SWASAN OS: SWING - Page 3

Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-

Beautiful

Serene and content !

I loved it very much .they are happy in their own little wrld

This was the cutest and simplest OS I've read n fell in love with

Love reading your wrk <3

Originally posted by: gayu6

Really nice. Cute swasan.

Originally posted by: naina927

Aww... This one is so so cute...!!!

Cuteness personified...!!!

Really liked the starting though... They are a match made in heaven... So perfect...

3 am in the morning and swara requesting such a thing... Haha... Poor sanskar...!!!

But loved it... The swing portion...

And then the proposal and wohhuuu... Swara is pregnant too...

Great...!!!! A very happy os...!!!

Loved it to the core ❤️

PS : first ever piece I read on swasan... That means a new member in this forum too... I actually follow only badtameez dil... But I somehow really like swara and sanskar...

Originally posted by: ros_aavir

How adorable is this!?

Loved the nature of their relationship, very well penned out! 😳

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hi Medha. This was as adorable as SwaSan themselves. It took me to a much awaited happy time between them. I loved how the simple act of having fun on the swing highlighted how free both of them have been set by their love, in different ways. Swara's style of sharing such big news was totally Swara and super cute! Incidentally I just got back from my sister in law's baby shower earlier today 😃. Really enjoyed this.

Originally posted by: samiya.059

amazing...liked it to the core..well done
keep writing more

Originally posted by: CutiePie..

Sooo cuteee

I laughed soo much at sanskar's reaction!!!!!

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Medha...

Lovely, lovely piece. I'm not sure why someone would tell you you write "too forcefully"--I love your intense, brooding pieces as much as your humorous ones--but if that made you write this, then the feedback was worth it. 😉

The setting touched a chord with me because I love to swing. After I gently push my daughter on the kid's swings in the park near our home, I go across to the larger ones, helpfully marked "For teens and adults" 😊, and have a good, long, carefree swing myself!

I just loved the carefree banter between Swara & Sansku in this one. So playful and comfortable with each other. I was just going ROFL at your description of Sanskaar's expressions, both at Swara's suggestion they get married (for the 3rd time) and at her nonchalant, "by the way" declaration of her pregnancy! Hilarious! 😊

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Awesome os dear👏

Originally posted by: TRPS

I really like your beautiful writing, it always has the touch of reality. and So serene with humour. :) a very cute OS this one is... swinging in the sweetness and Love of Swasan. :)