SWALAK OS- jab thak hein jaan

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guyz...😳😳 i have written an os on swalak...hope u will like it...jhanvi di its fr u...love u lots...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

He stood in the balcony recollecting his moments spend with her...she his life...her smile jst use to take away his breath...no matter hw much he shouted at her...he was not able to forget her or stop loving her...she ruled his heart still n will continue to do so...his first love n his last love...he still misses her a lot...he closed his eyes fr a moment...his confession...their dance...she standing up fr him...their sangeet...their close moments...their wedding day...he shouting n insulting her...swara's marriage...truth revelation n finally that moment that horrific moment flashed before his eyes...he quickly opened his eyes being terrified...his eyes started welling up with tears...he held him responsible fr all the happenings...

he felt a hand on his shoulders n it was his brother...sanskaar...


SA- laksh legal formalities puri ho chuki hein n now u both r officially divorced...lucky jo kuch bhi hua hein un sab mein tumhari koi galthi nahi hein...sab kuch toh mene aur ragini ne kiya tha aur uska nateeja tum dono ko sehna pad raha hein...

L-nahi bhai sab meri galthi hein...meine hi shona ke upar vishwas nahi kiya...me...ine(he was literally crying...n was at loss of words...sanskaar held him n laksh cried his heart out)

SA-laksh voh theek ho jayegi...πŸ˜ƒ

FB(after truth revelation ragini started convincing everybody with her tears...not able to take it anymore sanskaar brought a CD n started playing it...ragini went numb with shock...it was her video where she talks to the watchmen abt her plan n the other one had the video where she put salt in her food...laksh was dumbfounded...he couldn't believe his eyes...the girl which he trusted turned out to be a cheapster...he was extremely angry by now...he slapped ragini thrice...following suit was Annapurna...DP called the gadodias n dida to MM...dadi n shekhar were hell shocked n both of them slapped ragini...he started her justification...n shekhar slapped her once mr n dadi herself told ragini to divorce laksh...everybody's attention was on swara...sanskaar himself revealed abt the their marriagee being fake...laksh was literally at the verge of crying...he moved towards swara...swara turned n ran to her room)

SA- lucky jao uske paas...

laksh ran to her room...she was crying so badly n was packing her bags...

L-swara...😭
S-laksh mujhe kuch der akela chodo pls...tum chale jao😭
L- swara mujhe tum se baath karna hein...pls swara ek baar mere taraf dekho pls...😭

S- kya haasil kar loge baath karke...
L-SHONA PLS AESA MATH BOLON...MUJHE PATHA HEIN I DID A BIG MISTAKE...PLS GIVE ME A CHANCE...😭

S-(SHE STARTED CRYING AGAIN)kab koi fayda nahi hein laksh...mein jaa rahi hoon mumbai...kolkata ko chodke...is sheher ne mujhe dhuk ke alawa aur kuch nahi diya laksh...

L-shona tum aese mujhe chodke nahi jaa sakthi...😭

S-tum hamesha mere saath ho...mere dil mein ...lekin ab humare beech voh bharosa ka dhaaga nahi raha...ab is rishte ka kya fayda...😭😭😭

(she took her bags n started to leave lucky ran behind her...everyone tried to stop her but she payed no heed to their pleas...ragini came to laksh with tears...he pushed her aside...swara walked along the road tears forming in her eyes...she remembered all her moments with lucky...tears were blinding her now...n a crashing noise...)

S- LAKSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!(swara was hit by a car)

L- SWARAAA!!!!!!

(HE RAN TO HER N HELD HER IN HIS ARMS...)
L-shona aakhe kholo pls...shona...aakhe kholo...😭😭😭

(everybody reached their...swara was taken to hospital...)
one week passed n swara has not opened her eyes...AP send laksh to change n cm he refused earlier but then went back to home...

...FB...ends...

laksh was now sitting beside swara...doctor came n informed him that swara's condition will worsen if she doesn't open her eyes in another 24 hrs...

he held her hands near his heart n told her:
L-SHONA...tum mujhe chodke nahi jaa sakthi...am telling u...without swara...there is no laksh...swara my heart only beats fr u tum nahi toh mein nahi...aakhe kholo swara...tumhare lucky bula raha hein...

(swara moved her fingers a little...LAKSH JUMPED IN JOY N CALLED THE DOCTORS...doctors examined her n told that she will be alright n is jst weak n have to take proper rest...)
she opened her eyes...laksh's happiness knew no bounds...she hugged her like it was the end...)

S-laksh...chodo mein abhi puri tarah theek nahi hui...😳baath mein pyaar dikhana apna...πŸ˜†

L- chup karo tum...ek tho meri jaan nikal di aur ab hug karne bhi nahi de rahi ho...πŸ˜†πŸ˜† anti romantic...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
S-dumbo chup karo...tumhe romance ka sujtha hein humesha...puri zindagi padi hein abhi...😳😳
L-acha...phir mujhe chod ke kyu jaarahi thi tum...πŸ˜‰
S-laksh mujhe maaf kar do...meine socha tha ki tum mere bina khush rahoge...lekin phir mujhe realize hogaya tha ki yeh possible nahi hein...mein vaapis aane vaali thi tab hi voh accident ho gaya...😭

laksh mujhe patha hein ki meine apna pyaar ka izhaar kabhi kiya nahi tumse...tumhare alawa meine sabko apne pyaar ke baare mein bataya tha...πŸ˜†
laksh tumhe yaad hein meri bday waali raath...us din meine sach mein confess kiya tha tumse...us din hi mujhe apne pyaar ka realization hua...😭laksh mein tumse sach mein bohut zyada pyaar kathi hoon...khud se bhi zyada...I LOVE U MR DUMBO...😳😳😳

L-😲SAY IT AGAIN...πŸ˜†
S- IDIOT I LOVE U...PURI ZINDAGI TUMHARE SATTH BITHANA CHAHTHI HOON MEIN...😳😳

L- shona am sry that i didn't trust...i will love u tooo fr ever...jab thak hein jaan mein tumse pyaar kartha rahoonga...😳😳😳

they were lost in each other...swara hugged laksh like it was the end...he cupped her face n kissed her forehead...n then their lips met n they were lost in their own world...after so many months they were at peace now...happy n content being together...😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hope u guys will like it...πŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh my chotu πŸ€— beautiful os yaar ⭐️⭐️i loved it... finally hamari swalak ek ho gayi hai
i am loving it... kash aise hi show mein bhi ho jaathe tho!! chodo... i love this os 😳😳😳
shona finally bol gayi " i love u laksh" 😳⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jhanvibella

oh my chotu πŸ€— beautiful os yaar ⭐️⭐️i loved it... finally hamari swalak ek ho gayi hai

i am loving it... kash aise hi show mein bhi ho jaathe tho!! chodo... i love this os 😳😳😳
shona finally bol gayi " i love u laksh" 😳⭐️



thanx di...😳
chalo aapko apna gift pasand tho aya...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: abshcool



thanx di...😳
chalo aapko apna gift pasand tho aya...πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ


definitely!! will any one not like a beautiful gift like this ?😳😳

love u yaar πŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it yaar ...u wrote very beautifully :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: soniadutta

Loved it yaar ...u wrote very beautifully :)



thanx di...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The guilt, the love, their true love for each other...It makes me nostalgic
every-time I read it 😳.

Each bit is perfect and shows their love, their yearning for each other.

Reminds me of why we cherish them as couples, why they are so perfect for
each other..😳

Shru love, brought back them memories..Really well written. β­οΈπŸ‘

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: etoile_lumiere

The guilt, the love, their true love for each other...It makes me nostalgic
every-time I read it 😳.

Each bit is perfect and shows their love, their yearning for each other.

Reminds me of why we cherish them as couples, why they are so perfect for
each other..😳

Shru love, brought back them memories..Really well written. β­οΈπŸ‘



THANK U SOPHIE DI...πŸ€—
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shruti this was awesome fantastic fantabulous πŸ‘πŸ‘
Swara ka accident 😲
And when she came back to sense SwaLak ki cute cute nok jhoks πŸ˜†β€οΈ

inna pyaara tha ye ❀️
Loved it ❀️

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