SWALAK & SWASAN SS ' MERI ZINDAGI TUM HI HO ❤️ part7,8 upd

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SWALAK & SWASAN SS - MERI ZINDAGI TUM HI HO <3

Hi peeps am here again to torture u guys with my writing. :D hope u ll like it. The SS that am writing is similar to the current track. This one deals with the part where laksh will come to know the truth and how he will react. The ending will have abt whether swara and laksh will unite together or not. The story will move forward in the point of view of swara, laksh and sanskaar.

This is purely fictional and entirely my pov.

So I wish u guys will like reading it. Since it is synonymous with the current track, this ss will contain both sanskaar and ragini too in the story other than swalak.

The sequence starts from where swara will be accepted into MM after ragini tries to expose her fake marriage. They accept swara and sanskaar into the house as there are no proofs for ragini's sentence.


P.S thank u willi for the suggestion of name change 😃😛

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INDEX
PART1 - PG 1
PART2- PG 2
PART3 - PG 7
PART4 - PG 9
PART5 - PG 13
PART6 - PG 14
PART7&8 - PG 19
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Part-1

LAKSH'S THOUGHTS:

Laksh is neither able to console himself nor control his anger which has been erupting inside him ever since he has known abt swara and sanskaar marriage. How much ever he tried himself to accept the truth that he has married someone else and not swara, the thought daggered his heart like a spear and breaking the broken heart into even more pieces. He was angry on both swara and sanskaar. He just couldn't understand how swara could do this to him. She clearly stated in the video which she had sent to him on that unfortunate day, that she liked her freedom more than anything and that was the reason why she didn't want to become the daughter-in-law of this household. But now she has married a person none other than his brother. This totally made no sense. He was becoming blind with anger such that he didn't want to listen to anything that she would tell him. Even though he spouts words to hurt her, he never means anything from his heart. It is just that he is not able to accept her betrayal.

Tears rolled down his eyes. He couldn't stop himself from laughing at his situation. He never thought there would be a day like this in his life. He didn't know whether he will be able to trust anyone else in his life anymore. He was so clueless that he didn't know when he would be mentally prepared for moving ahead in his life forgetting swara's betrayal or may be never. He felt sorry for ragini. He married her because of his anger because he felt that he was responsible for all the bad turns in her life. He wanted to save her life and in the process he has killed himself from within. He would definitely give her all the respect he has to give her as a wife but not sure whether he will ever give her a place in his heart. That place was always for the one he loved from the bottom of his heart. But she had betrayed him. The pain was so deep that he couldn't forget swara just like that, or move in his life like swara has moved on with his brother. He was using ragini to take his anger out on swara. Even during his fight with sanskaar, he couldn't mouth out the fact that he was fighting because he couldn't see her with his brother and instead he had lied abt sanskaar talking bad abt ragini. He was right now pathetic. He saw himself in the mirror.

"kya yaar, lucky, lagta hai mein abhi lucky nahi hoon. Sab kuch ulta ho gaya hai meri Zindagi mein. Meri pyaar ne mujhe dhoka diya hai. Aur mein apni Zindagi mein aage bhi nahi chal paa raha hoon ya peeche bhi hat paa raha hoon."

The moonlight made its way into the room. This distracted his attention

So he and swara will be in the same house again. But in a different way. When he saw her his blood boiled. His eyes followed her and only her no matter who was with him. He was right now in the state where he couldn't live the life he had to choose or accept the truth which everyone are asking him to accept or just escape from this very place so that he could be free from all the emotional turmoil he is in due to seeing swara with his brother. He vehemently hoped that she would go from this house but not.

He gazed at the moon. There was time when he gazed at the moon whenever he was reminded of her. He would see her face in moon. Now also it was the same for him. But he hated it. he in frustration turned swiftly which resulted in the fall of the flower pot in his balcony. He pacified after it fell as he saw ragini sleeping inside the room. He went inside the room. The clock stuck one. Still he was unable to sleep. This has been the norm for the past many days. He has become the sleepless ghost. No matter how much ever he tried to sleep he couldn't, in the end he would doze out of tiredness for an hour or two. Today his headache was eating his head due to sleeplessness. He took out the sleeping pills from his packet. He held the tab in his hand. He could sense ragini ruffling in her sleep. He didn't want her to know that he was taking tablet to sleep. He didn't want to hurt her. So he went out of the room noiselessly and went down the stairs to the kitchen. He sat down on the dining table and slipped the tab down his throat. He sat there for a few minutes and before he could know he fell asleep under the tab's influence. He slumped in the table he was sitting.

***

Sanskaar's room:

Sanskaar and swara are in a conversation.

Sans: "swara, we have to be careful hereafter, so that we don't get caught by ragini anymore."

Swara: "haan sanskaar. Par mujhe pata nahi, mein aage kya karoon. I didn't think we would get exposed by ragini instead of the reverse. Anyway thank god, everything is all right now."

Sans: "we have to achieve what we want to as soon as possible, because this ragini might do something or else to expose us again. So it's better we plan fast to bring her truth out."

Swara nodded her head. The day's incidents were flashing inside her mind.

Her parents had been so much disappointed with her. Their words were still echoing inside her ears. She had told the truth but with no proof. No one was ready to believe her.

Somi: "swara, don't go in the wrong path for justice. I don't want ragini's marriage to be broken because of u. whatever has happened has happened. Just leave it."

Shekhar: "u will never redeem swara. U r the reason why your parents are separated today. I don't want to hear anymore accusations abt ragini from u. Don't try to create havoc in ragini's life. I will never forgive u if anything happens like that."

She was so immersed in her thoughts.

Sanskaar was asking swara something but she was not responding. He could sense that she was affected by the whole drama which had happened today. He had done all he could when she was about get out of the house. He wanted to help her all he could. He couldn't see her suffer. After all he was also one of the reasons, why she is in this state. He was just staring at her. The rattling of the windows shook their attentions back to ground. Swara just smiled at him and turned towards the bed.

Swara: "sanskaar, we have to start our plan tom, so that ragini's truth will get exposed as soon as possible. I don't want to lie for a long time. I wish this ends soon." And stifled her cough.

She coughed a little.

Sanskaar searched for the water jug but to his dismay it was empty. He offered to go down to the kitchen to fetch water.

Swara: "no problem sanskaar. I will go and get water. U must be very tired. Go to sleep and I will be back after some time" and walked towards the exit of the room with the jug.


HOPE U GUYS LIKE IT 😳😳 do leave ur comments

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I loved it dear 😳 very well written 👏⭐️ upload the next part soon 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preet_12

I loved it dear 😳 very well written 👏⭐️ upload the next part soon 😳


thank u preet 😳😳 will upload it soon 😃😃 but today itself😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: jhanvibella


thank u preet 😳😳 will upload it soon 😃😃 but today itself😛

Yay great 😳😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I really loved it very much ,pls continue next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: soniadutta

I really loved it very much ,pls continue next part soon


thank u soni 😳 sure
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its simply superb yar...👏👏
Loved it...😳😳
Continue soon...😊
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wow its lovely 👏👏👏 plz update the nxt part soon

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