SwaSan SS : My Only Wish (Part 6 updated on Page no 36) - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago
Please continue the story... what to know more...🥱🥱😊
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thanks for the replies frds🤗
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My Only Wish

Part 5

(sanskaar was sitting in the garden ...his n kavita's favourite place...whenever he feels sad or emotionally weak he came there n spends some moment n cherish her memories)

Sanskaar(he was feeling sad)-kavi m sorry m so sorry tumhari yaadein bhi main sambhaal ke nhi rakh paaya...i just hate myself(he was crying...suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulder)kavita

Kavita-yep...kya baat hai...wait wait wait r u crying...awww Mr khadoos Maheshwari ko rona bhi aata hai

Sanskaar-tum

Kavita-haan main...nhi a sakti kya...waisey don't u think jada ho gya

Sanskaar-kya

Kavita-jo tumne swara ke saath kiya...i mean u shouted on her very badly na

Sanskaar-toh usne kya kiya tumhara samaan fenk diya

Kavita-yeah so what bekaar hi toh tha

Sanskaar-kavita what r u saying

Kavita-hmm...sanskaar tumne ussey shaadi kyun ki

Sanskaar-what do u mean

Kavita-i mean ki u were the one na who said ki main karunga shaadi toh ab kya hua

Sanskaar-haan to i was feeling bad for her

Kavita-okk so just because u were feeling bad u got married...nothing else

Sanskaar-haan mujhe bura laga

Kavita-par kyun

sanskaar-she is a nice girl aur jo lucky ne kiya

kavita-exactly sanskaar she is a nice girl n most importantly she is ur wife...n u told her na ki woh tumhari wife hai toh tumhare room par tumhari chizon par sab par uska haq hai na...sanskaar usey apne sandals rakhne they aur usey woh jagah thik lagi n usey kya pata ki wo samaan bekaar tha

sanskaar-toh puch sakti thi na

kavita-really par jo chiz uski hai uske liya kya puchana...sanskaar she is ur wife n she has facing the worst time of her life her fianc ditched her she got married to his brother ...woh bohot bure waqt se guzar rahi hai aise mein tum uske dost bane aur aaj apne gusse mein ussey wo dost bhi chin liya

sanskaar-par main kya karoon

kavita-usey samjho...tum hi ne kaha tha na ki woh tumhari wife hai toh usey waqt do sanskaar

sanskaar-i think i have crossed my limits

kavita-sanskaar khushiyon ne tumhari zindagi mein dastak thi hai usey jaane mat do...swara bhi insaan hai aur is nayi duniya mein tumhara haath thaam kar ayi hai give her n this relationship a try

sanskaar-i think u r right

kavita-i know

(she smiled n hugged sanskaar)

(sanskaar woke up with a jerk)

Sanskaar-what the hell main sapna dekh raha tha...i think i should apologize to her

(he came back to MM n directly went to his room...swara wasn't there he goes to the cupboard to take his night clothes n he saw kavita's stuff but swara's sandals weren't there)

Sanskaar(he took out the packet) -kavita ka samaan

(he touched that stuff...suddenly raghav entered)

Sanskaar-yeh samaan

Raghav-bhabhi layi thi

Sanskaar-kahaan se

Raghav-woh kitchen ke hi dustbin mein fhenka tha toh wahaan se laayi...aapke liye khana bhijwaya hai bhabhi ne unhe kitchen mein kuch kaam hai(he placed the plate on the bed n went from there)

Sanskaar(monologue)-mere liye usne yeh sab dustbin se nikala aur mainey us par itna chillaya

(he had his dinner n was wating for swara...after half n hour she entered)

Sanskaar-swara woh main i mean

Swara-m sorry meri wajah se itna kuch hua but i promise main aapki kisi chiz ko haath nhi lagaungi...i know woh sab aapke liye important tha so m really sorry for that

(swara was hurt by his words n that was evident from her words)

Sanskaar-nhi woh main...i mean tumhare sandals

Swara-its okk sanskaar...my fault n don't worry mere sandals mere bag mein hai but aapko problem nhi hogi...pakka

Sanskaar-swara par tumnhe dustbin se nikalne ki kya zaroorat thi

Swara-jahaan fenka tha wohi se toh laati...n mere liye dusrey ke emotions bohot maayne rakhte hain...aur agar galti merit hi toh maujhe hi usey sudharna tha na

(she went to the bed took the pillow n blnket n went to the couch)

Sanskaar-what r u doing...i told u na ki u r my wife toh phir yeh sab kya hai

Swara-no sanskaar m not ur wife m just a responsibility

Sanskaar-woh sab mainey

Swara-good night sanskaar

(she switched off the light n slept on the couch...sanskaar felt bad n helpless too)

Edited by SONAL30 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sonal...thanks so much dear. 🤗 I was waiting for this chapter. And it was well worth the wait. So moving. So touching. I am truly confused who to feel bad for: Swara or Sansku
He is missing Kavita so much...but he should not have yelled at Swara so badly.

And she is so mature. Just went to get the stuff which he had hoarded and she accidentally cleared. And then made her hurt clear, not by yelling or weeping, but by maintaining a distance. Hats off to her for maintaining her dignity and self respect.

I hope their understanding and friendship, and Sanskaar's slow awareness of his love will start soon 😊. But I want him to find out that Swara always loved him, only after he has already fallen majorly for her 😉

Please continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update Sonu 👏
Kavita ki spirit ne Mr khadoos ko thodi akal di [:O]
Chalo he realized hw rude he wz
Swara ne dustbin se Kavita ka samaan nikala awww I wanna hug her tight
Good Swara showing cold shoulder to him
I'm loving it
Update next part soonish re 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww...
My poor Swara..
Felt bad for her...


Hope Sanskar Swara ko jaldi manale...

Continue Soon Plz!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sonal much awaited update...
Loved it...
Hope sanskar will be friendly to her...

Edited by anu91 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Aisa laga.. kitna chotta update tha... felt like padhte hi jau... update soon Sonu 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part want to see how sanskar is going to realize his love for swara
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely sonal...been waiting for the update.
love--
medha

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