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Posted: 10 years ago

My Only Wish

Part 4

(in the kitchen)

Sujata-swara tu kya banayegi

Swara-aap bata dijiye mom

Uttara-bhabhi jo bhi banana hai banaiye par kheer zaroor banana

Swara-okkk but why...u like kheer

AP-usey nhi sanskaar ko kheer bohot pasand hai

Sujata-haan

Swara-done then i'll make kheer n of course malai kofta gattey ki sabji n roti

Uttara-wow

Pari-n ragini what about u

Ragini-i'll make daal baati n churma

AP-toh thik hai pari pujan karwa lete hain aur phir hum chaltey hain

Pari-ji maa

(then they did the pooja n left...Swaragini was preparing the dish)

Swara-ragini tum mujhse baat kyun nhi kar rhi

Ragini-i thought u r angry

Swara-angry...but why

Ragini-woh mainey laksh ji se shaadi

Swara-ragini tum mujhe bta hi deti toh yeh sab hota hi nhi na n don't worry m not angry actually m happy ki hum ek hi sasuraal mein hain n yeah sanskaar bohot acche hain so chill(n she hugged ragini) n yeah we r sisters na...vaisey my work is almost done so m going to my room ma ko call karni hai

Ragini-yeah go

(swara went from there)

Ragini(monologue)-happy my foot aur sanskaar bohot acche hain yeah why not...u know what swara just wait n watch tumhara yeh kheer sabko kitna pasand ata hai(she took a spoonful of salt n mixed it in kheer)itney se kya hoga (she put three more spoons)ab ayega maja...dekhte hain ki jeejaji ko kheer kitni pasand ati hai...sorry jiju but m sure aaj ke baad aapko kheer se nafrat ho jayegi

(after 45 minutes...at the dining table)

Suja-swara ja apna khana le aa

Swara-ji mom(suddenly her phone starts ringing)baba

DP-swara tum baat kar lo ragini tum le aao pehley khana

Swara-thanks bade papa

(ragini served her food n everybody appreciates it n gave her the neg)

Uttara-swara bhabhi now ur turn

Swara-sure

(she too served the food)

Ragini(monologue)-bas tumharey kheer serve karney ki der hai but woh toh end mein hogi but lets wait n watch sis

Sujata-khana toh accha tha ab kheer ki baari

Adarsh-kheer kya baat hai bhai sanskaar ki toh lottery lag gyi

(sanskaar looked at swara n smiled swara felt happy...n she served the kheer)

(DP ate the kheer n ragini was waiting for his reaction)

DP-waah kheer toh bohot acchi hain kyun sanskaar

Sanskaar-yeah i mean i love it

(everybody starts praising swara)

Ragini(monologue)-how is it possible

Pari-waisey hum kuch confess karein

Swara-bhabhi no its okk not a big deal

AP-kya hua

Pari-swara ko kheer dobara banani padi

Ragini-kyaaa...nhi matlab kyun bhabhi

Pari-woh hum knife dhoondh rahe theey aur hamarey haath lagney se saari kheer gir gyi aur swara ne dobara se banayi...sorry swara

Swara-bhabhi its okk...hota hai

AP-haan pari par swara ne dobara banaya yeh sahi hai

(swara also got her neg but ragini was fuming)

(at swasan room)

Sanskaar-kheer was delicious

Swara-thanks m happy that u liked it

Sanskaar-i liked it because it was really yummy...n i must say u r a brilliant cook

Swara-thanks

Sanskaar-98

Swara-ji

Sanskaar-yep that was ur 98th thanks...kitna thanks bolti ho

Swara-ab nhi bolongi...waisey aap kahin ja rahe hain

Sanskaar-yeah...office

Swara-ohh

(sanskaar goes to the office...n swara starts unpacking her luggage)

Swara-ab yeh sandals kahaan rakhon...cupboard mein toh jagah hi nhi hai(then she saw the lower shelf)yeh sab kya rakha hai...aur yeh packet(she took out the packet)sukhey gulaab ke phool aur toota hua taj mahal yeh sab kyun rakha hai...sanskaar ne bhi kya jama kar ke rakha hai...shivam ji(their servant)

(Shivam entered)

Shivam-ji bhabhi

Swara-yeh sab phenk dijiye

(she gave him that packet)

Shivam-ji bhabhi

(she adjusted her sandals there)

Swara-hmm...now perfect

(in the evening...sanskaar came back n he opened his cupboard...his eyes fell on the lower shelf...he bent down n saw swara's sandals)

Sanskaar(in a panic mode)-mera samaan...wth who did that...shivam(he starts shouting)

(shivam entered)

Shivam-ji bhaiyaa

Sanskaar-yahaan jo samaan tha woh kaha gya

Shivan(in a scared tone)-bhabhi ne kaha phenk do toh phenk diya

Sanskaar(in an angry tone)-how dare she...call her

Shivam-ji

Sanskaar-dammit bulao ussey

(shivam went n called swara)

Swara-kya hua

Shivam-bhabhi woh bhaiya ne aapko bulaya hai

Swara-woh kab aaye

Shivam-abhi

Swara-thik hai main dekhti hoon

Shivam-bhabhi bhaiya bohot gusse mein hain

Swara-kyun

Shivam-shayad aapney unka kaam ka samaan phenk diya

Swara-kaam ka that broken taj mahal n dry roses...really...main dekhti hoon

(she goes to the room...sanskaar was roaming here n there)

Swara-sanskaar aap thik hain kya hua

Sanskaar(he pulled her inside n closed the door)-how dare u...tumne mera samaan phenka

Swara(she got scared because sanskaar was very angry n he was literally shouting)-sanskaar woh woh kachda hi toh tha

(Sanskaar grabbed her from her arm n pulled her closer...swara was scared because of the intensity)

Sanskar-kachda...u mean according to u miss swara gadodia my stuff was garbage that's why u thrown that stuff(he tightend his grip)

Swara-oucchhh...sanskaar u r hurting me...plzzz leave me

Sanskaar-oh yeah i m hurting u...r u a glass doll...n tell me one thing who the hell r u...tum hoti kon ho meri chizon ko haath laganey waali

Swara-m ur wife

Sanskaar-no u r not my wife u r just a mere responsibility...do din nahi hue tumhe aye aur tum meri life ke decisions logi really

Swara(she was hurt n she starts crying)-par tuta hua tajmahal accha nhi hota

Sanskaar-woh sab meri kavita ki nishaani thi jo tumney apney in ghatiya sandals ki vajah sey u just thrown them out

Swara(she felt bad n guilty)- m sorry sanskaar...i didn't know that ki

(he left her...she held her hands n it was hurting)

Sanskaar-tumhe kya pta ki kaisa lagta hai jab aap apney pyar ko apney saamney marta dekhte ho...do u even know how it feels...tumne meri kavita ki saari yaadein mujhse chen li

(she goes to him n touched his hand)

Swara-sanskaar main samajh sakti hoon

Sanskaar-dont touch me(he pushed her hand)don't u dare...let me tell u one thing miss swara gadodia i hate u n i really really do...mujhe nafrat hai tumse do u get that...i just hate u...aur haan pehley jao kisi se pyar karo phir kehna kit um samajh sakti ho...samjhi

(n he left from there...swara still in her shocking state)

ToujoursPur thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well written sonal..
Read all four in one go..
Waiting for your next update. .


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Posted: 10 years ago
Omg
I feel sad for both swara and sanskar
Loved the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update!
Can't wait to see what happens next 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful Sona 👏
Ragini ka plan flop 🤣
Felt bad for Swara She didn't know that the saaman was of Kavita 😕 and on the other hand sanskar must have felt bad 😭
I hope sab kuch theek hojaye jaldi 😳
Amazing Sona 🤗 ⭐️
Update soon 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Well written..
The last part, you have given it a twist that really going toward heart break but still beautifully written
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Posted: 10 years ago
WooW Sonu I am loving INTENSE Sanz every where!!
Poor shoru... 🥺

Awesome update dea!! Thnx for the PM!! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pls continue soon soon. Eagerly waiting to know what ll happen next. Feeling sad for swara.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really nice update😉
Ragini ka pachka🤢
I hope Swasan solve their problems soon😳
Thanks for the pm😊
Posted: 10 years ago
i loved it when Ragini's plan went flop🤣
Poor Swara. felt really bad for her😔 i know Sanskar is really hurt but he shouldn't have said He Hates her😒
Want to know what's gonna happen next. waiting eagerly, please continue soon

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