SWASAN OS: SWING - Page 5

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

So cute Medha 😳
You wrote this OS beautifully 👏
I loved it I would love to see this scene in the show, lekin cvs won't show this
This was simple yet so beautiful ⭐️

Originally posted by: rg0782

Its so cute and awesome medha...keep writing dear!!! 😃😃

Originally posted by: Annei123

Sorry for the late comment !!!!

Lovely os

Keep writing more 😃

Originally posted by: JazzyM

The Swing...it has swung everything differently...loved the concept...

Proposal, baby (or should I say babies..) and the nutshell look you described on Sanskaar...Awesome...

Loved the writing. A super fun light read...no emotional baggage.

Originally posted by: manasie23

awww this was the most cutest os I have ever read so far... Just too cute...

Good work.. Keep writing (:

Originally posted by: Annei123

Sorry for the late comment !!!!

Lovely os

Keep writing more 😃

Originally posted by: .Sarcasmazing.

Wow this was so supercute Medha

I absolutely loved it. I loved how you linked the feeling of riding freely on a swing to that of Sanskaar's love where you know he'll be there to catch Swara if she were to fall. That line of the present memory being better than the past, pure gold ⭐️

Haha Sanskaar is SO cute 😳 Loved the way he reacted to her proposal & the news of becoming daddy. Twins, triplets, quadruplets?! Bwahahaha 🤣 Love them <3 This was SO goddamn relatable! ❤️ I want this on the show in future

Uber cute & beautifully penned Medha. Loved it 🤗