SwaSan OS-- 'Water' - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you for the PM Viji 😊
This was beautiful! Loved the Swara- Sanskaar interaction. It was heart-warming. I wish something like this happens in the show. Swara apologizes to Sanskaar and they renew their friendship.

I loved the last line; 'You see, water never waits. It changes shape and flows around things and finds the secret paths no one else has thought about' Brilliant! 👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Anna--

Thank you for the PM Viji 😊

This was beautiful! Loved the Swara- Sanskaar interaction. It was heart-warming. I wish something like this happens in the show. Swara apologizes to Sanskaar and they renew their friendship.

I loved the last line; 'You see, water never waits. It changes shape and flows around things and finds the secret paths no one else has thought about' Brilliant! 👏👏👏



Thanks so much Anna. 😊

That last para (on the nature of water) is a quote very close to my heart, written by the author Arthur Golden.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: medhasarkar


okay..group hug...i love both of your works...and styles...

and preet...just thank you🤗. i'm blushing like a beetroot.😳

and viji...thank you as well😎...and i'm wary of that cup of elaich teai. whenever any emotion happens...you just spit out mouthfuls over your lappy and i end up owing you one. so yes, thanks...and i'm wary.😆😆



Hahaha Medha 😊 Ok I promise not to claim lappy keyboard damages from you. But seriously, that hilarious OS of yours (Swara calling Sansku Polu) made me cough up my tea 😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
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I love it. There is something really attention grabbing in your writings. Water is my favourite element and perhaps that's why I connected to this rather strongly. And you were right. Swara is a person who can adapt. Adjust to her situations and blend in them to figure out the next step. In a way she is water.

Waiting for the next.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mistofshadows

I love it. There is something really attention grabbing in your writings. Water is my favourite element and perhaps that's why I connected to this rather strongly. And you were right. Swara is a person who can adapt. Adjust to her situations and blend in them to figure out the next step. In a way she is water.

Waiting for the next.
Thanks for the pm.



Thank you so much. Yeah, water's my favorite too 😊 I am working on the next in the series, "Fire". But will take some time, will surely PM you once posted.

BTW, I'm Viji. Sorry if you've told me your name and I forgot, but please tell me again. 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: medhasarkar



okay..group hug...i love both of your works...and styles...

and preet...just thank you🤗. i'm blushing like a beetroot.😳

and viji...thank you as well😎...and i'm wary of that cup of elaich teai. whenever any emotion happens...you just spit out mouthfuls over your lappy and i end up owing you one. so yes, thanks...and i'm wary.😆😆


Group hug 🤗😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yes! a new story ...

needless to say - loved it ... don't you get tired of us telling you that 😆
... i second you - water is my favorite element ... i loved the whole idea of moving on and its symbolism to water .. brilliant ... why don't you write my exam essays ? i would top the class


P.S: Do you take requests ? ... or just treat it as an idea - in your stories sanskaar is usually the more emotionally vested one, the one in love with swara before uske dimaag ki ghanti baje ... which is what the show is showing ... would you ever consider writing it from a different perspective? Where swara is the first one to fall in love ? ... and sanskaar is the tubelight ... the guy's ego could do with being chased a little !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wait for me!! 🤗 🤗BTW Preet when is part 3 of your latest coming up? PM me! 😡


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bips

Yes! a new story ...

needless to say - loved it ... don't you get tired of us telling you that 😆
... i second you - water is my favorite element ... i loved the whole idea of moving on and its symbolism to water .. brilliant ... why don't you write my exam essays ? i would top the class


P.S: Do you take requests ? ... or just treat it as an idea - in your stories sanskaar is usually the more emotionally vested one, the one in love with swara before uske dimaag ki ghanti baje ... which is what the show is showing ... would you ever consider writing it from a different perspective? Where swara is the first one to fall in love ? ... and sanskaar is the tubelight ... the guy's ego could do with being chased a little !



Thanks so much for reading and this lovely comment 😊

Yup, water is definitely my favorite element!

Thanks for the idea, I will surely try to invert the situation a bit in an upcoming work, to have Swara as the one doing the chasing 😊 It might be fun!

Waise in one of my earlier works (I think you've read that one already): Ek Chutki Sindhoor, it was Swara who was knocking some sense into Sansku's head that she loved him, while he was trying to stonewall her. 😉 Of course, he still already loved her in that one!

But I get what you mean...Swara to fall in love first...Sansku later 😊 Shall defo try!


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum



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Soon Viji 😆 Actually i'm a bit busy with university and all, and i'm working on an swara sanskar laksh os as well 😆 purely my immagination 😛
But will upload the 3rd part soon and will pm you 😳

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