Ragini SS 'Jurm, Sazaa aur Hakikat' [updated] part 6-page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Initially this was an OS...but since many members here want it to be continued, i am converting it into a short story. Thank u guys for all the appreciation...will come with Part 2 soon!

PART 1
So its the day when Swara and Sanskar have reached the final conclusion of their plan to expose Ragini.
Everybody has got ready to go out for a pooja...but there is something going on in Sanskar and Swara's mind.
Swara: Now or never. Either today i'll expose Ragini or I'll leave her and never look back.
Sanskar: Yes! we have a full proof plan and i am sure today we will win.

(Swara and Sanskar managed to convince the whole Maheshwari family for the one and the only chance without Ragini's knowledge and the Maheshwaris decided to become a part of their plan...Sanskar totally focussing on Sujata so that she doesnt spoil their plan)

DP: Swara aur Sanskar...yeh pehli aur aakhri baar h (this is the first and the last time i m allowing)
Sujata: Parrr Bhaisaaa
AP: Sujataaa!
Sujata: jiji mai to bas!!!

(Everybody hides in their respective places, Ragini who had gone out to the temple has now returned...coming downstairs she notices Swara standing dressed up in the same red saari which she wore on the day of her marriage with Lakshya)

Ragini (R): Swara...what happened? Where is everyone?
Swara (S) : Nothing Ragini...bas woh din yaad aa...gaya...the day when you pushed me into that river...by the way everybody has gone...i told them i'll come with my bholi-bhali sister.
R (with a red face): What the heck Swara...what do u mean???
S: What do i mean you really dont know???oh!!!poor u!!! i'll make u remember my li'l sis...dont worry!!
R(all shocked): So u are blackmailing me!
S: NO! i want to do the same...parr tumhari tarah neeeche nahi gir sakti.
R: humne kuchhh galat ni kiya.
S; haan tumne kuchh galat nahi kiya...bas u tried to kill ur sister and separated ur parents...isme galat toh kuchh b nahi h!! hai na!
R: chup raho...humne apne maa papa ko alag nahi kiya...hum tumhe nuksaan nahi pahuchana chahate the..
S: wah!...wow...sharam nahi aati tumhe...kitni aasaani se jhoot bolyi ho!
R: no i did nothing wrong!
S: yes u did!
R: nooonooo
S:yes...you are the one giving soo much pain to the family...baba, ma, even Lakshya...
R: NO!
S: yes...you did...you dont deserve to be loved!
R: no...no...no..no..no..
S:YESSS!
R: no..nooo
(Everybody is shocked on seeing their confrontation...suddenly, there is a loud voice...YES! I DID IT, Ragini confessed it while breaking down)
Ragini looks at Swara...Pushes her...Swara falls down...Ragini runs upstairs towards the exit crying)
S: Ragini you cannot run from the truth...i want to know what made you so selfish that u did not even think of Baba and Maa...Ragini STOP
(Swara was lying down...could not stand...hr ankle got sprained she is searching something to stop Ragini...suddenly her hand touches something wooden...she pickes it up and throws towards Ragini to stop her)
S(while throwing the wooden think towards Ragini): RAGINI...STOP!
(Ragini turns back..the wooden thing touches her...'KHACH' a sound could be heard...everything silent...suddenly...a voice is heard...RAAAGIIINIII...All blood around...Sanskar comes running toward Ragini who is about to fall down from the staircase...Lakshya comes and gets hold of Ragini...Swara all shocked...falls down...realising...the wooden thing was nothing but a knife with a wooden handle...Swara shouts...Ragini!)

All Silent...the family members come running towards Ragini...Swara comes running towards Ragini...Ragini looks at Swara...she smiles...and closes her eyes...Swara hugs her)

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Part 2 - Page 3
Part 3 - Page 6
Part4 - Page 7
Part 5 - Page 8
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Posted: 9 years ago
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pheunli what is this os yar ??? is swara killed ragini?? idk it should be really gone reverse for sure if ragini knows swara got proof against her then she will kill swara but never regret for her mistake but u portrayed swara as murderer?? this is really silly !! anyway good job yar
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice yaar pheunli
loved the confrontation scene...but plzz continue na
one more part
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Originally posted by: SONAL30

nice yaar pheunli

loved the confrontation scene...but plzz continue na
one more part


Thanks Sonal..😊
You want me to continue...aww!!!.thats so kind of you...but can OS have parts??? If yes...then i'll work on it and update it with a second part.
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Originally posted by: azira07

pheunli what is this os yar ??? is swara killed ragini?? idk it should be really gone reverse for sure if ragini knows swara got proof against her then she will kill swara but never regret for her mistake but u portrayed swara as murderer?? this is really silly !! anyway good job yar


Oops!!
I know for Swara fans its a bit heart breaking...but this is something unexpected...and even interesting...
and thanks for appreciating!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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galti se mar diya? uffo! kyun? isse toh jan bujhke marna chahiye tha. lol but anyways. well written pheunli.
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Originally posted by: tejaswiniwenham

galti se mar diya? uffo! kyun? isse toh jan bujhke marna chahiye tha. lol but anyways. well written pheunli.


😆
woh actually...swara dil ki bahut achhi hai na toh jaan boojhkar to maar hi nahi payegi...isiliye galti se hi marwaana pada...😆
well, thank you for appreciating teju di.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one... is there any chance of continuation? 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice one phenuli
u have written it out well yaar!! ( thumbs up)
towards the end I thought ragz would commit suicide but the twist was totally unexpected!! but u have done a good job 😃
it would be great if u would continue or write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

Nice one... is there any chance of continuation? 😳


Aww!! thank u! thank u!😊
Yes ofcourse...if OS can have parts...i can come up with an interesting second part.😃

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