SwaSan OS-- 'Water'

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Viji right? finally got to know your name.

beautiful writing as usual...it got a flow..like water, falling softly over pebbles(oh you do the poetic part much better than me...imagine it :D)

I deeply admire your way of maintaining a balance in your writings...the way you combine facts and beauty together. Its like that mary Poppins song "just a spoonful of sugar helps the medicine go down"

Loved this OS...and loved Swara's realisation...and of course Sanskaar's POV. I'm dying to see this happen...and yeah..I dont know what aksh is actually going to do in the show...but I hope something like this happens.

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

As usual, brilliantly written! 😊

I wish something would happen in the show, but oh no that would be too logical! 😆

I actually can't wait to read the next part, I love the way your brain works!

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Cintila

@Cintila

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey...Tuhina, right? 😊 Viji here, BTW, we have exchanged so many comments but I forget if we've "introduced" ourselves.

Thanks so much for your comment. Yeah, I've been wishing too, that Swara drops the anger and just tells Sansku they will be friends but she can't feel for him more. (Of course, we know she will fall deeply in love with him, but that'll come later) 😉

I do plan to continue this as an OS series with "Earth" and "Fire". But will take some more time as I am completely out of ideas at the moment. 😊

Hey viji. 😃..! Finally we had our introduction 😆. Yes I'm Tuhina and I'm a huge fan of your works.😳 It's Okay. ..take as much time as you want. ..your os's are always worth the wait.😳

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Absolutely beautiful ⭐️. Thanks for the PM Viji. I love the concept first of all. I so see all of them (i.e SwaSan and RagYa) as the different elements in different ways. I really wish we get to see the closure of SwaLak properly in the scene tomorrow and in your OS, i love how that went as I think Swara genuinely needs this closure to really begin to accept Sanskaar. I so love the mature handing of the friendship you show after that and like all your writing, the emotions really grab me and I get so pulled into their chemistry and romance, it's spell binding.

Can't wait for more parts on the other elements.

Edited by tootiefrootie11 - 9 years ago

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Zephyr8

@Zephyr8

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

I loved it...its super wow...😊

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medha

@ToujoursPur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Smilelicious
Viji 🤗
I'm your huge fan yaar 😊
You are the BESTEST WRITER in the forum 😳 👏
I can't tell how much i loved this
You are a brilliant writer 👍🏼 The way you describe everything is amazing 😳
It seemed i was reading a novel, wow 👏
*standing ovation*
Beautifully written 😊

i'll add something here.

ditto.😃

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

i'll add something here.
ditto.😃

And Medha you are one of the BESTEST as well 🤗
Seriously both of you inspire me to write more (even though i'm not as brilliant as you 😆) 😳

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: medhasarkar
Viji right? finally got to know your name.
beautiful writing as usual...it got a flow..like water, falling softly over pebbles(oh you do the poetic part much better than me...imagine it :D)

I deeply admire your way of maintaining a balance in your writings...the way you combine facts and beauty together. Its like that mary Poppins song "just a spoonful of sugar helps the medicine go down"

Loved this OS...and loved Swara's realisation...and of course Sanskaar's POV. I'm dying to see this happen...and yeah..I dont know what aksh is actually going to do in the show...but I hope something like this happens.

Thanks so much Medha 😊 Oh, I hadn't told you my name? Sorry, my bad. Must have forgotten in the midst of my SwaSan--itis 😉

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: anu91
Nice one...

Thanks 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Absolutely beautiful ⭐️. Thanks for the PM Viji. I love the concept first of all. I so see all of them (i.e SwaSan and RagYa) as the different elements in different ways. I really wish we get to see the closure of SwaLak properly in the scene tomorrow and in your OS, i love how that went as I think Swara genuinely needs this closure to really begin to accept Sanskaar. I so love the mature handing of the friendship you show after that and like all your writing, the emotions really grab me and I get so pulled into their chemistry and romance, it's spell binding.
Can't wait for more parts on the other elements.

Thanks Shruti. 😊 It really feels nice when you say I have managed to portray the chemistry and romance between this epic pair. They are just so magical, aren't they? 😉 Yeah, I'm eagerly looking forward to the Swara--Lakshya confrontation scene as well. When I heard she's probably gonna meet him by the bridge--that's how I got the idea for this "water" themed OS 😊 I too feel its going to be a closure for her, to leave all the baggage of the past and move on.

On a side note, I do hope they will show the restoration of the friendship Swara feels for Sanskaar. All the butterflies in the stomach intensity 😊, realization that she feels "something more", can come later. That would be realistic anyway, to show that she needs some time. But I guess now, seeing how he's genuinely helping her avoid this wedding though he has feelings for her, she should start trusting him again as a true friend.

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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