Ragini SS 'Jurm, Sazaa aur Hakikat' [updated] part 6-page 9 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 2
Ragini is rushed to the hospital. She is taken to Operation theatre. Sanskar completes the formalities. As he turns he sees inspector Roy coming...he thinks to himself as to who would've informed the police. He stops Inspector Roy...and asks him to overlook this case and somehow cover it. Inspector Roy agrees and walks out of the hospital.

Outside the operation theatre...Lakshya is all shocked, cannot believe that Ragini could've done this...he is fighting with his emotions.
On the other side Swara is not able to believe that she has done this...she is still..just then Sanskar arrives...

Sanskar (Sk): Swara
(Swara gives no reply...still under shock)
Sk: Swara
No rely
Sanskar shakes Swara...Swara comes back to her senses
Swara(S): Ragini...Ragini...How is she?
Sk: Swara...she is in the operation theatre...dont worry...everything will be fine.
S: nahi Sanskar...maine...maine...apni behen ko!!...mai nahi karna chahti thi...pata nahi..pata nahi..kaise ho gaya..ye sab!!! vo meri behen hai...bahut pyar karti hun uss se..
Sk: Relax Swara...and tumne kuchh jaan boojh k nahi kiya...just relax..

Swara watches Lakshya sitting on one side...she steps towards him.
Just then the Bose and the Gadodias arrive.

Dadi: kahan h...kahan h mahri laado! K hua usse...(Shekhar, shomi, dida all look on)
Sujata: Arrey kaki..ya Bangalan ne humari Ragini ko...
Dadi all shocked!
AP: Sujata..chup karo!
Dadi: ab k chup karo Annapoornaji...agar mahri laado ne kuchh hua to mai Maheshwari khandaan ne na chhodoongi.

shomi goes to Swara..
Shomi(Sh): Shona..yeh sab???
Swara narrates everything to Shomi and breakes down.
Dida comes and consoles Swara.

Shekhar standing on one side is shocked..

Just then doctor comes out of the operation theatre.
Doc: there has been significant blood loss and we need blood.
Shomi stands up...'i and Ragini have the same blood group' she says

shekhar looks at her.

shomi goes with the doctor.

after 1 hour long surgery doctor comes out and announces that the operation has been successful but we need to wait for the next 12 hours...if she doesnt come out of the unconcious state in the next 12 hours then...

Shekhar (shk): meri Ragini itna neeche gir jaaegi...mujhe vishwaas nahi ho rha.

just then a voice is heard...'VISHWAAS...Vishwaas to mujhe b nahi ho raha' ...saying this Lakshya leaves...all lost in his own world...remembering how he married Ragini and how she was with him...he is not able to believe that Ragini was the mastermind in separating him and Swara.

In the hospital the nurse says that only one family member is allowed to stayback at night.
Dadi shouts...'i'll stay with my laado'

Anapoorna and Sujata greet dadi before leaving...the Mheshwaris leave the hospital.
Sanskar gets worried about Lakshaya. He meets the doctor before leaving.

dadi taunts swara, shomi and dida as they are leaving.

Ragini is shifted to the ward and Dadi looks on at her with teary eyes...'Thaare ko kuchh naa hoga Laado' she says...
the nurse asks Dadi to sit outside the room.


Just then 3 men enter the hospital one in a black suit and other two in normal t-shirt and trousers...one of them brings the ward boy to the man wearing the black suit...this man was addressed as 'boss' by the other two.
first man: Boss here is the ward boy.
wardboy: no i wont do this...
The Boss: Shows him money...and gives him some...
Wardboy nodes...'thik hai...samajh gaya' he says

the wardboy goes to dadi and asks her to go to the canteen as the area where she was sitting was to get cleaned...dadi hesitates...and says...'no i cant leave my laado alone'
the wardboy says...'arrey madamji...hospital se aapki laado kahan jaaegi'
Dadi: thik hai...ab tu zyaada na bol, parr yeh canteen hai kaha...???
Wardboy: groundfloor

Dadi goes to the lift inorder to go to the canteen...no body else is oon that floor...PIN DROP SILENCE!!!!
The boss enters...tak!tak!tak!
He is foloowes by the two men...he opens the door of Ragini's room...'yeh ladki kisi b haal mei bachni nahi chahiya' he says and orders those boys...the boys nod.

just next to the bed in which Ragini is lying unconcious there is a big window with no grills...
The boss..open ups the window... The two men pick up Ragini one fom the arm's amd the other her legs...head towards the window and throw her out of the window...DHAP! a sound could be heard...in that silence. The boss smiles...the two men wipe off their sweat and look at their boss!!!!



Edited by Pheunli - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh my!! phenuli this part is totally interesting yaar!! hooked to it!! update the next part soon!!! waiting...
u have given an unexpected end! mystery prevails as of who is dying to kill her!!
update soon yaar 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
interesting yar update next part dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
U write so well yar ..
Loved the 2 parts..i am hooked to it..
Update the next part soonish
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Very interesting ,do update next part too soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
omg very interesting nxt part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
interesting.plz continue.
vaise in this story couple will be ragya or sangini
as u r sangini fan
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Wow pheunli
Beautifully written
But who was the boss n he killed ragini...but why
Continue soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: jhanvibella

oh my!! phenuli this part is totally interesting yaar!! hooked to it!! update the next part soon!!! waiting...
u have given an unexpected end! mystery prevails as of who is dying to kill her!!
update soon yaar 😉


😊
I have started working on the next part...will try to update it ASAP!
Want to make it all the more interesting!😉😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: azira07

interesting yar update next part dear


Just started working on the next part...will try to update ASAP!😃

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