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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -TeriMalang-

Beautiful

Serene and content !

I loved it very much .they are happy in their own little wrld
This was the cutest and simplest OS I've read n fell in love with

Love reading your wrk <3


oh thank you dear. i wanted to keep this simple and peaceful.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: gayu6

Really nice. Cute swasan.


thank you gayu😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: naina927

Aww... This one is so so cute...!!!

Cuteness personified...!!!
Really liked the starting though... They are a match made in heaven... So perfect...
3 am in the morning and swara requesting such a thing... Haha... Poor sanskar...!!!
But loved it... The swing portion...
And then the proposal and wohhuuu... Swara is pregnant too...
Great...!!!! A very happy os...!!!
Loved it to the core ❤️
PS : first ever piece I read on swasan... That means a new member in this forum too... I actually follow only badtameez dil... But I somehow really like swara and sanskar...


ok welcome to the forum naina...and i'm honoured that i could make ur first read so happy.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ros_aavir

How adorable is this!?

Loved the nature of their relationship, very well penned out! 😳


thanks for reading and glad u liked it ros.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hi Medha. This was as adorable as SwaSan themselves. It took me to a much awaited happy time between them. I loved how the simple act of having fun on the swing highlighted how free both of them have been set by their love, in different ways. Swara's style of sharing such big news was totally Swara and super cute! Incidentally I just got back from my sister in law's baby shower earlier today 😃. Really enjoyed this.


shruti🤗

thank goodness...i knew you would understand😃 that there was something beaneath the outward fluffiness of this os. when you can have your own individuality in a relationship...and still know that you are hardly complete without the other, you know its for keeps.

as they said in sweet home alabama 'you can have roots and wings'

and i want swara to become the bubbly person she once was.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: samiya.059

amazing...liked it to the core..well done
keep writing more


thanks samiya😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CutiePie..

Sooo cuteee

I laughed soo much at sanskar's reaction!!!!!


thanks cutiepie. me too😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Medha...

Lovely, lovely piece. I'm not sure why someone would tell you you write "too forcefully"--I love your intense, brooding pieces as much as your humorous ones--but if that made you write this, then the feedback was worth it. 😉

The setting touched a chord with me because I love to swing. After I gently push my daughter on the kid's swings in the park near our home, I go across to the larger ones, helpfully marked "For teens and adults" 😊, and have a good, long, carefree swing myself!

I just loved the carefree banter between Swara & Sansku in this one. So playful and comfortable with each other. I was just going ROFL at your description of Sanskaar's expressions, both at Swara's suggestion they get married (for the 3rd time) and at her nonchalant, "by the way" declaration of her pregnancy! Hilarious! 😊



yeah well..i'm going to take that forceful wala feedback as a constructive criticism...so yes...went a bit outside my orbit.😳

and i love to swing too. have one in our terrace...put my headphones on and aaahhh!⭐️

I want swara to say it this way too..because shyness and swara don't go together. and he probably won't expect that they are expecting.😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks sonal😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: TRPS

I really like your beautiful writing, it always has the touch of reality. and So serene with humour. :) a very cute OS this one is... swinging in the sweetness and Love of Swasan. :)


thanks and yes i cannot write ethereal pieces which lack reality.😆

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