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naran1986

@naran1986

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Aha!!! beautiful.I read water first..now I read water first followed by Fire and wonderful.
Simply Lajawab.
Tip my hat to you r writing prowess.
Will be eagerly waiting to see which element you will go with next and which characters will make up the story.
👏

Air, earth ,space ..Air can either extinguish or inflame...Give life or increase the destroying capacity of water.But earth largely is unmoved by the winds.So the next element which ever you choose (seems to be earth, read your last comment) will be wonderful.

-A Loyal reader and a fan.

Edited by naran1986 - 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: naran1986
Aha!!! beautiful.I read water first..now I read water first followed by Fire and wonderful.
Simply Lajawab.
Tip my hat to you r writing prowess.
Will be eagerly waiting to see which element you will go with next and which characters will make up the story.
👏

Air, earth ,space ..Air can either extinguish or inflame...Give life or increase the destroying capacity of water.But earth largely is unmoved by the winds.So the next element which ever you choose (seems to be earth, read your last comment) will be wonderful.

-A Loyal reader and a fan.

Thanks so much for reading and leaving such a detailed comment 😊. Glad you liked both "Water" and "Fire". Next would be "Earth" 😉. Plan to have it up by this weekend, will do earlier if possible.

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Ameesha

@Ammiey

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Cant wait for ur 'earth' element !!! Just update ASAP !! 😆

n this one...m speechless !!! U describbed so beautifully Annapurna's life from childhood to the present situation that just leaves an imprint marvellous sign of ur incredible writing ability Viji !😉

the mythological battles of asurs n devine gods are just wonderful seriouslyy u described that too in such a way that the reader will absolutely get mesmerized by it !!! Certainly will !!! 😳

I liked it very much n water was also very elegant n a beautiful one I must say !!

n m sure so will b the Earth !! Who knws even better than any one😳

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Ammiey
Cant wait for ur 'earth' element !!! Just update ASAP !! 😆
n this one...m speechless !!! U describbed so beautifully Annapurna's life from childhood to the present situation that just leaves an imprint marvellous sign of ur incredible writing ability Viji !😉

the mythological battles of asurs n devine gods are just wonderful seriouslyy u described that too in such a way that the reader will absolutely get mesmerized by it !!! Certainly will !!! 😳
I liked it very much n water was also very elegant n a beautiful one I must say !!
n m sure so will b the Earth !! Who knws even better than any one😳

Hey Ameesha...

Thanks so much for this lovely comment. I've already posted "Earth" today morning, sent you a PM. Do check it out and tell me how you like it. 😊

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: aash2302
Awesome story

Thank you 😊

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rafafan

@rafafan

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Amazing Viji! I must compliment you on your superb imagination to create this back story for AP. So much dignity, aura and personality you have given her. I am sure this will never happen in the actual show! She just WAS the fire element in your OS series.

About Swasan what can I say. Your stories are making me fall more and more in love with them. Its so beautiful, the way you show their chemistry and the way they belong together.

i also just finished reading Earth, shall comment on that thread separately. Too good yaar. You are easily the best writer by far. please don't forget to pm me for any of your future fics.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: rafafan
Amazing Viji! I must compliment you on your superb imagination to create this back story for AP. So much dignity, aura and personality you have given her. I am sure this will never happen in the actual show! She just WAS the fire element in your OS series.

About Swasan what can I say. Your stories are making me fall more and more in love with them. Its so beautiful, the way you show their chemistry and the way they belong together.

i also just finished reading Earth, shall comment on that thread separately. Too good yaar. You are easily the best writer by far. please don't forget to pm me for any of your future fics.

Hey...that's so nice of you to say that 😳 🤗I'm actually quite a bit embarrassed by all the generous praise you are dishing out for me! But I am very grateful for the motivation.

Glad you liked my portrayal of AP. She certainly has an aura, an edge and layers to her character. Am glad you felt I was able to bring out that grayness.

And as I said in a comment to another reader, I am a HUGE SwaSan fan. So if you feel I was able to capture their chemistry, the essence of their magic, and make you fall more in love with them, that's like the best compliment ever. 😊

Thanks for reading and commenting. I shall surely PM you for my future works.

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jasw

@jasw

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Thanks for the PM, Viji. This is so beautiful! Annapurna as Fire! Now that you mentioned it, I am visualizing her with this aura!😃 That is the power of an excellent story teller.👏

Oh how I wish the serial followed this route and slowly exposed Ragini's truth instead of the hurried tracks! So loved Swara's gradual love for Sanskar as a person and not as husband! Loved that line.

Will go thru Water tomorrow! 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: jasw
Thanks for the PM, Viji. This is so beautiful! Annapurna as Fire! Now that you mentioned it, I am visualizing her with this aura!😃 That is the power of an excellent story teller.👏
Oh how I wish the serial followed this route and slowly exposed Ragini's truth instead of the hurried tracks! So loved Swara's gradual love for Sanskar as a person and not as husband! Loved that line.

Will go thru Water tomorrow! 😊

Glad you liked my portrayal of Annapurna 😊. She has an aura and a regal bearing. So wanted to bring that out, and also the layers to her character.

Yes, I really wanted to show Swara falling in love with Sanskaar the person. Not just because of this "forced marriage".

Do let me know what you think of "Earth" after you read it. Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. 😊

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.Sarcasmazing.

@.Sarcasmazing.

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#90

OHMYGOD this is even more brilliant than "Water" Viji! Damn, am I running to read "Earth" or what?!

Okay firstly, I LOVED how you described Annapurna here. I think we both are of the same opinion that the woman isn't exactly what she comes across & after her asking Sanskaar to swear in front of god, that he isn't lying, looks like she'll ask him to reunite Swara & Lakshya as his punishment & I am afraid, Sanskaar will agree exactly for the same reason you mentioned here: That he feels indebted & not worthy of the love his Badi Maa showers on him & of course because he thinks Swara still loves Lakshya :/

Fire was so well explained here- Uncontrollable & Engulfing but also providing the warmth & light. It just depends on what one makes of their inner fire, brings them to light or engulfs them to finally turn into ashes. Absolutely loved how Annapurna's clear preferance for her mediocre Lakshya was shown over the brilliant Sanskaar, the son of the house who was bestowed with all the qualities she wanted her son's to possess. Of course the woman cannot see her boy being deprived of his favorite toy, one he thought was broken, the one his brother had healed & come to love so dearly. Alas! The toy has a heart & brain of her own & has decided who knows her worth, the best.

Loved how gradually you showed SwaSan progressing here & Swara's intense feeling of unconditional love that she now feels for Sanskaar ❤️ The girl is going to fight for her love & I can't wait to read Earth anymore!

Amazing Viji, absolutely mesmerizing read ❤️ Damn happy you chose SwaSan of all fandoms, suffer from SwaSan-ities & write for them 😳