SwaSan SS : My Only Wish (Part 6 updated on Page no 36)

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

aww...

Again thank you count...😉

well felt bad for swara when Sanskar shouted at her...

Ab woh sari cheji wapas lake rakh denge...

ya Shayad Dont know??

not any more guesses...

Plz try to update soon...

Eagerly waiting for the next part

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Sree

@the-havelgirl03

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

Awsm update!! feeling bad fr Swara!!

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

OMG..its superb..waiting for next part😊

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Jamina Mohammed

@Snowflakes.

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Wow sonu just loved it
Feeling bad for swara
Thanks for the PM dear😊

Waiting for the next update 😉

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Wow Sonal...Just wow.

You conveyed so many emotions in that single update.

Ragini, as conniving and sly as ever. Gak!! Trying to spoil Swara's cooking and for what? She already tried to ruin her wedding! Seriously, some poeple never change!

But the family seems to have accepted Swara with open arms, so everyone, including Sanskaar praises the kheer though it must have been so salty. That's what I thought...until Pari said that the whole thing fell down, and Swara had to make it again! 😊 So even fate favoring Swara over evil Ragini! 😉

But just when I was feeling so happy for Swara--Sanskaar relationship, bang! comes the next part, which you wrote so sensitively and deftly. Major part of our sympathies are obviously with Swara, who was scolded so cruelly, poor girl she didn't even know what those things were, she just thought it was rubbish.

But can't help feeling a bit for Sanskaar too. These were all he had left of Kavita's memory, and having lost them, he just reacted in such rage. The words were so cruel, so cutting. Hope he realizes that and repents when he cools down, and makes up a hundred fold, to ensure Swara feels better & forgives his outburst. 😊

Thanks for the PM. And waiting for part 4!!

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 10 years ago

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Bon_Vivant

@Bon_Vivant

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#156

Beautiful update
Feeling bad for both swara & sanskaar

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950660

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Interesting ff

Plz do pm when u update next..

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Rachel006

@Rachel006

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#158

plzz don't make ragini here also villain

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MusicMyLife.

@MusicMyLife.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#159

Awesome update Sonal 🤗
eee Ragini salty kheer 😡
accha hua gir gayi & Swara made new one 😳
Sanky ko pasand ayi 😳❤️

Hawww Swara ne ye kya kiya Kavita ka stuff 😔
BT Sanky wz damn rude 😡
no wife bt jst mere responsibility? 😲
I wish Kavita ka samaan Swara kahi se bhi wapas le aye & Sanky ko dede & then she shld show him cold shoulder 😡

update next part soonish 😳