😊, and have a good, long, carefree swing myself!

I just loved the carefree banter between Swara & Sansku in this one. So playful and comfortable with each other. I was just going ROFL at your description of Sanskaar's expressions, both at Swara's suggestion they get married (for the 3rd time) and at her nonchalant, "by the way" declaration of her pregnancy! Hilarious! 😊

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TRPS

@TRPS

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

I really like your beautiful writing, it always has the touch of reality. and So serene with humour. :) a very cute OS this one is... swinging in the sweetness and Love of Swasan. :)

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

That's very sweet of swara and sanskar..

Loved it

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Cute and sweet OS...

Swara and her surprises. ...god...poor sanskar. ...

Madly loved it...

Plz do write more...

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maaneetfan

@maaneetfan

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Super creative. ..lovely theme n very beautifully written!

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anshu

@nisha_hc_bs_dd

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

awww .. this is so cutee !!

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: suhasini2727
It's very sweet... U wrote very beautifully 👏

thanks suhasini😊

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful
Aww thank u for this Medha... I was roaming arnd day dreaming abt swasan with nothing left to read and too lazy to write and here I see this!! This lovely fluffy piece surely brought a huge grin on my face! So tfs dear!

-Luv Niki 🤗

I know your name is niki now...but i guess i'll go with nik since u said it was cool😛

and ur comment made me feel all warm and fluffy too.😃

Edited by medhasarkar - 9 years ago