SWALAK & SWASAN SS ' MERI ZINDAGI TUM HI HO ❤️ part7,8 upd - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Di it's awesome...loved it...update soon...

Well done👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asha122

Its simply superb yar...👏👏

Loved it...😳😳
Continue soon...😊


thank u so much asha 😳😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: bushra2222

wow its lovely 👏👏👏 plz update the nxt part soon


thank u bushu 😳😳 will update it today 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: abshcool

Di it's awesome...loved it...update soon...


Well done👏


chotu thank u 😳😳 will update in another 5 mins okay!! just going through it 😛😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Part-2

SWARA'S MINDVOICE:

She wanted to unite her parents at all costs. She couldn't bear to see them separated because of ragini's deeds. She would unite them and had to. That was the only reason why she was living such a big lie. It didn't matter if she would have to suffer during the process. Her only goal right now was to unite her parents. As she walked into the corridor, she could see the lights were on in the kitchen and someone was sitting in the dining table. She was puzzled as of who would be awake at this time as it was 1'oclock in the morning. She came down the stairs. She figured out that it was none other than laksh. She stopped in her tracks. She didn't want to run into him at this time. Her heart started beating fast and she saw him falling asleep on the table. She couldn't stop her tears. She could sense how much laksh was suffering by this whole matter, for him to fall asleep on the dining table at this time and not in his room. She never wanted to hurt anyone through her fake marriage but she was hurting laksh. She was standing behind the pillar so that laksh wouldn't notice her till he fell asleep totally.

Bgm: judaai...

She was feeling the same pain he was feeling. She understood his pain of betrayal as she also suffered that becoz of ragini but she couldn't do anything for it. She had dreamt abt entering this house as his wife but right now both of their lives have been turned upside down. She somewhat felt that she was the reason for his life being like this. So she wanted to disappear out of here after she would sort out her parents' relationship so that he would move ahead in his life with ragini. She wanted him to move on so that he would be happy. But... and her tears were flowing uncontrollably. She can't go back to his life even if she wanted. He was someone else husband now and that someone was none other than her sister. She can never do the same what ragini did.

She realized that she couldn't stand there forever. She had come down to take water. She saw that laksh had drifted into deep sleep. She went past him and filled the jug with water. When she turned to leave she could see a smile on his face. Her heart stopped for a moment seeing his face. He was someone whom she had loved more than she could ever imagine, and still loves him. Even though everything happened so fast, she had been in so much love with him, which she never expressed to him. Anyways, there wouldn't be any more chances to express her love to him.

She moved closer to him and found a tablet cover near him. She took it and guessed it what it might be. She was aching a lot more. She couldn't take it. And when she saw his face she could see tear on the edge of his eye and the same time a smile, his charming one (which she always had loved to see on him), on his face. The helplessness of the situation was getting to her. She couldn't comfort him even if she wanted to. She thought it would be better she left the place. Cauz she was on guard of her feelings so that no one would ever try to figure out what she was exactly feeling. If someone would see her now, they would figure out that she is still in love with him, by her face itself.

She found that laksh might be feeling cold and brought a blanket from her room and covered him with that. No matter what she couldn't stop herself from caring for him. When she turned to leave, laksh caught her hand. Her heart stopped for a moment. But when she saw that he was asleep she let out a sigh of relief. Even in his sleep he was holding her hand unknowingly.

"chandariya jheeni re jheeni

chandariya jheeni re jheeni

aakhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni

yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni..."

She took her hand out of his grasp with tears in her eyes, remembering their old good days.

***

Sanskaar couldn't see swara inside the room. He was concerned abt her. It had been a long time that she went down. He decided to check on her. When he came out of the room, he searched if she was near the room anywhere. But he couldn't see her. At that time the lights of the kitchen caught his eyes. He could see someone standing there. After his eyes got adjusted to the darkness, he could figure out that it was swara hovering over something. When she moved, he could see that she had been covering the blanket over laksh. He could feel that swara still loved laksh as before. He looked upon both of them.

Ragini had come out of her room in search of laksh and saw swara and laksh together down in the kitchen. She felt anger and helplessness at the same time. She was determined to send swara out of the house as soon as possible. She didn't want laksh and her marriage to be in trouble. She couldn't afford to lose him again. He was hers and will be always. For that, she would do anything. She couldn't even stand the sight of swara near laksh.

Sanskaar and ragini were looking upon swara and laksh from upstairs.


to be continued... 😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank u sans 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Loved it di😳😳
Great beginning👏

Plz update soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Shanaia

Loved it di😳😳

Great beginning👏

Plz update soon😃


thank u shona 😳😳 have updated the part-2 check it out 😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Jhanvi di love u fr this...such a superb ss...brilliantly written...😳😳😳.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: abshcool

Jhanvi di love u fr this...such a superb ss...brilliantly written...😳😳😳.


thank u chotu 🤗 love ya too 😳😳

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